Oh. This was so very sad.

Oh. My. God. Okay, I'm trying. Okay, yes. I trust you. But man, you're making it tough! I was actually wondering how she was feeding throughout this whole time with Viktor, whether she was denying herself or maybe he was feeding her, since she didn't bother herself. I do believe Edward can get past this though. After all, the two terrible things he thinks she's done, being with someone else and feeding from human blood, he's done, too.

The hard part now begins for me. I've caught up with you and now I have to wait with everyone else. I'm not sure how I'm going to do that, but I guess I'll have to! I had to stop reading earlier to go out to dinner and all I could think about was getting back and reading more! You have definitely created a monster here. An addicted, crazed monster who must have MORE! SOON!! (Pretty please?) I love this story. Plain and simple. And I cannot WAIT to read more.

      Debbie

Author's Response: I think I may be in love with you. Seriously. ;)

Finally! I can't even write more than this. I HAVE to go read more!

     Debbie

Please, PLEASE don't stop being long-winded on our accounts! It's what makes your story so addicting--the more you write, the more I want!

This chapter was definitely heart-wrenching, and made us finally understand why Demetri was willing to help Edward in his search. It makes me wonder about the stories of all of the other Vulturri guards, though, of course, those are stories for other days. Right now, I want to know what's going to happen next. Can't WAIT to hear what happens next!

Oh to the next chapter. This story had me up half the night and I could hardly wait to read more today. Hate the thought of it ending.

      Debbie

so how much do I love this story?  My daughter called me while I was reading the most current chapter after having a bad interview and all I could think about was how I could talk her down quickly and get off the damn phone so I could get back to reading!  hee, hee, hee.

I love the EPOV - looking into his mind is indeed a wondrous, frustating, experience.  I don't know whether to comfort him or beat the sh*t out of him.  (This is my first comment and I'm not sure what the language rules are here so I don't mean to be offensive).  I only hope he learns some lessons after all this futile and unnecessary Bella - and yes, Edward - suffering. 

hoping there is at least an ETA for the next chapter.  This story has just drawn me in.  Thanks for sharing it!!

 

 

Author's Response: A) I don't vet offended. Have I not "shitfuckdamn" 'd at all in my A/N's? Hmm... That doesn't sound like me...must rectify. Lmao. Secondly. I legit lol'd at the story about your daughter calling. I know all too well what that is like. I have slugged off many a friend and family member because Tattward, Stutterward, or SECRETward are beckoning me. Like a true addict. ETA on next chappy is within a week. It's been sent off to beta number one. The ball is rolling. I'm so glad you are enjoying so much, I can't tell you what it means to me. THANK YOU!!! Hearts, Air xox

oh no!

i trust you...i love the intensity and detail of this chapter...i do hope however that you lead the story line towards a more positive, albeit a hardship for Edward and Bella, direction...i can't wait to see how Edward attempts to fix his major bone-headed screw-up...please post soon can't wait for long!!

Author's Response: That's precisely where it is headed. Hard won but from here out it is the path of recovery. Thanks for all the support and patience, this damn story is just so hard to write.... But it's coming soon. xox

They should just light a match to Tanya and get it over with.

I just found your story and it is really pulling me in. Can't wait for the big meeting.

Author's Response: Yay!!! Enjoy. And also...preemptively...I'm sorry. This story should come with a wussperv rating of like 3% or something. But there will be an HEA...eventually. Also, if the angst gets you down I have another light lovestory on FFN called Secret Sex. It's a guaranteed smile! lol. Which you will need after ACE *hides* Thanks for the review. Enjoy! xox

Author's Response: Yay!!! Enjoy. And also...preemptively...I'm sorry. This story should come with a wussperv rating of like 3% or something. But there will be an HEA...eventually. Also, if the angst gets you down I have another light lovestory on FFN called Secret Sex. It's a guaranteed smile! lol. Which you will need after ACE *hides* Thanks for the review. Enjoy! xox

Well crap, of all the things I was ecxpecting, tht wasn't one of them.

So we build good ol Eddie boy up just to tear him down huh?  That was pretty bad...I'm not gonna lie.  I will say that I can see the possibilities though, and I do trust you as I'm sure most of the other readers will as well!  I know how attached any writer gets to their characters, and when they get hurt it's out of necessity, not want!  Can't wait for the next chapter...can I hope for a little relief after this one???

Author's Response: More like. You want her? First you need to fully appreciate how much you have wounded her. He does. He will repent. They have a long road. They've started down it already. The next chapter shows this. Trust. Thank you so much!!! xox

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

you can't leave it there, that's just evil.

P.S you have to earn trust. you can do this with the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Well...we shall see... xox

i trust you i just hate that it takes so long for chapters to be updated

lol

 

Author's Response: I know. I'm so sorry. I am working on this...my other fic Secret Sex updates 1-2 times a week. ACE is heavy/ labourous to write properly. Thanks for the love and patience! xox