Oh good lord. The way you write James is just delicious. I'm dying to see how this all plays out. And Edward standing there watching Bella tear the apartment apart looking for her phone sounds like something my husband would do, amused smile and all.

Good luck on your, heh, vacation. Poor thing :( hopefully it gets your creative juices flowing though! And now that Bella is freshly single, maybe it'll spark some more sexy Edward/Bella moments? Hmm? Or is that just wishful thinking?

James is hella scary. I'm waiting for him to completely snap and go all Buffalo Bill on Bella. Eep! How long is your vacation again? I'm not sure that we can wait! Obviously we'll have to, but... insert pouty face!

WOW.  I knew James was crazy, but this is getting a little a scary...

I'm more nervous now cos creepy James might go after sweet Edward :(....

Love the chapter!  I hope that Edward is able to try to have a relationship with Bella.  And I hope they call continue to keep an eye on James.  We all know James isn't done with this yet.  As soon as he sees Edward and Bella together, it will be on. 

I'm glad that Bella had the courage to speak to James, but he's not going to let her go is he.  At least Em is now more aware of what he's like.  I wonder if Edward is going to make the big move now - I hope so.  So embarassing for Bella with the ringtone but at least Edward has some idea that she has some sort of feelings for him too.

Hope you enjoy what sounds like the vacation from hell.

Annette

Jeez can Bella be more naive? Okay woo-fruggin-hoo she broke up with the stalker guy, but she still wants to be friends? Puh-lease, if that is what she considers a clean break then she is sadly mistaken...lets just hope she doesnt learn the hard way, the lengths to which James will go to get her to be 'his'...

Nooooooo........don't end it there....please, please, please....(slams head down on laptop)  SOB!  Couldn't she have at least glanced at his face to see his expression.....(wails again....)  (yes, I have small flair for drama...)

Uhhhh..yeah...I'm really excited that she and James broke up but nervous as hell because to him that doesn't seem to mean much and now he's plotting some evil plan to kidnap her and do God knows what to her. Your James totally freaks me out. Completely.  Good golly.

Had to chuckle over Emmett and Rose's agreement...heehee...they are so cute!  I like this Rose! 

Shall I wish you a happy "survival" on your vacay? (snorts) You sound sooooo excited! Seriously, have a great time...perhaps a stiff drink to calm the nerves....lol! :o)

 

Great chapter!

You seriously have to update soon!! This story is friggin awesome!!! I need more!! Yeah Bella is being a dumbass...but I know she will eventually come around!

Emmett needs to shake his little sister until she realizes that not EVERYONE deserves a chance to explain themselves. Sometimes and some people (expecially crazy exboyfriends) must be just cut out of your life fast, cold, and hard.

And with such a beautiful person sleeping just steps away from her bed...how does she have time to think of anyone else. She is a better person than me!

But, all of this is what makes this story so interesting. Now that she sees what kind of person he is the story will really start to become a nail bitter and put us on the edge of our seats. Great Story!!

I'm glad Bella is finally realizing what a complete freak james is. I would be scared to confront James alone, but I agree with you that she doesn't exactly realize what a threat to her safety he really is.

I love this story!!! I'm always excited to see an update!  I still don't understand why it doesn't have a ton more reviews....you're writing is awesome.  I'm glad you have the kick ass banner now....perhaps that will attract the deserved attention your story should have!

Oooohhhhh....things are starting to pick up here!  I'm so excited that Bella is realizing what a loose canon James is.  He is dangerous and she needs to back the heck away from him slowly!  Oh, and I loveeeeee the fact that Bella is realizing how physically attacted to Edward she is.  sigh....now let's move on and get to the part where they hook it up!!!  Pulease????

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I think Bella is finally getting her head on straight, IF she tells James to back off.  I loved this chapter!  I loved Bella's realizations, particularly her attraction to Edward's bare back, yummy!