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Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:42 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
Great chapter.. love the long of it.
Can you send Edward my way, my bday is coming up in a couple months.. i am sure my hubby won't mind.. hahaha
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Ahhh, just what I needed. Thank you for that.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Mi Casa, Su Casa
Wonderful - but when are they getting it on again. That was some good shit...
Reviewer: Spiritgoddess (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:11 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
Wonderful chapter as always! I honestly cannot wait for your next installment! Well Done! ;P
P>S> Long Chapters are the BOMB! Never be afraid that a chapter is too long...
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations
Enter James. I see jealous Edward coming out to play soon...
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Getting To Know You
I know absolutely nothing about fighting, so it was a stretch thinking I would get into this story, but you do this REALLY well. Great stuff here. Loving the story
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Converting Anger Into Love
I LOVE IT That was juicy fucking hot. More please.
Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:38 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
loved the lenght of the chapter, thanx for making it soo long :D
very well thought out and cant wait to read the next chapters :) xxxx
Reviewer: Pixiechick (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:26 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
I'm really enjoying this story. Your Bella and Edward are very compelling, I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Because You Needed Me
Great beginning - left me wanting more!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:51 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
Great chapter. Edward is so cute when he's scared. Glad the birthday thing worked out. Hope they can bot hopen up about their pasts soon. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:45 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
I enjoyed the long chapter...and the long A/N. (yes I read it all!)
I'm glad you mentioned that the whole "sexual control" thing will be addressed later on. I really do love your Edward and Bella, but there have been certain instances were Edward has become a little too "controlling" or "self-centered?" in the area of their love life. I'm not sure if I'm wording it right, but I'm scared that his need for control, coupled with his anger issues may cause a problem in the future, and I don't want Bella traumatized and Edward ready to kill himself due to guilt over losing control with her.
I'm really loving this story, keep up the awesome job :)
Reviewer: CordyGirl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:22 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
Long Chapters = yummy brownie goodness :D
Reviewer: gustaitis1 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:09 AM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
*smokes a cigarette* Yeah... it was good for me.
Seriously, though... fantastic, as usual! And long chapters TOTALLY make it worth the wait!
I can't wait until we get to the confessions stuff. We keep getting little hints, but I really want to know what's fucked Bella and Edward up so bad.
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
Wow... if going against the doctors orders was always so friggin' hot doctors wouldn't be able to pay people to listen to them!
Loved the way you brought Rose in - and TOTALLY loved E&B's make-up scene.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Free For All Fighting
Totally feelin' their frustration...
I kinda see where Eddie's comin' from but um... at the same time I would so understand Bella kickin his ass!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Reprecussions and Threats
YAY!!! Another great chapter!
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:05 AM · On: You Fall, I Fall, We All Fall Hard
Sometimes E & B make my teeth hurt too Emm! :P But they're just soo good together... like chocolate and caramel. mmm mmm mmm!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:24 AM · On: I Know/Down And Out
Wow, no denying the incredible hotness you call Fightward. Whoo! Love the way Bella stuck it to James too. She's a fiesty lil thing isn't she? Gotta love her.
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Oh No You Didn't
Wow. *fans self* That was awesome. Really dig your dirty talkin' Edward.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
Yay!!!This was awsome...Please update again soon..Ps.Thanks for the pineapple tip. ;D
Reviewer: angie54 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
i hope they stay togather it would be a shame to see them split up and i hope we learn about bella's past and see how he takes it
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
great chapter!! i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: JordanTaylorCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
this is a great story. i cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: JordanTaylorCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
this is a great story. i cant wait for the next chapter!
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