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Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Restraint
Aww I do love a good reunion scene! And that was a good reunion scene!! Can't wait to see what happens if she goes home with him... Please have a nice soppy blub fest, I like those!!
Reviewer: SuperS (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Restraint
Just discovered this story and reading through the last 10 reviews or so, I completely echo their sentiments! Such a powerful story and your style of writing their stream of consciousness is truly amazing. Love hearing both points of view overlapping slightly to turn everything you felt with one character on its head. Can't wait to read how Bella interacts with the rest of the family. Keep it up :D bring on the next update!
Author's Response: Honestly, you guys just... I. have. no. words.
I'll try tho...
These reviews BLOW ME AWAY... I have always written but never shared and... I dunno, Im just so moved by the love, ya know? OMG YOU ARE ALL THER BEST!
As for the story... its coming... Tons more is written, nothing is set in stone, everything is so exciting (Im a B&E fan too afterall) and I CANT WAIT to hear what everyone thinks...
Stay tuned and keep reviewing, it brings me to tears, literally...
Air
xox
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Restraint
Just re-read this chapter again and I can't tell you how much I love this story! I love that Bella is already changed, has control of her gift and is now an equal to Edward. I can't wait for the reactions and interaction with the rest of the Cullens (especially Rosalie and Alice), and I love that you put Bella in a Chanel dress (blue of course) and La Boutin boots! We girls love the fashion details and now that Bella is a vamp she seems to have much better taste! I think we all want more physical and intimate moments between Edward and Bella, that is what most of us missed from the original and your writing is so beautiful I can't wait to see what you come up with. If I could articulate what I really mean, I would be writing my own stories - but since I have you I can just sit here and enjoy! Oh, and bug you for more. Will you be posting more soon? I am now begging because I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo, much for your support! I love these reviews, they totally make my day (er... week).
Bella in Chanel... obv the girl needed a few style make-overs from the long khaki skirt *cringe* lol...
I hope chapter 6 lives up to everyones expectations, i LOVE these characters too, so.... hopefully we all want the same things for them ;) pretty sure we do!
LOVE YOU!
Air
xox
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Restraint
Looking forward to the rest :o)
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Restraint
Well, I want a happy reunion with the Cullen family, but more than that I want to see Edward and Bella finally be able to take full advantage of all their thoughts and feelings and the true love that has been supressed and denied all those years! I want lemons! This is so awesome!
Reviewer: twi-addict (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Trembling
Love it! Not sure what I was expecting, but I can totally see Edwards viewpoint. Can't wait to see what Bella has to say next. I am new to Twilighted so not sure how I get notices of the updates, but please let me know if you will be updating soon because I am totally hooked! Why is 45 years the length of time they've been apart? I want more!
Reviewer: AngelByEve (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Restraint
Awe, I like this story. I hope to read more soon. :)
Reviewer: phillimom (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Unforgiven
OMG!! I love this story! You did an amazing job! I can't wait to read chapter 6! I am so excited!!!
Reviewer: seasons54 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Restraint
oh...OMG....bring it...bring it.....this gets BBEETTEERR and BETTER,,,,woohoo,,,come on girl...bring it on.....jumping in my chair waiting for more...love it.....MORE...SOOON...pleeeeeease!!
Author's Response: Im jumping in my chair for more too..... lol!
HAHAHA I LOVE that I can get you all worked up... hahaha... Yes! :)
Its coming, trust me, I WILL NEVER abandon this story. I cant, its fighting for complete cerebral domination and WINNING over real life so.... there is no abandoning ;)
Will update very soon, promise!
Air
xox
Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Restraint
Damn girl!
Update!
Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Restraint
Oh, gorgeous! The way you show their minds is brilliant, the stream of conciousness is perfect. I cannot wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response: Awwwwe.... thanks! I love hearing that people think I connect well with the characters thoughts, thats what its all about really. Stay tuned, theres sooooo much m ore to come ;)
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xox
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Restraint
nooooo...not the end yet. I just happened to come upon this story and I am in love. I am loving this story so much. Great writing!!!!!!! I love the Edward/Bella stuff, it is perfect! I love how they were vulnerable(sp?) but you didn't have them just jump into the sex(which I hope is coming eventually..lol)
just wonderful!!!!!!!!!! :)
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Restraint
Just found your story and love it... you did a wonderful job getting at their connection. I can't wait to see what happens when they get home!!! ;)
Reviewer: chrissy_tigger (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Restraint
omg omg omg
keep writing i need to know more :D
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Restraint
OMG I want more of this story! More I say :o)
Fantastic!
Reviewer: thekatester (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Restraint
I absolutely cannot express just how much I adore this story.
Going against my usual aversion to AUs (far too often, they are a bit OOC for my tastes!), I decided to read this one two nights ago, as the plot intrigued me, and boy am I glad that I did! I've thought about it so much over the past 24 hours that I just had to reread it this morning! I've completely fallen in love with it.
Your characterization is amazing, and you've really embodied everything I love about these two characters. And I'm definitely gonna agree with Izzy Grace when I say that I just can't seem to get enough of this almost desperate, pleading Edward. Many writers simply can't quite get it right, but you've made him just so very believable and lovable!
And of course, I can't hide how very much I look forward to the promised "HDS" as well!
Can't wait for Chapter Six!
Author's Response: UNGH!
I just cannot tell you how nice it is to wake up to a review like that! You have made my day... a near impossible feat given that I woke to discover we are out of coffee, a true tragedy in my house!!!
I LOVE that you love Edward's angst so much. He is my fave to write and his thoughts come the most natural to me.... *ignoring whatver that implies about my own tortured mental state*
Your reviews TRULY keep me going and I am DYING to see everyones reactions to CH6.... which is in the validation queue.
Thank you sososososo much and keep reading and letting me know what you think. I'm an overachiever who aims to please ;)
Air
xox
Reviewer: Betrayed-With-A-Kiss (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Restraint
I am absolutely dying for the next chapter!
Reviewer: maliciousmandy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Restraint
Much Better Bella's thoughts, great interaction between the two - very near the back and forth type connection from SM waiting for HDS perhaps right then and there as they succumb to each other and then she afterwards feel that uncertain sorta "morning after" heh heh
Home - the reactions of the Cullen's the re-acquaintencing and then some sub plot becoming main plot - - - oooh - - - can't wait :)
but first - the HDS!!!
Author's Response: HDS = HOT. DIRTY. SEX. For those wondering ;) A term I coined in reference to a me -to- Rob comment while filming here in my hometown.... but Eddie can borrow it till Rob comes back, as long as he can handle it ;)
And oh boy... patience.... HDS will make a wellworththewait appearance very shortly :)
And yeah, more Bella- less Erin hey? Thanks ;)
Air
xox
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Restraint
Man I was so caught up in this story, I almost had a menatl breakdown when i got to the end of this chapter. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! I ned more of pleading desperate Edward.
Reviewer: Mama jules (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Unforgiven
i feel his pain, his dispair and his utter helplessness,cant wait for more
Reviewer: reckybecki (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Restraint
I love this story. You had me bawling as much as Edward and Bella would be if they were human. Can't wait to see how Bella reacts to Edwards explanation. If Bella goes back to Edward, will Jennifer and Collin join the Cullens?
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Restraint
OMG how extroadinary, and their both Vampires now, and they can hear each others thoughts, omg omg omg. Yesh wat shall happen when they get home OOOOH!!!
Fabulous work so far
Gem
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Restraint
Great story. Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: kschelte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Restraint
Dear GOD please write more...This story is unlike any I have read to date and I love every minute of it!! You are truly a gifted writer...Please continue soon :)
Reviewer: greytmari (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Unforgiven
"I, on the other hand, have never been able to move on fully, which we all knew would be one of the consequences of our departure. Vampires mate for life; it’s what we do and we're good at it. And God help anyone that gets in the way of this mating. I got in my own way. I've yet to forgive myself."
My absolute Favorite line in the story.....It sums up Edward so perfectly!!!I have read this entire story about six times and it gets better each and every time!!! Chapter 6, Chapter 6, Chapter 6!!!!!!!'
Marilee in NC
Author's Response: working on 6 every night.... wont rest slash post until it is perfect.... you guys deserve nothing but the best ;)
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