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Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:34 AM · On: What Bella Remembered
Grrrrrrrr. DARN YOU RENEE AND STEVEN!!! >:O
Author's Response: ... yeah, just you wait!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:26 AM · On: What Alice Saw
I started this on TA but I never finished it. I guess it's time to start again. :)
Author's Response: Oh wow! Yeah, sorry, I stopped posting it over there, it just wasn't getting read. I hope you enjoy a second look through.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
I loved how you ended it by jumping forward. This story was great. I hope you keep writing! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the idea of jumping ahead at the end too. I plan to do a series of oneshots next.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: smitchell (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:12 AM · On: What the Boys Did
i think it was good, but i think you should have scared him some more.... he deserves it. great job anyway!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry that you didn't think he was scared enough. The boys were pleased with themselves though! Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Very nice ending, though I would like to know more about Alice's last vision here. :) Can't wait for more stories from you! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Alice's last vision was very unclear... because it's so far in the future. (Wouldn't we all like a glimpse that far into the future? lol)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
loved this whole story, you write so beautifully, I look forward to reading more from you in the future
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's such a kind thing to say. Not sure when the one-shot will be up, my kid stopped sleeping for some reason this week, which cuts into my writing time severely. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: BsuzD (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
I've been reading since you first started posting. I loved the story! Thank you.
Brenda
Author's Response: I really appreciate that you've reviewed at the end! And I'm so happy to hear that you've enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it and nothing makes me happier than hearing from happy readers!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Oh I totally love this story. The journey maybe unknown to all who travel but it is one that must be taken... according to my nana anyway. LOL There were hard times and happy moments. It goes to show you that love conquers all.
Author's Response: The journey is an important part of life, and it's something Alice forgets sometimes, since she can almost always see the "destination". I'm so glad that you've enjoyed and I really appreiciate your enthusiastic reviews!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
I'm glad Bella does not have to deal with that memory forever but I agree with Jasper, Edward had to be honest with Bella. I loved Alice's last vision but I am so sorry to see the story end.
Author's Response: I'm sorry to see it go, but relieved. I found the last few chatpers very hard to write!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: campbti (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
That was excellent, the epi was great. The whole story was tragic and heartwarming and just a bit of everything. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us all.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it. I've enjoyed the experience so much (even when it was driving me crazy) and the readers are just so enthusiastic! It's great!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Very beautiful ending.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. It's very nerve wracking posting the end. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
is there going to be a seqeal??????????
Author's Response: Sorry, no sequel. This story is finished. I will be working on a series of one shots based on the summer between Twilight and New Moon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Sweet!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Ireally enjoyed reading your story even the hard parts were ful filling thank you.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! The hard parts were hard, but I tried to make sure that they all had a point, and that the story was as realistic as possible (considering that there are vampires in it.)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
Nice ending to a nice story! I am adding you to my favourites list; I'll be looking forward to that one shot, even though I don't know what it's of...I'll also be looking foward to any other stories you decide to write.
Author's Response: So glad that you enjoyed it! The one-shot will be set between Twilight and New Moon and (eventually there will be a series of them) will focus on the flaws of the so-called "perfect summer". There is an AH fic somewhere down the road too, but that's sometime next year. I'm also working on an original fiction novel as a part of NaNoWriMo, so there's lots to be done!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Epilogue: What Else Alice Saw
The best part is that you mentioned *scrapbooking* ... love it. It's my stress relief when nothing else works.
Alice's thoughts and visions in this chapter are fabulous! Love the glimplse at E&B's discussion and Alice's glimpse of the future.
Jasper is one intelligent vampire!
Author's Response: Yeah, scrapbooking seemed like an Alice kind of hobby (amusingly enough, it's not one of mine.)
So glad that you enjoyed the epi and the story. I agree that Jasper is very smart, it's one of the things I like about him.
Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:26 AM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
Exccellent story! I love that you put "Love Story" in there, too. I've thought that was an "Edward and Bella" song ever since I first heard it. lol I waited to review until I got to the last chapter that was posted. I am sad that it will be ending soon, but glad that it's turning out happily. :) You are very talented!
Author's Response: Thanks! I always associate "Love Story" with Edward and Bella, if only because I first read the books when the song came out. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and hope you like the epi just as much!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 02:48 PM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
I luv this chap. it is full of love and happiness. It's been a great story and I am sad it is ending. I will look forward to other stories you may post in the future. Again I did truly enjoy it and I am anxious for the epilogue.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I've really enjoyed writing this, and am almost sad to be moving on to other projects. I am taking some time off to particiapte in NaNoWriMo in November, and then hope to post a series of One shots from the summer between Twilight and New Moon. The epilogue should be up soon - it's written. I'm waiting on my beta to get it edited, and then I'll put it in the queue.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 10:47 AM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
good chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the epilogue!
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:43 AM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
That was a wonderful and sweet ending. Oh, so can not wait for the Epilogue ... can't wait for it. Haha. Thanks for sharing this and sad to see this end.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed the ending - I find them so hard to write! You shouldn't have too long to wait for the epilogue, it's written and being beta'd right now. Hopefully it will be up by Monday at the latest.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 03:41 AM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
I'm a little sad to see it end, but it was sooo well done. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sad to see it go too, but am relieved that I finished it. (It's by far the longest piece of completed fiction I've ever written.)
After I take November to do NaNoWriMo I will be working on a series of one-shots set in the summer between Twilight and New Moon, and am looking to do an AH story sometime next year. (If everything goes as planned -stay tuned! lol)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 10:38 PM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
Ahhhh so cute!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 09:59 PM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
What a delightful ending ... although I am disappointed that a doctor with suspicions of abuse didn't at least ask Bella the question.
Great writing ... eager to read the epilogue & hoping to see another story from you.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's very sad that the doctor suspected abuse and didn't do anything, but it's shockingly common.
I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story (and am blushing that you find it well written)! The epilogue should be up soon, it's written and in the editing process.
After this I'll be taking a break to participate in NaNoWriMo, but come December I have a series of one-shots I'd like to write about the summer between Twilight and New Moon.
Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 09:44 PM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
I'm sorry I'm a lurker. But, that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy a chapter. On the contrary, I really liked this story. I'm glad that Bella's able to move on from this experience. Poor Edward. That had to be awful to hear that Dr.'s thoughts. All he ever wants is to protect her and yet, people think he's the one hurting her. Ironic. can't wait for the epi. And APOV should be very interesting. Thanks for this story, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and reading, as a lurker or a reviewer. I'm so glad that you really liked the story and felt it had a fair resolution. It is rather ironic that the Dr. felt Edward was hurting her when he puts so much effort into protecting her.
Epi should be up soon, it's written and just needs to be beta'd.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 09:31 PM · On: How Bella Moved Forward
I kinda wish there was a way to make the doc feel bad for not wanting to bring it up... But then if Bella said anything, it would be incriminating for Edward and whatnot...
Author's Response: I wish there was a way to make every doctor/teacher/person in authority who decides not to bring it up feel bad, but there isn't. It happens all the time. And yeah, if Bella started with "My boyfriend read your mind and..." it would be a ticket to a pychological evaluation! Thanks for reviewing.
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