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Reviewer: smily81 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Set
I can't wait to hear from Bella
EMily
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Set
Damn Edward is a friggin badass when he's pissed huh? As much as it hurts my heart that he is in anguish, I think it is good for him. I am proud of him for being honorable and not just looking out for his own hurt. Hr could have taken advantage of the witch in the jungle, but he did the noble thing. I am proud of him for that. I am curious as to whom she has been spending her time with. I think that Dimetri was only baiting Edward just to see what he is made of. Edward is learning about himself too, I just don't think is quite aware of it yet. I am anxious, as always, for the next chapter.
Reviewer: angelgirl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Set
Great chapter. Love the confrontation between Edward and Demetri. Jungle girl was an interesting side trip. Keep up the good work. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Set
This is all such a unique plot I don't know left from right. Bella needs to get a move on and Alice needs a vision so Edward can have a break.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Set
Thank god neither of them had their memories erased. How terrible would that have been?! I was prepared to be so angry with you.
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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Set
Gather the searchers! Maybe I was distracted, but this chapter was a little hard to follow in relation to your others. Still, I love your story.
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Set
ugh.....................
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Set
i want bella's pov please next chapter
i hate demetri
loved it but i didn't like the jkungle girl she creepped me out
well until next time
Reviewer: trollmuffin (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Set
Who did Bella spend the last week with? I want to know! Please tell me Aro did not get to her first!!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Set
Thanks for updating ^^
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Set
A part of me kinda hope Bella hasn't been a good girl! Sometimes it is necessairy to stray a little bit from our path to figure out who we really are.
Although I would not be a fan of E/D slash, I would love me some Demetri! Yum, is so right!! Hehe, blood drinking wouldn't bother me a bit if I could get in on that action!
A part of me feels sorry for Eddie, but he kinda needs to struggle and wade thru his own shit. Bella deserves better! Thanks for writing! You're awesome for sharing with us!
Author's Response: Haha ... Part of ME hopes so too!!! And I have control of the keyboard *wicked laugh* ;) Thanks xox
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Set
I can't wait to see what she has been up to! Up date soon!
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Set
great chap
cant wait for more.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Set
OKAY WOW - THAT WAS GOOD LOVE THE LITTLE WITCH DR. - GOD DEMETRI AN ASS
I WONDER WHO THIS MAN IS THAT BELLA HAS BEEN WITH?
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!
TAMMY
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Set
Build away! Bella needs some Demetri lovings before she forgives Edward. He's not a virgin...so she shouldn't give him that.
Reviewer: bekk (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Set
ohmygodohmygodohmygod. you so have to keep writing, have read this all in one day, couldnt stop its so addictive. please keep going. i cant wait to see bella and edward together again.
Author's Response: Omg to hear you say that is so amazing. I do that to fics and beg for the same thing... So think I can be one of those fics to someone makes me freak right out!!! Thank you!!! Air xox
Reviewer: jessica_1_22 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Set
Well, Lethia is quite an interesting creature isn't she. I was worried for a minute that she was going to take away his memories. I like her though, she's very powerful.
Oh how I love Demitri. He's such an arrogant ass which for some reason makes him ridiculously hot. I think he and Edward could be friends if they weren't so alike. Two arrogant asses together will just fight, obviously. I wonder what Demitri is going to reveal about himself. I want to know his story so bad.
Bella where are you? What have you been doing with this strange man? We've been without you for so long. Please come back soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter, you are amazing. Find her soon!!
Reviewer: Alby Mangroves (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Unforgiven
*Kneeling, hands clasped in prayer* Oh please oh please!
I wish I may, I wish I might
Read some Demetri/Edward slash tonight!
C'mon baby, I know you want to! LOL
Reviewer: clauricorn1210 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Set
Wow! I just started this story and I really enjoy it!
I absolutely cannot believe that Edward slept with Tanya. What a moron!
It's probably wrong of me, but I'm hoping that Bella went to find someone from her past to have sex with. I mean she has waited over 40 years and Edward obviously didn't wait. Maybe it's just my vengeful nature, but I think Edward needs to suffer. I'm kind of envisioning Edward being tortured with images of Bella sleeping with someone else!
Ok enough of my vengeful rant. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Omg it's funny you say that.... Back in the days of writing ch7 I wrote a violent, lemony bit of deliciousness purely as an outtake and alternate u. Totally to satisfy my own... Erm... Needs. But it's gull of thunder, lightening, heavy saturating rain, and Bella totally mentally accosting Ed then Ed slamming her against a tree.... It was very theraputic to write *snicker*
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Set
Scary witch doctor vampire in Brazil! I wasn't sure if she really would take away his memories.
Demetri...I'm still trying to get a handle on him and figure out why he sent Edward to Brazil, and what his motives are.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: slwortham (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Set
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: pepper_cucumber (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Set
i hope Bella finds another vamp lover who is better than Edward and move on with her eternal life. Edward just needs to let go, he is so foolish... tsk tsk tsk..
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Set
His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.
But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.
Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.
To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.
He'll find her. He has to.
HE HAS TO.
Author's Response: Holy shit! That was beautiful. It gave me the chills!!! I wanna use that as my freaking story description.. X I'm not even kidding!!! Omg I LOVE you!!!
Author's Response: Holy shit! That was beautiful. It gave me the chills!!! I wanna use that as my freaking story description.. X I'm not even kidding!!! Omg I LOVE you!!!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Set
Lethia was a very interesting creation. Orginal ideas are so hard to come by in the fanfic world. Well done:)
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!! Xox
Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Set
For the love of all the is holy, please let them find her soon.
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