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Reviewer: KristyRose (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Cute story.  I enjoyed it.  Well written!

Reviewer: saraxxo (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was really cute! It went perfectly with the lyrics!

Reviewer: DreamAsYouLiveForever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was soo good!

I loved it, you wrote it sooo good!

Please please please continue this...even if its just a chapter! I would love that and I'm sure everyone else would too.

Again great job!

Reviewer: Autumn Dawn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love that song!

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was a sweet little story.  Nice job.

Reviewer: DebussyToThis (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was really good (:

I looove this song, and your plot to go with it worked well

Even if it didn't make sense geographically ;)

From the small gist I got of your Edward, I really like your version.

And your Bella was pretty cute too.


What an ass-hat. It made me tear up a little ;)

OH! And nice usage of Tanya :P

ANYWAYS; I think it's really cute.

And if you had any sort of idea about making this into a multi-chapter story,

Please do it! :D I'd love to read more from you <3

Anyways Greeeeeeeeeeat One- Shot (:

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