Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
great story!!
would've loved to hear more!!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
I love this....I really want 2 read the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on it, I've had alot of illness though so please bare with me.
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 7: - Sudden and Slightly Unwanted Revelations
Don't worry and stress so much about the story. I'm loving it and I'll take updates whenever we can get them, but don't let our happy anticipation ruin the fun of the writing process for you- enjoy it, you're good at it!
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
CLIFIE'S SUCK:P whens the next one coming??i LOVE this story!!!!!!!
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Author's Response: I know soryr for the cliffie I just love them!! Sorry I'm taking ann age to update I've been bogged down with illness this past year and have had hardly no time to write and update BUT despitebeing struck down again over xmas, hopefully another chapter will be here shortly! sorry to have kept you waiting!
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
I'm anxious to find out what Edward says to Bella. He said it will change everything but is it what she wants? Marriage or her change? What about Jacob? He's excited to have Bella stay in his life but he's determined to exterminate the "leeches". Will Bella be happy about his plan? I can't wait to find out . :D
Author's Response: Thanks Krugness I am working as hard as i possibly can been struck with more illness over xmas D:
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
oh man!!!........what a cliff hanger.......can't wait for more......great story!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry to have kept you waiting!! I've been bogged down with illnesses and havent had much time to write but HOPEFULLY I seem to be on the mend and will be updating VERY soon :)
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: - Explanation, Frustrations and indulgences
ooooh!!!.........this is gonna get interesting
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: - Back To Reality
NOOOOO!!!!!!........I hope she picks Edward......Jake's a nice guy and all but.......
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: - Back to Earth with a Bump!
WHAT!!!!!..........OMG!!!!!.........what a great twist
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3:- Repercussions
oh.....It was Quil.......
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: - Why Now?!
Woah...........I wonder what Jacob did??
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Prologue & Chapter One - Unexpected Meeting
Love it!!!!
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
Awww, I've got my fingers crossed that they'll be back together soon!
Author's Response: All I'm gonna say is I believe in happy endings...........but that is different to each person :P Thanks for reading and reviewing - I appreciate your comments as a fellow author whose work I like to read =]
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 9: - The Werewolf, the Vampire and the Girl They Both Love
Really intense! There's so much conflict between Edward and Jacob in this!
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: - Explanation, Frustrations and indulgences
Awwww, thank you so much for the rec!
You did a great job of making me angry at Jacob in this chapter. I caught myself frowning at the computer as he "tattled" to Charlie about Edward... but of course, I think that's exactly what he WOULD do!
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 7: - Sudden and Slightly Unwanted Revelations
Nicely done! I really thought you handled Bella's mental turmoil well in this chapter. We can see by the end of it how conflicted she is about her decision to try to make something work with Jacob in the absence of Edward when his presence has only confirmed for her that Edward is her soulmate. Now, ever Bella-like, she wants to do the right thing and not hurt Jake's feelings even though she knows she has to end it.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
is he gonna say no, cause I have a feeling he will.
Author's Response: You'll have 2 wait until chapter 11 Hee hee =] Thanks for reading and reviewing!! =]
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hope thats good?? Thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
why did you end it in a cliffy
please dont take so long in posting the next chapter
xoxo
Author's Response: Because Cliffies are the best! hee hee an that was an evil one - gotta keep people keep coming back =] I'll try not to be toooooo long! =] glad u seem to be enjoying it =] Thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
OKAY JAKE TOOK WAY TO WELL - BUT I DONT THINK IT SUNK IN YET - SO LOOK OUT - I DONT THINK HE WILL BOW OUT EASILY!
IF BELLA WAS SMART SHE WOULD OF TALKED TO EDWARD FIRST - IF HE REFUSES TO CHANGE HER AT LEAST SHE STILL WOULD OF HAD JAKE
EDWARD BETTER WANT TO CHANGE HER - I AM TEAM EDWARD BUT HE CAN BE SUCH AN ASS!
Author's Response: Bella wouldn't stay with Jake if she didnt love him - she'd feel way too guilty =] Yes Jake won't take that well, he's in shcok - you're the fist one to pick up on hints that something will be going down with jake and vamps =] Edward is stubborn and an ass - wonder which he will choose - will be interesting to see =] thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
Jacob took that well...
And I hope Edward says the right thing...
Kathie
Author's Response: Yes he did........although he is in shock and gone slightly mental with it........this isn't the last we've heard of Jake hee hee =] Me too but hey, this is Edward, never know where he's going to go next hee hee =] Thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: - Good News, Bad News and No News
God please let Edward grow a pair and do what he needs to do to keep Bella!
This guy pisses me off sometimes, doesn't he get that Bella wants him as an equal?
Please don't make us wait to long for another chapter!
Author's Response: Hee hee hopefully you won't have to wait too long - luckily, or unluckily however you look at it, I'm off with flu - therefore no other life demands on me so I can try to work on chapter eleven =] Hope you like where I intend to take this! hee hee Thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 9: - The Werewolf, the Vampire and the Girl They Both Love
woohoo!
Author's Response: Hey Hannah! Glad you liked it hee hee! Have u added me on msn? (would ask on bebo but you disappeared) Thanks for reading and revewing! xxx
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 9: - The Werewolf, the Vampire and the Girl They Both Love
I like it when Jake and Edward argue...it's funny! Now, I trying to guess what the condition is...will it be Edward turning her into a vampire? I need to know, I'm not a patient woman. Update soon, pllllleeeease!
Author's Response: tee hee you'll find out when Edward does for sure - Be patient - It's a working progress. I tried to inject serious humour and it obviously worked! I'm glad you're emjoying the story - thanks for reading and reviewing =]
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 9: - The Werewolf, the Vampire and the Girl They Both Love
please please please hurry up and put the next chapter up
Author's Response: I'm trying to hurry! Life has bundled up and is attacking hence the late response! But I'm typing as much as I can when i get the chance! Thanks for reading and reviewing =]
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