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Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Awesome update! A lot happened in this chapter: Bella moved in with Edward! And then got her ass handed to her by some douche! Loved all this... I'm begining to wonder how Bella feels about Edward's (sometimes violent) over-reactions. I wonder if that will be an issue they'll need to deal with in the future or if simply doesn't bother her. Can't wait for more!
-Alyx
Reviewer: In Awe Of Fire (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
That was a sweet, yet confusibg, chapter. Great job, though. Keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I really love this story because you absolutely surprise me with each chapter! Love your Edward and Bella-haven't seen a story out there like this!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I love their inner monologs and Bella's trauma-induced ramblings about why they haven't 'gotten loud' again! I think the story's moving at a really good pace [it's very IC of Edward to make sure Bella knows he wants more than just her body, although I'm feeling for Bella ;)] and thank you for the quick updates!
Reviewer: MilleVang (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Hi,
I really love your story, wish you'd finish next chapter right now. Anyways - great writing ;D
/ Mille
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
still wondering why bella was tackled.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I am loving this story! Post soon!
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I can't wait for the fight! I love this story!!
xx
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
Great chapter. All this talk of James has me worried. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Edward beating the shit out of that guy is sexy. But Edward taking care of Bella is even sexier. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! (I can't get over how much I love your story.)
Reviewer: magpye (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
This story is fricking fantabulous!!
I love Sweatward and his dirty, dirty mouth. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to the next installments.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Lol messed up Bella is funny. :D I can't wait for more. I'm interested on how the big fight is going to turn out. Plus the week before of training.
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
*shakes head* Bella's internal ramblings are... interesting. Because this is in her POV and she still doesn't have a clear idea what happened to her, so am I and it's pretty frustrating. Why did that guy tackle her? Who is he? What did Edward say? Things like that.
It's a pretty amazing chapter - and it just goes to show that despite how gruff Edward is, he's like a sweet grizzly bear. :) More, please!
Reviewer: AngstAddict (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Love the story but I gotta say I liked the old banner better. Didn't it have Cam on it? Yum...
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Awesome chapter. I was happy that Edward found out that Bella has no place and she's now staying with him. It's good that she's safe. It was funny when Bella was talking funny after her accident. Edward, Jasper and Emmett helping her through that was great. I loved it.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
I hate to say this I'm hooked on the story.... Loved the chapter it was good they are so good for each other,and I love you're edward and nella so out their love it.... Can not wait to read it threw edwards eye hoping..... See you next chapter (kym). I love review
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Who are the two ppl in the new banner? In RL i mean.
Reviewer: Milissa (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Fighting eddie's awesome
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
SQUEE!!!! for the update!!!
I love it. I love possessive Edward even if he can be alittle... overbearing at times? But he means well. And he was right, Bella needed a place to stay. And now she'll be safe.
Have I told you how much I freaking love this story? You know I do!!!!
Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Getting To Know You
OK, I really like the feeling of the story. Perhaps the first half was a bit long and could have been streamlined, but overall I like the cerebral "in-the-head" moments. My fave line phrase in the whole missle was
"I began to feel a little tension ease into me"
You might be wondering.... WTF? But, it's an awesome line. Something that probably just spat right out of your head, but it has so many implications and irony. The awesomeness of that line... ahhhh...
Anyways, enjoying tremendously. Keep it up.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
It's amazing how in only 4 chapters I'm already in love with this. Truly, this has got the promise to be REALLY SOMETHING. And that's got me grinning like a cheshire cat! WOO-HOO!
Reviewer: cooker87 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Converting Anger Into Love
Dang, I have never had angry sex, but I definately want some now:)
Reviewer: uscfbfan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Converting Anger Into Love
There are plenty of people who jump in the sack after knowing someone for twenty four hours - but if I had sex on legs opening the door halfway naked, I'd be all about it too (sad but true)
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
I love it!!
xx
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