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Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:09 PM · On: What Edward Gathered
You know the saying...Love is sweet... Revenge is blind. I think Eddie here is about to go to the darkside and I think I like it!! I can only imagine what he's gonna do.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:48 PM · On: What Bella Decided
Well I am glad to get more details but I still want to slap Renee. Gotta luv the boys... always there for a laugh. Video games.. really? Sigh Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:05 PM · On: What Renee Revealed
OMFG!! I so wanted to go into the computer and slap Renee. That's the problem .. you ignore the signs you know are there and who pays for your stupidity.. the victum. Sorry had to vent. I am glad they did get to talk but I am nervous to see how this unfolds further. I also hope Charlie and Edward don't flip on Renee... too bad.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:30 PM · On: What Charlie Heard
I am glad she talked to Charlie... however i did crack up when the realization of B/E together flipped him out. I pictured my fathers reaction and I was crying. LOL I can't wait to see what happens with Renee.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:01 PM · On: What Edward Realized
RIP big red...lol This was intense at first but it was a bonding experience for Charlie and edward atleast. That's something. I know she'll heal fine but I am wondering what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Bella's love for her truck has always irritated me. So I had to kill it in a fic. Charlie and Edward bonding is good...
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:33 PM · On: What Emmett Grabbed
Okay I luv Emmett and Jazz's little skit. i laughed till I was crying. But I not like the cliffie. It not nice...pouty face... but I am anxious for more..
Author's Response: Emmett and Jasper for the win! Yeah, the chapter was so weepy, we needed something happy, before continuing drama.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:12 PM · On: What Rosalie Said
I am glad Rose went to her they needed to hash out their differences... agreeing to disagree is atleast a foot in the door.
Author's Response: Yeah, I never understood how they planned to spend eternity together but never talked... just didn't make sense.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:43 AM · On: What Edward Hit
I am glad Em was able to calm ed down. He needs to be strong for Bells... they all do. She will need help with whats coming up. I can't wait.
Author's Response: I love Emmett. He's such a great guy... very supportive and good for a laugh now and then.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:28 AM · On: What Bella Remembered
Okay that was chill inducing. Different yet a totally realistic problem that can arise at times when you least expect them to. I can't wait to see what else happes.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:15 AM · On: What Alice Saw
God I luv Emmett... giggles. he's my version of the perfect big brother. he actually reminds me of mine. Anyways. i need to know what the visions are. It kills me to be out of the loop. lol Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy reading the rest! There are 13 chapters up on Twilighted and there should be 14 by the end of the week!
Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:04 AM · On: What Bella Suspected
uh oh!
wonder what edward is going to tell her!
UPDATE ASAP!
i really like this story!
so creative and i guess the main thing is trust!
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that are enjoying the story! Next chapter is finished and should be up soon. The main thing in any relationship is trust, and Bella and Edward are really dealing with that now.
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 08:44 AM · On: What Bella Suspected
Great chapter. Can't wait to see the talk between Edward and Bella. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Edward and Bella together is chapter 15, so you'll have to wait. Next chapter we find out what Edward was up to while away. Update should be early next week - Edward is far mor cooperative than Bella!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:50 AM · On: What Bella Suspected
Yes, very very cruel!
Author's Response: Sorry! On the plus side, the next chapter should be up early next week. (Thanks to Canadian Thankgiving weekend and a visit to my inlaws...)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: smitchell (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:16 AM · On: What Bella Suspected
this was a good story, i fell like Bella got past some issues and she is opened up a little. i hope that her and edward can have a nice talk and that we will trust that she can handle things a bit more. you are doing a great job with this fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Bella is beginning to resolve some of her issues, now if we can only get Edward to cooperate we're almost to an ending!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:00 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
Damn Edward got home fast. I can't wait to see what the boys were up to in Phili. Great update!!!!!
Author's Response: It was three days.... lol. This chapter starts on day two. It takes Bella that long to figure it out.
The boys are... up to something. That's all I'm saying.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 06:33 AM · On: What Bella Suspected
Another great chapter! I'm glad that Bella is finally recognizing that maybe a small part of her did want revenge. I look forward to reading what Edward was up to, and hoping we don't have to wait too long to find out!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry about the wait on this chapter... it was so hard to write! I've got more written for the next one then I had in two weeks for the last one, so hopefully it will come faster.
It was very hard to Bella to acknowledge that she is angry about what happened to her, and that she wants revenge (even just a little bit.) She's very uncomfortable with anger and that's part of why it was so hard to write this chapter!
Edward and the boys are... up to something. lol You'll just have to wait and see!
Reviewer: jschul309 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:01 PM · On: What Rosalie Said
The background story is almost like a Jodi Picoult book!... Change of Heart. Read it. It's so intense, and people are not always what they seem
Great start here, though
:)
Author's Response: I've never heard of Jodi Picoult, but am flattered to be compared to a published author. Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:51 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
Haha! I hope Emmett killed him. At least it wouldn't be Edward that did it. He'd have kept his promise.
Author's Response: Hmmm, we'll have to wait and see what Edward is up to. And Emmett. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:24 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
Okay .. if Edward is smart, he should just tell Bella the truth ... then again, I doubt he will. Looking forward to the next chappie!
Author's Response: Well, we shall see what Edward does. Hopefully the next chapter will be finished soon! (Though I only have a little bit done yet.)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:15 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
I have missed this story. Glad to see you are back. Hopefully Edward coroporates!
Author's Response: I hope he does too. (And honestly I think he will. I rewrote the last chapter 4 times before I even got started and I'm beyond that now.)
You made me tear up when you said you'd missed this story... my readers mean so much to me.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:54 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
:) Great
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:39 PM · On: What Bella Suspected
YOU STOPPED <eyes wide in shock> ... fabulous chapter. Edward would be so not okay if I was Bella, but sigh ... Bella will forgive him. I guess I want her too, but he needs to squirm some before she does ... make him squirm!!!!!
HURRY and UPDATE!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was really worried about this chapter, because while it seems like filler, it's important to know what Bella's thinking.
I will update as soon as possible, and hoepfully Edward will squirm.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:34 PM · On: What Jasper Knew
can't wait to read the next chapter... and see steven get what's comign to him...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Reviewer: Phifer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:57 PM · On: What Jasper Knew
wow, I have just read all of the chapters and your story is great! I really enjoy your writing style and the whole flow of the story is sooo nice, not rushed, but not too slow neither... just perfect!
hope to hear about you soon, I'll be waiting for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad that you are enjoying my story. Pacing is so hard... sometimes I feel like nothing has happened, and sometimes I feel like too much is happening. Luckily my beat keeps me on the straight and narrow. ;-)
Hopefully I'll be able to update this week, but Bella is not being cooperative, so I'm not positive.
Reviewer: campbti (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:51 PM · On: What Jasper Knew
Excellent. I think Edward would have to go. He might hold to not killing him, unless he walked in on him doing something to a child, then he'd pull him apart. But I think Rose is right too, she hasn't been nearly upset enough at the entire situation, at the unfairness of it all. Why her, why couldn't she stop him, tell someone...whatever. She should want him dead if not only for herself, but also for the possibility that any other child might have to endure what she has... Great chapter, can't wait to see what they finally decide to do. and what this HIM is like now.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Edward has no idea what's going to happen when he lays eyes on Steven... The only thing that is for sure is that Bella is going to be angry with Edward. Bella has taken all of this very calmly, and anger is one of the stages of grief... you'll just have to wait and see!
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