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Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 06:20 PM · On: A Clean Break
I'm still here! ...and this was well worth the wait.
The meadow scene through Bella's eyes, human and vampire, was mesmerizing. She was finally able to understand what Edward sacrificed to be wiith her, the fear that ran through him every second he was with her. Very few authors touch that part of their story and you did it beautifully.
glad to see you back!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 09:21 PM · On: A Clean Break
intresting chatper !
Reviewer: Mgd0107 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 05:58 PM · On: A Clean Break
Love this story!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 09:05 AM · On: A Clean Break
Glad to see that this story is back on track. Please keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 11:45 AM · On: A Clean Break
Honestly this needs editing so bad but the basis of the story Is good. Its too much freegin detail and not enough action. And then there's the Alice factor so unexplained and just plain strange. You explain some things till they are in the ground and others not enough. Please dont go back in time to epov Just go forward!
Author's Response: Editing....? This story is quite heavily beta'd, so....
As for the details and/or lack thereof: details are kinda just my style. It's the way all of my stories are written. The things that are vague or glossed over are done so intentionally and will factor in later.
Air
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 08:38 AM · On: A Clean Break
Still here. Wonderful update. I love your command of the english language. Writing is your gift. You create a world and the rest of us follow you there without effort.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!!
And thanks fit sticking with me.
Xox
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 07:13 AM · On: A Clean Break
A truly beautiful chapter!!!! You have done a great job with it! I an really looking forward to your next chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Hugs, Air xox
Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 04:45 AM · On: A Clean Break
I'm am so happy to see another chapter to the story, I really enjoy it! I have been wondering what was to become of E&B and how they fixed their relationship. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!! =)
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 09:39 PM · On: A Clean Break
Please give me something real. Edward has been spouting words again. There has been lame ass apologies sort of, but nothing concrete. He has always gotten away with murder and this is starting to look like Bella is walking back to him. What the hell!
I don't have any idea what I want from this story anymore but Edward being an ass isn't one of them.
Author's Response: Well...I personally don't think this Edward is 'being an ass' (the Tanya thing, ahem, nothwithstanding).
However, I FULLY agree with you that canon Ed gets away with entirely too much. This Bella, while true to canon, while demand much more out of him. It begins next chapter. She A) let's him have it, & B) gets an explanation for.....everything.
Thanks!
Xox
Reviewer: Dreamerbyday (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Go
I have really loved that you have not rushed things, as it really adds to your story. With that said, I am glad to see Bella and Edward making progress. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: amazed by twilight (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Go
Hey Air,
Was just wondering when the next chapter was up i loveee this story and i have just read it through for the 4th time since march, hope your ok, eagerly awaiting next chapter.
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 10:42 AM · On: Go
Amazingly, Beautifully written. I'm still following this story, and i'm so glad you are continuing it.
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Departed
gone
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 11:35 PM · On: No
wow...u really are losing me here
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Set
i love this story but this is getting annoying
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Immortal
i do love you already...i am sitting on the edge of my seat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 09:12 PM · On: Alone
shit...i freaking love this story and now i'm gonna be up all night!~!!!!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Unforgiven
wow...how have i never found this story????? i love it so far
Reviewer: brittanyrayne (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 10:46 PM · On: Go
okay, i have read all of this in two days, i have been reading pretty much none stop, except when i need to take care of important things, other than that i have been glued to your story! i dont know the last time you updated a chapter, hopefully you are still writting this and will have another chapter really soon.....i'm really anxios now, i have to know whats next!! it's killing me!! how often do you post chapters? just curious so i'll know when more is available....i know you have a life too, but seriously keep writting, as much as possible please!! :)
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Go
love love love! can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Departed
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I am sad but happy I have more to read! Love the story so far. Now on to chapter 19 :-)
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 04:48 AM · On: Help Me
Have not been on twilighted.net in over a year so the last chapter I had read of your story was chapter 6 or 7. I am glad you are still updating and am reading like a mad woman when I get the chance. Am likeing the twist and that regardless of Edwards intentions Bella was just meant to be immortal; trouble found her even with him out of the picture. Cant wait to read all your updates and find out what happens. I am really hoping Edward finds Bella and that eventually she can forgive him for not being straight forward with her and stay with the Cullens. It has been a really long time and he had no clue she was still around or a Vampire. Cut the guy some slack! LOL
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Bella
Nope, won't be stopping after 16 either. Onto chapter 17. So, will you clean my apartment while I catch up on the sleep I lost while reading your story?
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:11 PM · On: Options
When I started chapter 13, I told myself it would be the last chapter. I spoke the same words to myself halfway through chapter 14. I promised that I would stop reading at the end of chapter 15. I guess I'll just have to try really, really hard to stop at the end of chapter 16 because there's no way I can end my night's reading here. That's just how good it is. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 10:35 PM · On: No
Who the heck did she move on with? Alistair?
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