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Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 03:34 AM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

I love Jacob! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 09:36 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This


Author's Response:

Yes, I think you summarized it pretty well :)

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 06:10 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

Oh my, quite a teaser.  Maybe this is in Sam's voice?  Glad to see Jake and Bella having a little make up and feeling good together.

Author's Response:

This isn't from Sam's POV, sorry. I knew this teaser would have you all wondering what's going on. That was sort of the point.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 02:11 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

You know I have 2 children and I never was this wacked out, overly emotional person.....I know it makes the story funny but jeez not all pregnant women are nuts LOL

Author's Response:

Oh, I know this. I just thought that, knowing Bella as she was in the books, she would be like this if she was pregant; And I mean, naturally pregnant; Not with something stupid as Nessie where she suffered more than everything else.

Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:51 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

I enjoyed this chapter but why did it take him so long to figure that out. Just because they couldn't have sex did mean they couldn't pleasure themselves in other ways.

my mouth is wide open (like what just happened whit your small teaser for the next chpter.)

Author's Response:

Yes, I know. They took the doctor's instructions too literally. And I'm a mean teaser, I Know.

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:23 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

oh no that teaser for the next chapter has me all kinda of curious. at first i thought maybe leah slapped sam but it says jacob's point of view! hahahaaa this chapter was awesome and i so love being in your jacobs head. well he is my jacob but your version of my jacob is wonderful. if that even makes sense hahahahaaaaaa

Author's Response:

Leah's dead, remember? A lot of people tend to forget it. Even my beta forgot it once. She died back when the wolves fought against Victoria and her newborns. I love being in Jacob's head better than in Bella's.

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:08 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

All I can say is that Bella better start treating Jake right, 'cuz I'm about to move in on him! Oh, wait a minute - he's fictional. CRAP! 

I actually got tears in my eyes over J's frustration, then sighed over how he, um, placated Bella. Diplomacy is a great thing! <><3

Btw - there're now voting instructions posted at the Sort of Beautiful site on Live Journal, they took pity on us!

Author's Response:

If you got tears in your eyes for this chapter you won't survive what will happen in some chapters to come, trust me. (Oh, I'm a so bad teaser!)

Yes, I saw the voting instructions. It is such a confusing way of voting, anyway!

Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:16 PM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

That teaser was just wrong! LOL Great chapter though!

Author's Response:

I know,, I know. Hoefully what will happen at the end of the three chapters to come will make you forgive me for this teaser. I felt really bad choosing this part of the chapter but I promise not all teaser will be like this in the future.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:27 AM · On: 19. I Didn't Sign Up For This

HUH? I LOVED THIS CHAPTER BUT NOW I'M CONFUSED. YOU SEE? THAT TEaser you left at the end is gnawing at me. whta did he lie about? did he really imprinyt on her... or anyone for that matter?

Author's Response:

You may be quit right when you say that the lie has to do with imprinting although I won't say that your assumption is completely right. I felt really bad for giving you this teaser but I'm sure it'll be worth it.

Reviewer: team_edward_4ever (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:27 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Uh-oh! Jacob has some majorly serious explaining to do! n_n OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Watch out for the Mighty Wrath of Bella, Jake!!!!!!!! Be careful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: juju5 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:32 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Im so excited to read the next chapter? do you know when it will be posted?


Reviewer: juju5 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:51 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

It was a good chapter, hurry up and finish the next one! im so excited to see what happens next :)

I love that you did a jacob and bella story without edward, i was curious what would happen if bella chose jacob. 

Author's Response:

The next chapter is already submitted. It's up to my Validation Beta now ;)

I'm glad that you like the story. You have an outtake from Charlie's POV on the forum thread if you haven't read it yet. The link is in a lot of End Note's in the last chapters.

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:56 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Good chapter!  Will there be more soon?  You left me hanging!  :)

Author's Response:

I've already submitted the next one so it should be up really soon :)

Reviewer: juju5 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 06:20 PM · On: 2. Everybody Has a Cousin

its really good. But the only thing that bothers me is Jacob's hair. 

SHORT IS HOT! :) haha.


Author's Response:

I'll have to disagree with you. I totally prefer Jacob with his long hair! But as long as we both like Jacob, the hair doesn't matter really much, does it?

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 05:55 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down


Reviewer: isabellarose (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:26 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

can u pls just write more....i would love to read more..

Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 01:37 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

way is bella so hormonal

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 11:56 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Oh poor Bella and those hormones!  I didn't have any cravings with my 1st pregnancy and just stared at the pantry.  When my husband said I was crazy and to just eat something I started crying and throwing stuff screaming I'm not crazy just pregnant and if I was 'crazy' it was his fault.  He never said anything to upset me again!  Poor Jake is doing nothing but being nice and sweet and he gets all that angst that cannot be helped I know.  The waitress just spilled something on him didn't she?!!  I know it cant be anything more than that. 

Your story has been missed and Im glad it updated yesterday.  Can't wait til next chapter! 

Hugs, Stephanie

*hope you had a great holiday!!! 



Author's Response:

I had a good holiday, thanks. Even if it's hard to be away from my family and all my friends.

I've never been pregnant so I don't really know anything about being hormonal but I bet I would be exactly like you. I'm not really easy to live with in the first place so I pity the guy who will get me pregnant if he has to live with me x)

I missed updating. The next chapter should be really soon given that my Beta has already sent it back to me last week.

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 11:19 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Aww, poor Bella and really poor Jake. Pregnant people can be so cranky. Hoping Bella gets past the prego hormones soon.

Author's Response:

I just wanted to show that she could be really, really hormonal but that will be the worst she'll be. I don't like when my characters are fighting for nothing.

Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:31 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Ah, another wonderful chapter.  I hate to type this but, this was my friend when she was pregnant, her hormones were everywhere and I felt so bad for her.  As for the way you wrote about Bella feeling fine and everyone wanted to help and her frustration, I really felt it.  I been there and you really got the frustration down.  Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us.  I look forward to the next chapter and Jakes' POV.

Author's Response:

It's actually a bit of a pression for me to write about a pregnant woman and to try to be in her mind when I've never been pregnant and so many of my readers have already been! I'm trying very hard to get everything right so I'm glad when you say that you used to feel like Bella. I prefer writing from Jacob's POV it's less complicated. Bella is always overthinking everything and sometimes it gives me headaches!

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 10:22 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Bitchy Bella is frustrating. You know? I'm almost beginning to think That Seth is in love with Bella. Am I right?

Author's Response:

Bella is always getting on my nerves. No matter if it's in the actuall books or in fanfiction. I don't really like her character but I wanted to write a canon Bella so here we are. About Seth, I'll say that you're wrong. He isn't in love with her. He may have been at the start, maybe just a crush like Jacob when they were teenagers but definitely not now.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:49 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

love it.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:11 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down


Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 12:29 PM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Ah...Poor Bella...I remember those hormones quite well.....

Reviewer: chenry89 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:20 AM · On: 18. Up And Down And Up And Down And...Down

Oooooh man, I cant wait for the next installment! Write quickly!!

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