First off, I'm very sorry for not reviewing the previous two chapters but I just could not.stop.reading. Your writing is seriously addictive (addicting?)!  Also, you've piqued my curiosity over Jasper. Will Alice be making an appearance? The sex scene was H.O.T and I love the way you've let us into both Edward and Bella's heads. Both of them insecure, yet yearning. I hesitate to use the word but I actually find them both... adorable. *blushes*  Of course, Edward is adorable in a completely sexy, manly, scorchingly hot way. *nods* Oh how I loved the image of him opening the door, fresh from the shower...Mmm nummy. Oh and the inner monologues are killing me! LoL. Delicious. Can't wait for the next update!

I like it!  They both came to the uncomfortable realization that the other holds alot of power over them, and they sort of like it!  Can't wait for more!

I am so hooked already!  You've already produced complicated non-stereotype characters and it's only chapter 2.  I'm excited to read more! 

i love the story and cant wait for the next chapter oh and i am soooo glad you arent putting tanya in the story i can deal with jessica and lauren but i really hate tanya so thank you and again i cant wait for the next chapter

reading this has me wanting to find some severely damaged man for the sole purpose of fixing him and then having intense sex.

sick or what? =)

I Love This! Such a fantastic start - I'm already hooked! I can't wait to see what you have in store!

-Alyx

I totally love this! I love their inexplicable pull toward each other so I don't mind them jumping into bed together. Edward being possessive and irresistable, and actually caring about Bella, is exactly how I want him to be! and YAY for Emmett and Jasper coming to the rescue! I'm so glad you have most of the story planned out, I hope it gets updated frequently (who doesn't, really)!

I like it very much.... Edward sounds like a hottie..lok

Author's Response:

glad u like it. and Edward...sigh. that's really all i got...just...sigh.

 

thanks for reviewing

Love it!!! Want more.

Yes! Absolutely Yes! Who doesn't love a ripped Edward! I like that she's taking care of him for a change. Interesting idea for the story, I'm excited to read more!

Author's Response:

I'm glad u like it. One of the reasons I ran with plot out of like...the twenty or so i have is that it showed the most originality from what ppl are writing right now. There's a huge influx of domwards and darkwards running around. I figured i'd try to mix the two and see what I would get.

 

thanks for the review and hopefully i wont disapoint.

Lots and lots of love =) OOO and yes i agree, i do hate Tanya, that piano falling through the window was an awesome idea. =)

Hmmm seate-half-naked-aggressive Edward sounds really nice right about now...

are alice and rose going to make an appearance?

thanks again <3

Oh WOW!  This is an awesome story!  Your Edward is so sweaty, tough, caring, hot, sexy, possessive (which I think is a little hot in this story...).  And I love the idea of underground fighting.  It's so "bad boy"!  Can't tell you how thrilled I am that there will be no Tanya and really no Lauren or Jessica.  Can't stand the evil trinity!  I don't know what you where so upset about concerning this chapter.  I thought it was great.  It seemed to delve into their thoughts and feelings where they are both like..."Shit, we're moving fast; but, there is no choice!"  Looking forward to more!

Kathy M.

I hate fighting of any kind but I do love me some Edward!  Enjoying your story, thanks!