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Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:43 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

NoBlood - That was a mind blowing chapter. You F'n out did yourself! I was worried during his rage Bella would come out and witness it. I cried at work reading it. Oh holy hell that had to have f'n hard to write. The emotions that were there were so real I could feel her pain and disgust for herself when her body responded.

I was so glad when Fightward snapped back in to reality and realized that he was not being there for her. I heard the anguish in his thoughts. He did redeem himself by saying the right things once Fightward calmed down.

Who did he call... Hum I feel it is either ... Alice or Jazz. I am thinking Jazz, but could be Em. Sh*t I don't know. Please tell us soon. It really was one of the best in this story.

-meg

 

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:38 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Best Chapter yet.  It was worth the wait.  I am adicted to your story.  Please keep writting.  Update soon.  I need my fix. lol

Reviewer: daydreamer22688 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:57 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Fightward!!!!!!!!

 

YAY I love when he gets all protective and manly and ugh!!! Posessiveward...yum


Can't wait for more...just don't let Edward kill Phil and go to jail or anything...that would be sad

Reviewer: electrocityscape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Free For All Fighting

HAHA LOVE that move Bella just pulled. I really wish they would make this story into a movie. It would be aweeesome.

Reviewer: vampire101 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:47 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I love it! keep writing ducky!

Angst, betrayle, love,

you have it all!

awaiting the next chapter as well..

until next time!

 

~cerri

Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:39 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

It may have been a hard chapter to write, but you did a great job with it.  It seemed like the longest update between chapters of any story... ever.  But it was worth the wait.  My money's on Jasper being the one called.  But since he was the last mystery person at the end of a chapter... maybe Emmett?  Oh, well.  Another awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:38 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Great chapter. Definitely explained a lot of things. I could see that this would be a hard one to write.

Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:25 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

*hugs* that had to be a tremendously hard chapter to write.  Yes Edward didn't handle it well, but honestly I don't know most guys that would.  At least most of the men in my family would have reacted the same way before getting together a posse to string up the rat bastard that did it.

Lets just hope that since Bella's cracked that Boil of Pain open her fear can drain a bit and her and Edward can work more towards a future.

Reviewer: JESSABELLA (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:49 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

You are awesome!!! I love this story.  Update soon please.

Reviewer: electrocityscape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Winning, Deflections, and Declarations

EEP! I LOVE that you brought James into this. It also reminds me of Never Back Down, because the actor who plays James was in that too, so I can imagine him all hot and ready to throw down.

Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:27 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

he called jasper!

and oh my god that was so intense. you're amazing you know that,right? like really. This story could be its own. Like it doesn't even NEED to be a fanfiction. But then again i think one of the reason its so amazing is because its with the characters we all know will ALWAYS be in love. Idk. What i do know is: I love this story, and i NEED you to update soon =]

Reviewer: stormysarah (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:22 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I love your story!! Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: electrocityscape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Converting Anger Into Love

LOVE IT.

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:15 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Great chapter. I am glad she finally came clean to Edward about her past.

Reviewer: 1216 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:01 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

It's very sad what happened to Bella, but it 's even worse that it happens to so many kids in real life. Kids grow up thinking what happened to them was their fault. It's very tragic.

 

Great chapter. Finally hearing Bella's backstory and why she is so full of guilt. It's so sad!

Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:53 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

maybe a detective?

Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:44 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

oh damn!!

he's gonna take care of phil!!

Reviewer: SunkenTeethDrivenBlood (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:39 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

awesome chapter. i bet he called Jasper. i want to say Emmett but that seems like an obvious choice. :)

Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:26 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

hard chapter to read too - but Fightward, ah, he can still save me any day.  Who did he call???/

Reviewer: Loving It (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:55 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I don't know why but the idea of nasty Phil is really easy to accept, maybe it's because we never really got to know him in the books so for all we know he was a bad guy.

Good story but horrible chapter still i know it was neccessary. xx

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:26 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I've been anxiously awaiting this chapter!!  It was perfect!  Of course Edward flipped out--he has a temper and anger issues!  I'm so glad she told him though.  I thought it was going to be worse. 

I have no clue who he called but now he is going to seek revenge on Phil?  This could add a whole new aspect to this story.  Will Phil try to get Bella?  Will Bella be angry that Edward is trying to avenge her??

Awesome!!

Reviewer: angelbethy (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:05 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

That MUST have been hard to write.  You totally did it justice.  You made Bella's secret past realistic, and not over-the-top dramatic or angsty.  All the ways Phil made Bella feel responsible for what happened... you hit the right notes with this chapter.  I LOVE how in-character Edward's reaction is, and I love how the changes he's been going through since falling in love manifest themselves at the end.  Being able to calm himself down and see beyond his anger, and then to make Bella feel loved and safe in spite of his rage... just GUH.

 

With every chapter, I love this story more and more.

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:53 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Oh crap....I hope Edward knows that he mightgo to jail if he does something really stupid....Hopefully everything will work out.....Right?? Please update again very soon. ;D

Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:46 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

what a heart wrenching chapter...

very well done...

hope Edwards anger helps him kick James ass~!

 

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:37 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

we finally get to know what happened to bella!!!!!!!! great chapter! i cant wait to se ewhat edward does!  update soon please!!

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