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Reviewer: pink ink (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Love Me

My god, I hate and despise this Edward. It's not Tanya's faultt (although I always hate that wench).

 

This is the only fiction where my greatest hope is for Bella to find someone else and Edward to rot in his own nasty juices for eternity. Good things coming? Like Tanya ripping Edward to pieces for screwing over her and Bella?



Author's Response:

HEHEHEHEHEEHEHE Im sorry, is it wrong of me to chuckle at your review.  Im glad that you can feel so strongly over it, thats a good sign.  It means im connecting with you over something.  Thats awesome.  And I agree... go out and get yours B.  Fuck Edward.  Keep reading...

;)

xox

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Love Me

Okay, I have been fearful of this chapter since the last one..... petrified of the whole Tanya thing.  Reading Edward's POV has made me back away from the ledge...  I am still devastated over Edward's actions, just hurt adn betrayed- I definite sympathize with Bella.  Is it wrong that I want Bella to have sex, too, to get even with him????  He has to work for it now....  Her heart is closed.  Even better, indifferent.  Done with him.  Now she is released of his hold on her... God, I feel so affected by this story.  I love it.  Simply LOVE IT!!!



Author's Response:

OMG I love how passionate you are abou tthis lil story.  Thats AWESOME!  And no it isnt bad that you want Bella to go out and get her some... ar eyou on Twitter?  Do you know Moon and UC and LTT "THATS NORMAL" <------------ if not than none of that makes sense.... sorry lmao. 

Basically, yeah, this is what we all want.  Bella will run and she will find whatever she needs to put herself back together, yet again.  Poor B.

I love that you love it so much!! Thank you!!

Air

xox

Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Love Me

I haven't been that engrossed in a story in a long time!!! I really hope you continue with it. I WANT MORE!!!! =)



Author's Response:

ask and you shall receive...

xox



Author's Response:

ask and you shall receive...

xox

Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Love Me

yay more please :)

 

Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Love Me

erinbatt, welcome back. I can't even start to describe how happy I was when I saw update for ACE! What, did I wait a million years or what ;-) I'm just kidding, I'm sure you had your reasons. What I'm saying is I missed and looked forward to reading your story. At some point, it got deleted from my favorites and I paniced. Somehow, it came back and then the update came! So, I'm one happy human being!

 

I have a hundred and fifty eigth questions for the chapter! I'm all confused but I think it was your intention. So, you got me. :)

First, when Edward confessed that he had sex with Tanya, I felt like Bella. I didn't want to hear the rest. I didn't want to hear a word of explanation. I was angry, upset and disappointed. Especially after Bella's sentences regarding her days after he left her. GOD, I would harm Edward, if I could. The way you put words on Bella's mouth was totally awsome and gave me goose bumps.

About how sorry Tanya is, she is very welcome to go to hell! I know, if I gave in, I would see her as a heart broken over reaction woman but I don't care.

And about Edward. I really wonder what the hell he was thingking... Grrrr!!! He has alot to explain if/when he gets another chance. Bella has every right to refuse to listen to him. Go girl! (I love how strong your Bella is. I love how she stands for herself. YAY!!!)

Wow!!! That's all I think. Last but not least, I missed you, I missed ACE. And I deeply hope that I don't have to miss you that much in the future ;-)



Author's Response:

Oh, baby *whines* I feel like I shoud come over there and give you a big hug.  Im sorry.  Firstly, you most certainly will not wait that long again, it just took that long to hammer out the plot details with my beta so that we can all be happy in the future.

Second... Thanks you SO much for saying that I found Bella's voice so thoroughly... that means SO much to me.  I feel like I struggle eternally with BPOV's... I am just a brooding, self-loathing EPOV at heart I guess.  So I re-write and edit BPOV's a trillion times before submission.  Thats what makes it so awesome to hear someone say that I nailed BPOV and even gave you goosbumps.  WICKED!

And yeah, B is stronger in my story than in NM or some other ff's.... however... even the mighty fall, so...

Love you!

Air

xox

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Love Me

Seriously, how could Edward have had sex with Tanya????? It says at the end of the first chapter that vampires mate for life, and he CHOSE to mate with that HO Tanya?? It goes against everything Edward always stood for. It is fundamentally WRONG!

Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Love Me

Don't forgive him Bella! I wouldn't...I kind of want her to go out and get laid LOL

Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Love Me

Well I hate that you had your Edward fall into Tanya's clutches. Hope you will continue this story and not drop it.

Author's Response:

IM SORRY.. Drop what!?!?!?! Doooood.... do you understand that the last 2 mos.. thos I havent updated.. it is literally ALL I have been doing... you think I was joking in my A/N's? Hahaha.. I had some serious homeowrk that my beta (who is freaking amazing btw) had me working on.  I have breathed this story in and out for the last 6 weeks in between updates... there will be no dropping of any kind, you have my word!

Keep reading, now that the semantics are hammered out.. updates will be fast and furious.  Love you!

Air

xox

Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Love Me

I have been sooo waiting for this chapter! finally!

ahhhh! that being said- i was so pent up reading it, feeling everyone's anger and pain! loved it!

just please, please, please, please- update soon!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Love Me

I'm SO DAMN UPSET!!!!!!! TANYA NEEDS TO DIE!!!!! I don't think Edward can fix how badly he has burt Bella.. Honeslty, I am always a Bella/Edward girl; I just don't see how he could ever deserve her.. And Alice is an ass.. she could have prevented it by keeping Tanya away or warining Edward... I hate all the Cullens now... i am really crying for Bella now....Seriously, she deserves something good, not the stupid, selfish Cullens.............

 

This says it all "  Edward cast his eyes down in shame, his arms hung limp at his sides.  He swallowed thickly before admitting, “Yes.  I did.”..... “Did you have sex with Tanya after leaving me broken and alone in the woods…devastating me, my family, my friends and my entire human existence?”... “Bella...” Again he spoke with the same cautionary tone, but this time it had a hint of urgent desperation in it.  I had enough.  I roared at him.  “Yes,” he finally whispered in a very small voice...... “After everything I ever loved was stolen from me, not once, but twice?  Including my humanity!  And all for NOTHING!  All because of you and your family’s fleeting fucking presence in my life?  After all I went through because of you?  After that, Edward?  Then?”  Wow, that was really unfair of me.  Well, fuck fair. 



Author's Response:

WOW!  LOVE when you guys are this passionate.. lets me know that I did something right.  Like.. FUCK YEAH I got you that worked up....ME! hahahahaha

I agree.. stupid stupid selfish stupid Cullens... they dont realize it but thats how they act sometimes.. best intentions aside.  Kepp reading, i truly think you will love where this is going.

Air

xox

Reviewer: greytmari (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Love Me

I was so excited to see that you had updated and read every word on the edge of my seat!! You did NOT disappoint!! What a lovely and dramatic chapter in this, my favorite fan-fic of ALL times.  I am so glad you are back and please please, keep it coming because I was so grateful that E had not married Tanya that I gave a loud sigh of relief  Your story started me on this crazy/wonderful site and I must say it still is one of my MOST favorites. Congrats on almost 750 reviews so early. All of us are in invested in this amazing and well written love story and I am SO GLAD you are back with an update. Now I have all new worried for the characters but you are spot on. Don't leave us hanging girl, this is just too good!!!

Soon you will be in the TOP TEN most favorited stories!!!!

take care and keep on writing!!! I have missed talking to you but am so glad you are still writing!!

Marilee in NC

greytmari@yahoo.com



Author's Response:

AWWWWW!!! You are seriously the sweetest.  It was a long time.. sooo sorry about that.  it was all for the sake of a thrilling and dynamic plot.  So thats good lol. 

Im glad I could intro you to this amazing world that is FF.  GAH!  I love it!  Im honoured to have been your first and your fave!  And OMG could you imagine if I breached that Top Ten!?!?!? OMGOMGOMG that would be amazing!

Thanks again for all the support, keep it coming, keep reading... SIGN UP FOR TWITTER, and email me anytime :) Miss youre funny antecdotes.lmao

Air

xox

Reviewer: Abco2008 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Love Me

So glad to have you back!  Was thrilled to see that ACE was updated.  Great chapter, so many emotions!  Looking forward to the story moving forward as they search for Bella.  As for Tanya, what a bitch!  Silly Edward probably didn't think that his little roll in the hay with Tanya would come back to bite him - no pun intended (Hee hee).  I kind of feel that Bella may have slightly overreacted perhaps.  Still making my mind up on that one.  Thanks again.  Hopefully we won't have to wait too long for the next update. 

Reviewer: dallas alice (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Love Me

This is a terrific story. You really capture each character's voice.  I loved the way each character expressed their feelings towards Bella when Edward brought her home.  Emmett is so Emmett...the goofy grin and the bear hugs.  Alice going nuts over Bella's choice of clothes.  Jasper backing down from Bella in order to protect Alice.  And these are just the secondary characters.  Your descriptions of how both Edward and Bella are feeling are wonderful, so emotional.  These are two very damaged people and I truly felt the pain on both sides.  Of course, Edward was a complete moron for ever being with Tanya.  Does make for a good plot twist though!  Things can never go smoothly for these two. 

Looking forward to the hunt for Bella.  I'm glad it is a family affair.  REALLY looking forward to the confrontation, or should I say smack down, between Edward and Bella when they find her.

 

 



Author's Response:

I truly cant tell you how great it feels to read a review like that.  Just knowing that I tapped into the actual characters that well is so nice.  Thank you. 

Let the witch *er.. vamp* hunt begin...

xox

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Love Me

I know it's been a while since you last updated...but damn you really came back with a bang! Great chapter.

Reviewer: farmergirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Love Me

Tanya is a bitch. Why did he sleep with her? Are we going to have to wait forever for an update?

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Love Me

I'm so glad you're back!!! The chapter is amazing (and necessary!) I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

Reviewer: Kaitlin17 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Love Me

i loved this chapter!!! i can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Love Me

Will we get to know what their search discovers quickly??? I really like your story but too long in between makes me lonely for more.



Author's Response:

Awwww.. sad... dont be lonely.. it was a one time deal this huge space between updates.  I was just getting the plot nailed down... its kinda important. lol

xox

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Love Me

Oh goodness...Tanya? Really Edward? He really is an idiot...but a hott and wonderful idiot! lol

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Love Me

please update soon, i hope they find her soon.

Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Love Me

Nice....can you say angst!  OK, I am a little lost on the whole Tanya-Edward thing though.  Was it a effort to reconcil the covens????  I admit I am a little lost!  LOL!



Author's Response:

hahaha.. all of that my dear was stickly alluded to... you arent really *supoosed* to get it yet ;)

You will soon though, as each lil piece falls into place.

Stick with it, it will all start making sense very soon.

LOVES

Air

xox

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Love Me

Kill Tanya!! lol sorry....*mumbles*stupid...cunt...grrrr



Author's Response:

bwahahaha

xox

Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Love Me

I only wish that Alice hadn't stopped Edward from going after Tanya or even better had gone after Tanya herself! For someone who supposedly loved Bella as much as Edward,I totally thought Alice should have somehow reached out to Bella during the confrontation with Tanya especially when it became apparent Edward wasn't going to handle the situation well. They are going to have to hope for a miracle if they ever expect Bella to trust any of them again.

But WAY TO GO,Bella! I love how she finally told Edward how much he hurt her all those years ago and how much his present actions were hurting hernow. I always thought that was the one thing that New Moon was missing. Bella should have unloaded on Edward before she ever thought of taking him back.

Ecxellent chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm thinking Edward and the Cullens are gonna need a miracle if Bella's ever going to forgive them. Please Update Soon- Don't keep us waiting!

Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Love Me

I say fuck edward. 

bella needs to find herself a new vampire hottie and edward can watch in the wings while she MOVES on for a while.

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Love Me

Well dang, I'm glad you're back and continuing the story. Now Tanya still needs a beat down, either by Edward or Bella I don't care. Rose needs a good smack b/c she shouldn't have called Tanya in the first place. Edward needs a kick in the groin for not checking on Bella and not telling her the truth before he started freaking on her. Tanya has no right to speak and Esme should have told her so.

So glad you're back with us and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

hahahaahaha

xox

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