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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 15
Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very Good, i didn't mention this earlier but I like the part about Irina being able to control her emotion around Jasper. Very good. Very original.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
Okay, A Little Tooo Much Em and Rose. But Otherwise Very, Very good. I think it's just cuz I don't really like Rose.
Author's Response: I don't really like her either.
Author's Response: I don't really like her either.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 11
Very Good, Very Emotional.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Very Good
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ohh, didn't expect that. Good Job.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
Very good, I love Emmett Too.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very good. I think it's Edward, because I think Alice would dismantle Jasper and Bella if it was Jasper.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing EVERY chapter!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very good, I like that Jasper and Bella Can be friends.
Author's Response: I always thought that if they could, they would be good friends.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very Good.
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very good, I just Love Jasper.
Author's Response: He is my favorite character to write. I find it easy to get into his head.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very Good, I was Pretty Sure it was Jasper. Very good.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewiing. I hope you like it more as you continue. My writing in the beginning was a little raw...as the story progressed, I think it got better.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very good, I'm Thinking Jasper.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Epilogue
A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Thank you for giving me another story I am able to read, read and read again!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Epilogue
I've said it before, but I'll say it again: hate to see this 'un end! LOVED the ending. Very nicely done! Made me all happy and giggly ;).
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continued support. Please add me to your favorite author's list so you can can updates from my upcoming story!!!
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Epilogue
The last few chapters have been the best I've read since I closed the cover on BD.
No, not just the last chapter but the whole story. I am surely adding you to my list of favs.
It was very interesting to get Esme's POV in the epilogue. You found the gentleness that is essentially Esme.
Thanks again for a great story and I'm looking foward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: My beta was the one that gave me the idea to use Esme's POV...I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the support and the review!
Reviewer: bookwyrm (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Epilogue
Very cute.. I love it when authors delve into Bella's relationships with Emmett and Jasper, and you're one of the best. THANKS!
Author's Response: The relationship between Bella/Jasper never (in my opinion) got resolved. He was always uncomfortable around her...even after she had changed. I felt they deserved a friendship. Thanks for reviewing my story...I appreciate the love!
Reviewer: nessiecullenser (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Epilogue
I LOVED IT!! I have been waiting for this story to have a happy ending. I love this piece, and I cannot wait to read the new one that you are creating. Keep up the fabulous work!! :)
~NessieCullenSR~
Author's Response: I can't imagine a story not having a happy ending! Thanks for reviewing my story.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Epilogue
Awww yay! The various POV's were wonderful in this one, they gave so much insight and I LOVED Emmett and his snarky little "I can hear yoooouuuu!!!" remarks haha. And Alice's excitement, I wanted to jump up and down when she realized Bella was there. Her excitement was contagious! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your awesome review!!! I am sad to see this story end, but I hope you will join me and read my new AH one to come out soon!
Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Epilogue
I have loved this story from the beging and has and always will be one of my favorites. Although I am sad to see it end it is better to end it while on top. I would have hated for it to drag and become rediculous like other stories I have read. I loved that last chapter and really loved how you brought Bella and Jasper in to a special friendship/ sibling relationship. The way you ended it with Bella and Edward was just sweet and special.
Thank you for sharring you wonderful writing talent.
Author's Response: I really could have gone on forever, but like you, I hate it when stories do that. The conflict was resolved...time to wrap it up. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Epilogue
Aw, I loved this story, even though I was terrible with reviews (sorry!). Sorry to see it end, but I'm excited about your next story!
Author's Response: At least you reviewed the last chapter! Thanks for taking the time to read my story.
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yeah, I guessed Jasper. Mostly from your banner though. :) But, what is he thinking, getting attracted to another woman? What about Alice?! Good story so far!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Epilogue
That was great. I love a happy ending!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Epilogue
loved your story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks
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