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Reviewer: thejamster (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Converting Anger Into Love

I just found your story and really love it so far!  This is so weird because today was my 26th bday, so I nearly fell out of my chair when I read that Edward turned 26 too...! :)

Reviewer: Red_9415 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:09 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

You have done such an awesome job.......... there are no words. I love this story! You have orgestrated the plot so well. This Has to be #1 story to ever been written. Congratulations on such a fine story and PLEASE continue to write.

~A~

P.S. 10 is such an understatement of how high this should rate. :]

Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:17 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

WOW! This is a great chapter in that you portrayed sexual abuse in a very accurate light.  Many people think that molestation and rape is completely brutal...but what some don't realize is that even though it is not wanted...sexual stimulation (even to a small child) can be gratifying. It leaves the victim with great shame.  I spent a large portion of my life carrying that guilt and shame because of abuse I went through as a little girl.

Reviewer: dazzled101 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Getting To Know You

Good chappy =D

Reviewer: dazzled101 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Converting Anger Into Love

Don't be worried about the whole too soon thing cuz I loved it!! =D

Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:44 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

WOW that's almost all i can say. that has to be one of the most intense chapters i have ever read. i'm feeling so many different emotions right now its crazy. anger, heartbreak, love. update quick please!!

Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:36 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

That was a great chapter.  I loved it.  I loved how he reacted because that's what he knows.  I really loved it.

Reviewer: allira_k (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:44 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I read all of these chapters over the past three days (even sneaking some in at work...), and i have to say i think this story is underread and underappreciated.  It's fantastic and completely addictive, and definitely one of my favorite fanfics out of all that i've read! I was first skeptical about edward as some underground fighter, but it totally works here.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Not A Creature Was Stirring...

=] I love this story.

Reviewer: Haniyah (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:38 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Wow, fantastic chapter, well more like fantastic story! I love fightward!!

Please update soon, i am soo curious as to what will happen with Phil and the fight!

Ohh and i really like your writing style, you are very talented!

Reviewer: dazzled101 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Because You Needed Me

Can guys be pretty? Yes, yes they can, and he is so pretty. HAHA!!! I  LOVED THAT =D

only two guys can really b pretty Edward and Rob =) I love your story already

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:25 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Great chapter. Poor Bella. I'm glad Edward went back to her in the end and reassured her that he still loved her and wanted her to stay. Glad Bella finally told Edward about her past. Hope they can work through it now. Who did Edward call? Jasper? Or new character?

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: AnEventInTheMaking (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:48 AM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

brilliance.

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:38 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Good Lord.  I read your entire story to date in one sitting.  It was incredible.  You pack a lot of emotion into a story.  Things I love about your story:  LONG chapters, your characters' internal dialogues, your secondary characters, slow and steady plot development, giving us credit for being able to handle some complexity, emotion without sappiness, and lush eroticism (seriously, on that last point -- wow).  

Things I'm not so crazy about -- why is Edward so angry?  I feel like I've missed the explanation for his rage.  Was it one event?  IS he just a pissed-off person?  I get that he has issues, I just don't know why.  Perhaps it doesn't matter, but now that you've explained Bella's backstory, it seems like Edward's should be fleshed out a bit more.  Second, I'm skipping your Author's Notes.  You're telling me too much.  I love your story, and it's speaking for you just fine.  Don't give away the store, particularly before we've read the chapter.  And don't apologize in advance for a chapter.  I have yet to read a chapter for which you should be sorry.

I love your story unreservedly, and will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:29 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

i cried, the ENTIRE chapter. my eyes are still wet, that was so sad!

:(

poor bella. please update soon!

xx

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:58 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

YEEAHHH I love Edward..I've been reading this over on FF.net because, ya know, there were just way more chapters. I just really like how well you wrote this chapter so I needed to leave you some love. :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:30 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Fightward vs. the apartment.  Fightward wins.  Bella wins.  Phil, not so much.  So, does this really mean that Edward is going to become Vigilantward now?

Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:27 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

I think you did a really good job on this chapter. It sucks all the things that Phil did to Bella. I hope Edward does get him back and hopefully it does not cause him problems with the law... Maybe he could channel that anger when he fights James on New Year's.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: lovestinksyaya (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:17 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Wow... I love how you jumped back and forth.  I also like how it was told from Edward's point of view.  That made it more interesting. I think he is going to call Jasper because Jasper has connections.  My hat is off to you.  Good, good, amazing job.

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:25 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Gut wrenching.  I will bet that was very difficult to write.  I think you handled it well.  So did Edward, for Fightward.  THanks for writing.

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:49 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

This chapter should win an academy award or something! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm just hoping Edward doesn't get himself thrown in jail...

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:43 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

awwwww.. phil is a dick, and aww!! Poor Bella, go Edward!

Reviewer: electrocityscape (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:02 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

That was so fantastic, it actually sent CHILLS up my spine.

Reviewer: Angieb5 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:38 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

That was so beautiful and just as cathartic to read as I'm sure it was for Bella to tell him.

 

You did an amazing job! Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:06 PM · On: ...Not Even A Mouse

Whoa that was amazing! He didn't disappoint with his rage.

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