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Reviewer: xgemini6990x (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Amazing...as usual.
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
i love this story. so good.
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
You did an amazing job with this chapter...with the whole story actually!!
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
This story is possibly my favourite, and i've read quite a few! You should be so proud that you've written such a great story! I also want to say that I'm impressed you can write all the fighting scenes. I can barely read some bits, they make me feel queasy. I always did have a very active imagination. I'm so pumped for the epilogue, while at the same time being sad that this is ending. Basically you are just great and good work!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
It was great...amazing... wonderful.
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
You really did an excellent job describing the fight. I could almost see it happening!
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
That was great, so glad he won!!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Thanks you so much for sharing this journey with us! I was hooked as soon as I started reading- and all the Fiona Apple songs didn't hurt. :-)
Reviewer: Adi (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Wow. Good Chapter! I'm so glad he didn't die or anything.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Omg I think I forgot to breathe by the time I was half way through this chapter. I'm glad Edward won and now he and Bella can start their lives together. Can't wait to see how everything turns out. Please update soon.
Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
yay! he won. I loved this chapter, the fight moves were very well described. I'm sad it's finishing though, I have loved every minute of it.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Firstly I want to say that I cannot believe that anybody would give bad reviews. This has been a freaking awesome story and I have loved every single bit of it. If people wanted fluff they shouldn't have been reading it.
Secondly, that chapter was mindblowing. I was supposed to be cooking dinner, but I burnt it because I was so involved I couldn't tear myself away. I could feel Bella's anxiety and flinched at every punch that Edward took.
Thank you for sharing this great story. I hope that you will go on to write something else and just to make sure I'm going to put you on my favorite authors so I'll get notified. Whatever you do write I hope that Edward is just as hot as he was in this story.
YOU ROCK!!!!!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
love it. intense. reminds me of the rocky films
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Good ending. I look forward to the Epilogue cause for some reason I love epilogues.
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
I love this story! So glad he kicked ass! I'm excited for the epi, but sad it's all over after that.
Reviewer: domenica (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Oh man, I almost thought for a minute there that he might lose...so tense! Brilliant and I love it - This story has been so awesome, I'm going to be sad to see it come to a close. Thanks for a wonderful ride!
Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Great scene! I'm so glad you decided to finish!
Reviewer: Bella Marie Cullen 20 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Masen VS. Hunter
Edward lives, thankyou!
Very much looking forward to reading the 2 part epilogue.
By the way, out of curiousity, whatever happened to Phil, did Edward hire someone to kill him?
They've had a long journey, both with a rocky life, they deserve a happy ending and each other.
Great fic nobloodnofoul ^_^
On to the Epilogue lol
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Making Friends Out Of Nothing At All
fun times with fruit! SIGH... oh the memories!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Converting Anger Into Love
fuckawesome!
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Because You Needed Me
I totally would have cleaned him up!!!
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:35 PM · On: The Horse and His Carrot
Lovin' the long chapters. Lovin' the Lemonie goodness.
Can't get enough of the fresh lemons.
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Getting To Know You
I am not a Tanya fan either but I do like the naked aggressive Edward idea. Maybe a little naked aggressive Bella too???
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:57 PM · On: I'll Think About That Tomorrow
lets get ready to rumble!!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 08:24 AM · On: I'll Think About That Tomorrow
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella spent the day just being together. Can't wait to read about the fight. Hope everything goes well. Please update soon.
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