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Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Winter

D: No way!! I love your cliffhanger endings. Well, I loved the chapter- the drama and intensity just kept building up until the very end. :)

 



Author's Response:

thank you! i try. 

hopefully you'll think the next chapter is just as good. 

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Winter

Another fabulous chapter, but another chapter that I am confused with. Is this a flashback?



Author's Response:

thank you! but yes. the whole thing will pretty much be a flashback, because the first chapter was kind-of like "then ending" of the story. 

Reviewer: Stupid_Shiny_Volvo_Owner (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Was It Worth It?

This is very well written and I can't wait to read more of it! Very suspenseful cliff hanger, Edward in this new light is very.. intriguing.. we all still love him of course ;)  Get to work on this rest of this! You're on to something.



Author's Response:

thank you very much! i appreciate the comment! and i've already submitted the next chapter, so hopefully you'll be it soon.

Reviewer: rekcuf137 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Winter

cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Winter

good good good

 

more please yes

Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

oooh. nice ending, very dramatic cliff-hanger. :D will there be another chapter? ;D



Author's Response:

of course! i wouldnt leave you hanging like that. :) 

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Winter

Good chapter. BUt I really want to know why Bella has been at a pier thats used to transport illigal items. It has to be some missunderstanding, right?

Update soon, please!

Author's Response:

He said that someone was on his pier, and they needed to be taken care of, and then the subject changed to what Cullen's job was supposed to be. so Isabella had nothing to do with the pier.

Reviewer: WouldYouLookAtThat (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

Cool. I'm excited. Please make this worth it.



Author's Response:

im glad. i really hope you do think its worth it!

Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

Oooh, very interesting & mysterious! I really enjoyed this... I love a little bit of a darker Edward. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds! Great job!



Author's Response: thank you! I really like darker Edward too.

Reviewer: rekcuf137 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

i like this. i hope he's not dead yet. i can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Was It Worth It?

Can't wait to see where you're headed!  Interesting details.  I like it, looking forward to next chapter!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Was It Worth It?

i'm confused... but i really like the emotion, but i'm not really understanding if edward died, and if he did, is it the end of the story?



Author's Response:

this is like a prelude to an end. i wont tell you if he dies or not, hopefully you'll read the rest. everything will fall into place

hopefully you will enjoy it. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

Wow, this is... there is no word for the emotion I am feeling after reading this. But I can say that I would defenitly be intrested in reading more of this. If just the first chapter is that powerful I can't imagin what the rest will be like. I truely hope you do not plan on leaving this story for dead. It... once again I am at a loss for words. Update as soon as possible if you can, please.

Author's Response: thank you very much. I'm posting the new chapter as i speak so hopefully you'll get it soon thanks for taking the time to tell me your thoughts!

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

Interesting first chapter. I understand nothing, and yet I'm intrigued...

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

It's really interesting to see Edward in this new light. I think you've done a fantastic job with this chapter =]



Author's Response:

thank you very much. i always wanted to take dark and brooding edward to a different level

thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

IF HIS HEAD IS CUT OFF, I DON"T REALLY SEE THE POINT TO KEEP READING??



Author's Response:

his head isn't gone. "tis but a flesh wound." 

the man just cut his throat very badly

Reviewer: sigh_for_sigh (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Was It Worth It?

Very great writing style. I just wonder about you revealing to much to early some good suspense can never hurt. I like your edward he's got spunk. I don't understand why he isn't talking.



Author's Response:

thank you! in this story edward keeps very much to himself, and doesnt want to give the man (who will later be indentified) and since of satisfaction by making him talk. there will be more suspense comming, so hopefully it will help the lack of here

thanks for the review!

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