OMG...you VIXEN DEVIL...whatcha doin to us...bring it on...more girl

oh what the hell??? come on!!!!! I know it is part of the story and I am sure I will love every part of it..but please tell me you will update soon. I really didn't know how I would feel about this story, but I love it sooooooo much, like I can't even tell you how amazing your writing is

Author's Response:

AWE!  Thanks!  Im glad you are enjoying it! Dont worry, I'm a B&E fan too (the biggest) So all will sort itself out, promise.

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no, no, no, no, no!!! I don't think I can handle Tanya in this story, I was seroulsy hoping Edward would have waited for Bella and the drama could be placed elsewear :( I am just sad now

No not Tanya!

OH! MY! GOD! How did I miss that it was Tanya storming in to the room!?! (LOL) Please-- Edward can not be with Tanya!! Oh! How is Bella going to take it? She is going to be VERY upset! Will there be a fight? You can't just leave it like that!!!! I don't think I can wait patiently! I feel like Alice before a really big shopping spree! :) Now you have to update very soon! PLEASE.

Oh for the love of all that is holy, please let Edward still be a virgin.  I cannot stomach him loving Bella so abundantly and giving himself to another.  He would have stayed true to his heart, right?  No matter what.   Ugh, I have anxiety.  Please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

A virgin... really????  Uhm.... that would be a really shitty ETERNITY, no? I mean, technically, he thought he walked away from Bella FOREVER, right.... Ok now I am just giving away too much of chpt 7.  You'll just have to keep reading ;)

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I just found your story & I love it!  The way you describe the feelings Bella & Edward have for each other is perfect.  I have to admit that I got caught up in the two of them & didn't see Tanya coming!  WOW - what a shock!

I feel bad for poor, lovesick Bella.  She seems a little weak - taking Edward back right away and not even putting up fight after realizing that he lied to her and ruined the past 45 years of her "life." And now he is presumably with Tanya!?!  How much abuse can one girl take?  I hope you have something planned to put these two lovebirds on an even playing field.  Actually, I would like to see her character finally have the upper hand! 

Please update soon!  I can't wait to see what you have planned next!

Author's Response:

OMG!  I cannot wait for you to read chapter 7 based on this review... you are going to be over the moon!

And I dont actually see it as Bella "taking him back right away..."  Heres how I see it... Shes kinda just compartmentalizing the "we need to talk and I plan on kicking your ass you annoying selfish asswipe..." section of her mind and focusing momentarily on the "goddamn he is HOT and I want to feel every inch of him, now!...."

Lots of time for talk AFTER youre all satisfied with shaking legs and a goofy grin... everythings better that way.... ;)

 

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Great chapter---But---WHAT THE HELL?????

Edward is with someone (Tanya) you got to be kidding? Everyone is happy to see her, Her and Edward are in the throws of passion and then Fuck!!!!!

Update soon before I lose my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Did that miserable son of a BITCH marry Tanya?

I hate Assward! Kick him to hell and back, Bella! Beat him to death!

Did Edward decide to have Tanya as his mate???? You are such a cock-blocker!!!

Author's Response:

NOT ME! *gasp* Its her... shes the bloody cock-blocker lmao! I am all for... er... cock... well, you get it... :)

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Ok you can not leave us hanging for a long period of time. tanya. obviously. Update like now?

oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no! WHAT DID EDWARD DO?

I loved this chapter. You write very well. Although I've got a tip how you can make it even better I think that they should say some things out loud. 'Cause then it clarifies where their relationship stands. It's not very Edward for him to just act and not talk (although I can understand how it could change him if he hasn'tseen her for such a long time). I hopw you don't take this personally it was just a suggestion. I hope your not mad.

Loved the makeout session where he can hear her mind. One of his biggest wishes fulfilled.

Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response:

Awn!  Youre sweet, of course I dont take offense!  I take no offense to basically anythin, ever ;)

And you are right that it is a bit ooc for Eddie to act sans long elaborate explinations first, but.... I kinda wrote this chapter off the assumption that hes a bit ooc in the sense that hes still so caught off guard and his brain is reeling.  I dunno.... believe me, theres  A LOT of explanations later.... Stay tuned, and thanks for the imput, I adore it!

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Oh my, I can't believe you are leaving us hanging there...well, I actually can because that's an awesome chapter ending, but still!  I think the masses my be pissed off if he's been with Tanya!!!!  And poor Bella, if that is Tanya she is going to be so hurt!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Im glad you likes the chapter... its my personal fave thus far...

As for the masses... ya know, I think you may be right... pardon me while I go seek a good hiding place... WITH WiFi ;)

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