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Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 18
Haha. I think anything related to fish is disgusting (Tuna is an exception), so I tend to stay away. Although I can't really help it when my roommates cook it and the house then smells like fish for two days. Makes me nausea's. Anyways I really like the story, and can now read, Since I am done my exam and don't have school til tuesday next week! Oh and I'm not sure if I'm liking James as much as I did in the beggining. Which I think is the secret to making people like Edward more-Get Bella involved with someone else and have a jealous Edward. At least it works for me!
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 16
Intense!
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
He killed Puyallup? Talk about cruelty and a sign of Conduct Disorder. Sorry I have Psych on the brain. Exam in 6 hrs :(. I am so going to miss fishy. I would cry if any ofmy fished died.
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
I like that James is patient with Bella and is waiting for her to make the moves. Not many other author's have the curtesy to do that. Which is why liking this story makes it so much easier. Although it is very distracting from my studies, and I have an exam tomorrow!
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 10
That info bit actually helped. I mean it made sense before and I guessed she was still inoccent, but explanations are always good. I love this story.
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aw I want to cry..that last sentence actually made me feel sad even though I knew it was coming. But now I can look forward to James for 5 weeks. This does not mean I like James more than Edward. James is just a..bad ass? I think that's the word I'm looking for. It's hard for me to picture Edward like that sometimes.
Reviewer: shortycake (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
The one thing I notice about the majority of fanfic stories is that the *SPARKS* that happen between Edward and Bella are mostly based on Edwards looks. When ever Bella refers to him its always about his looks-Adonis figure- if i'm being specific. It would be nice for once to have her attracted to him because of his other qualities. Maybe it's just a twilight thing..the only thing Bella notices? Even though it get's annoying sometimes. But thats just my thought lately. I am loving the story. I am hoping bella actually gets more involved with James a bit more in this story. Just to help build their relationship, and then she can eventualy go to Edward. Nothing makes a better story than a jealous Edward!
Reviewer: twifann1975 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Oh, I am so mad at myself for not checking how long it has been since the story was updated. I try to stay away from writers and stories that never get finished. It was a pretty good story, to bad it will never get finished, I think it was really gearing up to be a good one.
Reviewer: kstewlv (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Just wanted to say that I think you're an amazing writer. I hope you will be able to complete your stories but of course we understand that RL should be given first priority. Good luck to you and hope to read your updates in the future.
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Hope you update soon. Your story is really great and I love creepy James and the love story your building between Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: KatnissGale (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
I miss this story and wish you were able to post more often. It is a story that needs to be told!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Wow! James is indeed creepy. I hope no one dies in this fic escept for James. LOL!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
stalker much!!!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
well its about time!
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
oooh poo wanted more kissing lol enjoying and saving for updates
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 9
sorry all for edward!!!!! creepy james is not for me lol :P but feel bad for bella :0
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
LOVE the update!! This is one of my favorite stories...you are awesome at creating tension! Please update as soon as you can!! I can't wait! :)
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
That seemed way too easy to get the order, definately don't think a little piece of paper is going to stop James. So looking forward to the next chappie. Glad to see your back i've missed this. Also loved that dream, wow, i was wondering if i had missed a chapter there for a minute. So now they've kissed again, and she's tired of making excuses dare we hope that they will be a couple, surely then James will show his true colors but still they deserve a shot.
thanks again, melly
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Great chapter! I loved it!
Reviewer: amobutterfly25 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
im pleasantly surprised that the restrai ning order went through actually. its great though now it means that ed and bell will get closer now. i do hope he does break the order before she meets the fm that would sort of stink.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
OMG. I'm afraid of what the hell James will do now that Bella is actively pushing him away. I'm sure he won't give up, he will only get more discreet, and certainly more dangerous. I really hope Edward doesn't travel, because that would be the perfect opportunity for James to strike. I'm really looking forwrd to the next chapter!
Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 23 vjgm
Please update soon!!
Reviewer: LadyofStonesthrow (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 18
Congratulations!!!
Reviewer: LadyofStonesthrow (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
That's so funny - he pulled on a toboggan? That would be difficult to balance! lol! I think you mean a "balaclava"? Like a mask? Good giggle~
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