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Reviewer: wicked lovely (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2017 09:19 PM · On: 26. Are These Instructions Even Written In English?

Bella's bracelet is so cute and the mural for Kangaroo is adorable

Reviewer: wicked lovely (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 06:55 PM · On: 10. The Blacks' Guide For A Perfect Day

I love how the story is going so far, maybe Beth and Embry will get somewhere. I can wait to read about Bella and Jacke's baby . Dan's blog is hilarious, some of my friends thought this way when I started reading the series

Reviewer: plainjanedee (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2014 08:40 AM · On: 27. A Blacks' Black Day

That was just mean.  You could have at least waited til after the baby was born. Plus, it's really difficult explaining to my husband why I'm sitting at the computer sobbing. You don't play fair. 

Reviewer: tellytubby (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 02:58 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for a good read :)

Reviewer: Marilou4241 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 10:44 AM · On: 1. Big news before the big day

I loved this! That would be so bizarre to find out the day before that they were pregnant. I know it happens, but wow! I like how he's still a werewolf and they're not all humans :). What did you mean by everyone has a cousin?

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Epilogue

So sad!  So sad!  I am going to miss reading the updates on the this story, sweetie.  It was a fabulous story and fabulously written!  Just don't stop writing and keep that talent a going!  Ive got you on fav authors for when you write more!

Hugs and squeezes, Stephanie :(  but :) it ended beautifully!

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Epilogue

Sooo... I sorta put off reading for a few days, because I knew this was the end & I didn't want it to be :(

You've taken us on a lovely, long journey with you, cherie. It's been great to follow along with Jake & Bella's ups and downs, silly misunderstandings, tagedies, triumphs and hot, hot lovin'! You did great with giving them realistic problems to overcome without relying too much on supernatural angst, an excellent balance between the elements.

Just as fun, has been watching you grow and get more confident as a writer. You'll never think of yourself the same way, right? I don't blame you at all for not wanting to extend or sequel this; it's so much of a committment and, in any case, when a story's done, it's done.

It's been lovely getting to know you, honey. I know Rhode Island is a lo-ong way from the PNW, but if you're ever out this way... :D ((hugs)) <><3

Reviewer: KristinHazzard (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 10:09 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for sharing your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing it :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Epilogue

Perfect!  I loved the ending.  It was so real to life.  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.  I will keep it in my favorites so i can re-read it later!  One again, thank you!

Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful words. I'm so happy you liked this fic so much :D

Reviewer: mal005 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 01:42 PM · On: Epilogue

I loved the story. I'm kinda sad to see it end.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review :)

Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Epilogue

OMG I am so voting for this story!!!!!!

*wipes more tears out of eyes*

I LOVED this story!  I think EVERYONE should read this!!!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you!!!!!! It's wonderful to see people actually loved this fic. Thank you for your awesome words. :D

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Epilogue

sad to see its over but happy to know how it ended!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sticking with this fic until the end. I have loved to hear your thoughts every time I updated. :D

Reviewer: Kelsey Ray (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 08:30 AM · On: 1. Big news before the big day

Okay, I totally thought that Jacob was gonna freak out, but thankfuly he didn't. Like it so far and I'm realy excited to read the rest cause your chapter names look really interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank YOU! Finally someone who noticed that my chapters' titles are cool. I spend so much time trying to find good titles. I hope you're liking this fic, and I hope to hear more of your thought soon :)

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 06:32 AM · On: 40. The First Day of the Rest of Our LIfe

Well, I suppose all the reviews will start out this way, but: AaaaaaWwwwww!!! They're so sweet & lifelike in their fascination with the baby. Young, new parents are so cute, even after they get the deer-in-the-headlights look when they realize that there's no vacation time from all this!

You did a great job with this, sweetie, turning it into a great bonding, not only between J & B, but with their community. Maybe now Bella will start accepting the happiness she has! *applause* <><3



Author's Response:

I'm loving all th great reviews I'm getting now that the story is complete. It's so cool. It was definitely worth the two years I spent writing it. :) Thank you so much for this awesome review.

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 09:46 PM · On: 40. The First Day of the Rest of Our LIfe

Such a sweet chapter.  Hate to see it end though.  It has been one of those stories that I have been reading for a while now and always love to see an update.  I love finding jacob and bella ones especially ones where he imprints.  There are so many different opinions about their pairing and many diehard Ed/bella fans can get really nasty when it comes to Jacob and write him in (especially in all human ones) as a horrible monster and I sincerely depise that!  I'm a team twilight and I read many different cannon pairings with Bella. Most have been all human which are easier to accept, but the supernatural ones are just as good too (and Jake is the only wolf I read with her) Sweet stories about Jacob and Bella (particularly Jacob) getting a Happily Ever After holds a soft spot in my heart and I tend to appreciate them more.  I think he got shortchanged a little and your story gave him a very wonderful HEA and I thank you for sharing and giving us a great story!  Bravo!!

Hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you for this wonderful review! I agree with you. I hate when people make Jake a rapist in their fics because it's so out of character for him. There are far worse characters in the books that could be made into monsters in fics. But anyway. We're more mature than these people, right? ;) I'm so happy you liked this fic so much. It means the world to me :D

Reviewer: mal005 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 03:15 PM · On: 40. The First Day of the Rest of Our LIfe

I have loved every minute of this fic. I have laughed and cried and been heart broken and ecstatic.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely words. I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:25 PM · On: 40. The First Day of the Rest of Our LIfe

well im glad that in the end everyone got their happy ending



Author's Response:

This fic was bound to have a HEA, right? :) But I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 03:45 AM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

A boy yeah it's a boy .

Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 02:10 PM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

u didn't give a cliffy yay



Author's Response:

Now, THIS would have been a very mean thing to do. But don't think I didn't consider it, because I did ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: JakeandBells (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:32 AM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

AAAaaWWWwww :')



Author's Response:

I KknoWwwwWww ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amberlynn202 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 04:38 PM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

awwww! so adorable!! I was kinda hoping it would be a girl though. but Oh well. the baby would be cute either way!



Author's Response:

If I had had a choice on the baby's sex, I don't think I would have been able to decide. Tossing a coin for it seemed a very objective way to do so. And well, it's a boy. Maybe Jake and Bella will have other kids and these will be girls. Who knows? Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 11:45 AM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

ha ha ha haaaaa i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad to see I didn't disappoint my readers :)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 03:12 AM · On: 39. And the Winner Is...

DAWWWW!!!! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I do love it, too. Next chapter is with the beta :)

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 11:26 AM · On: 30. We'll Be Together Forever

Yes that was much better they both needed that! I'm glad Jacob can finally socialize. I'll send you a post card if you still have a postcard wall ;)

Author's Response:

Awww. Thank you for offering a postcard. I do not have a postcard wall anymore because I said bye to my dorm last month. Besides, lots of people offered to send one, but they either got lost somewhere above the Atlantic Ocean or they were never sent. I don't want you to waste money for me. But thenks anyway :)

Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 06:30 AM · On: 29. This Isn't Goodbye

I don' think I can handle another despressing chapter. I hope Jake gets through the grieving process quickly, he has a family to raise and a pack to lead.

Author's Response:

I know how you feel. These were tough chapters to write. But all in all, there's only 3 of them before going back to happy time. But drama is always looming. I'm a master at this :p

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