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Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 17

*laughs like a crazy person rolling around on d floor for practically no reason at all*

sorry bout that, but i just realized now dat d name of d singers are peter, paul and mary! ya know...as in peter and charlotte, paul and his temper, and if u just changed d y to i and add an a, it'll b maria! mwahahahahahahahahaahaha!

gud luck wid d in-laws, kids and d pack of in-laws ready to tie u to d stake. JOKING!

hav a fun vac. (i hope, wid all dos suga-crazed little kids.)

ps

i hate u for making j go to plotting on how to make b his again wen it OBVIOUS dat she doesn't to be any thing but fwends, but i simply luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv u for adding some more action! god, i need to stop watching gg. ;)

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

OH. MY. GOD. b is so...so...BUH-LIND!!!! b is supposed to be perceptive, but u made her look like a dumbass bitch! *sorry for d language :]* any way, gud work. oh, and i hav a song suggestion on e's part. first is money honey, by lady gaga. its perfect for him wid a capital P. for b, i was thinking maybe...i'm only me wen i'm wid u, by taylor swift for her relationship with e. as for her relationship wid j...weeeell...i was thinking maybe...obssessed, by mariah carey <as usual *smile*>, or maybe d click 5's new song, i quit i quit i quit. p.s. i just stared all day at my lp, and i don't hav any probs wid my eyes.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15

Um..WTF Bella? If some dude looked at me and said "what the fuck are you wearing?", he would have gotten a door slammed in his face. And why the hell didn't she shut James up? Why did she let the dumbass questions continue. I am so annoyed. She's a smart girl, she should be seeing some red flags go up by now.

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 13

haha. can't believe u included d fish comment! but i must say, i WAS a little bit more mad at j for killing b & e's shared fish dan i was at d boy who got beat up. IDK, guess its just something bout b & e. <emphasize on d word 'some'> any way, gud work.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

My heart hurts.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 9

That kiss was DELICIOUS!! lol It made me all warm and tingly inside.

I am dreading what is coming up next for James and Bella but I will make it through. I hope.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

ugh!!!!!!!!! no more James kissin please. So gross.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

My husband is staring at me like I've lost it because I have the hugest smile on my face and I squealed a little. Great chapter!

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

Aww! sweet, sweet, sexy Edward.

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is so damn good.

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

he IS one hell of an ass, isn't he? first d kid dat flirted wid b, now her, i mean e's fish. wat's up wid him? y is he sooo obssessed wid her? doesn't he know he isn't for meant to be wid b? ok, know i'm sounding like gg in gossip girl.

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

wen b met j, u got me hatin' on d club

and now u got me hatin' on my fav damsel in disstress.

haha. only joking. don't wanna be a kj anyway.

good story.

~~@~~@~~

see ya

Reviewer: Cappuccino (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 17

Just read the whole story (thus far). Great Job. Had to laugh at your AN that admonished the readers for being upset about the fish and not the kid that got smashed. It made me realized that I was more upset about the fish then the kid. But in my defense the fish was killed, the kid lived. (It's not much, but that's my story and I'm sticking to it.) Can't wait 'til the next installment.

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 17

ughhh! james needs to go away

Reviewer: kmln (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm so happy she ditched him, but I'm fearful for Edward. Loved the ending, very clever.

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 12

FUCKIN JAMES! killed the fish!
i had a sick feeling he would, ugh EDWARD come backk!

Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

please dont let Bells lose her v-card to that creeper james!

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm a little nervous b/c James is nutso, but relieved b/c now it leaves room for Edward and Bella to turn things up a notch.

BTW, I'm in Tennessee now in Memphis, I hope you enjoy your vacation!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

can't wait for more

Reviewer: awsomrah (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 17

i'm glad it's over but i don't think nervous covers it. i'm on pins and needles and have no fingernails left. and i love the song for edward, want to see his reaction! it's going to be a long wait while you are on vacay but i am sure it'll be worth it!

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

Ahh! I'm totally nervous about James and Bella. And mean to leave it at that cliffhanger :) Have fun with the in-laws, lol.

Reviewer: feebee70 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 17

try drinking. there is no yardarm for the sun to get over with that much family in one place....

great story!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hope you have a nice vacation! Cant wait for the next chappy!!!!

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

i didn't really get the plan, and, really?, i think you made james become an obssessed police stalker. possessive much? his (james) and bella's relationship reminds me of the song 'obssessed' by mariah. my mind keeps going back to it whenever i read the JPOVs. your not mad, right?

p.s.

gave you a big 10 for making me laugh.

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 17

great part

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