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Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
Am glad that she isn't giving in to being the victim of James instead she is going to fight back ... exactly showing how strong that she has truly become :) UPDATE ASAP Please very good job so far
Barb
Author's Response: Thanks, Barb! I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's been a real labour of love. :) Stay tuned, there's more to come.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh man the bastard got out??? I can see he's gonna be serious trouble. I hope Em kicks his ass!
Author's Response: General consensus is that everyone wants Emmett to kick his ass. I'd pay good money to see that myself!
Stay tuned!
Reviewer: bbygoose (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 11
fuckin james... now I am wondering if for some reason Victoria is involvrd in some way but I am also thinking unlikely because of the age difference. Anywho. great job
Author's Response: Wow, I don't know what was in that chapter that would make so many people think that Victoria was involved with the James thing. Victoria isn't bad. I will tell you that forthright and upfront. There isn't a bad or malicious bone in Victoria's body.
That being said, thank you for the great review! Stay tuned...there's more to come.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 11
I've been waiting for the shoe to drop. God bless Emmy, but I sure hope he catches James :)
Poor Bella though, to resort back to losing her voice...
Author's Response: Bella's had a rough time, but what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger, right? Let's hope that James doesn't break Bella this time.
Reviewer: Ronsart (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 11
enjoyed it so far....just found it so I had a lot to catch up on...personally I don't think you jumped in with Bella and Edward too soon. I have a friend that was the victim of rape and abuse and she found a wonderful man, they quickly fell in love and after 15 years are still together....so really it's not that unheard of...keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks, Ronsart, I appreciate that you a) took the time to read the story, and b) left me a review. I was so worried that people would be freaked out by how quickly they got together, but I also know people who have jumped into something quickly and it's worked out well.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh Hell here we go. Knew it was coming through
Author's Response: Hold tight, readergoof, we're in for a bumpy ride. :(
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 11
scary james
Author's Response: Yes, laurel, he is scary... he's sneaky, scary, and psychotic. Be afraid, be very afraid.
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 11
I'm freaked out now...
great story by the way...looking forward to Emmett getting his brotherly revenge...maybe?
Author's Response: Thanks, Allegra. As I said in another review response (which you may or may not see), I would love to see a Death match between Emmett, Edward, and James. Gee, I wonder who would win? ;)
Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
I don't like it at ALL that the monster is back but I did see this coming. As soon as she is doing better he has to ruin it for her. I hope he gets much worse then jail time... I hope Edward and Emmett kill that SOB!
Author's Response: I would love to see a death match between Emmett, Edward and James. You know James wouldn't be walking out of there intact, if at all.
Reviewer: farmergirl (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
I like that this story is turning in this direction. It sucks to have James come back but it is nice to see her turning in to a stronger person.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving me a review, farmergirl. It does suck to have James back, but he had to come back for several reasons, one of which was that they would constantly be looking over their shoulders, and Bella's been through enough already. It also gives her a chance to assert herself in her new strength.
Reviewer: Zing (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love that Bella is standing up for herself. I have a deep hate for James and hope that he gets everything he has coming.
Thank you for writing this fic. There are so many women who have been abused, and this I'm sure will allow them to know that it is not their fault. I have seen it myself and know how hard it is to deal with the guilt, and feeling like a failure. You were able to capture the feelings perfectly, and express them in ways I can only wish to.
Thank you again for the fic and the update. I'll be looking for the next one, and can't wait to see how the family grows from this.
Kris
Author's Response: Thanks, Kris! It really means a lot that you said that. Response from survivors has been positive, and that means the world to me. I have tried to be authentic and respectful and to give a voice to those who couldn't find theirs. I know it's hard sometimes to find the words, and if I can give just one person a voice, a word, some strength, then I will be happy. Abuse is dark, ugly, and scary. Survivors need to know they aren't alone.
Geez, look at me getting all sappy-preachy.
Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
Dun dun duh! I like it, it's gettin quite interesting now, not that it wasn't before... Anyway update soon =]
Author's Response: Thanks, Blood donor. I should have the next chapter in for validation soon. :) I hate keeping you guys waiting.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hey omg James is back i knew he would come back but i didnt think it would be this soon =[ poor bella and poor edward =[
Author's Response: James is a scumbag and it sucks that he's back, but he had to come back because we couldn't just leave him lurking in the shadows making everyone nervous, now, could we?
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 11
I knew he'd be back. :( How in the world did he get her phone number?!
I can't wait to see where this is headed. Great chapter, as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks for the love! You'll find out how James got her number in the next chapter. :) He's a sneaky bastard, he is.
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yikes! I honestly can say I wasn't expecting James to come back. While I don't want Emmett getting in trouble with the law, there's a big part of me that hopes he runs into James in a dark alley somewhere so he can get his revenge for his baby sister. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this new, huge development!
Author's Response: Hi Jamieson. I'm glad you were surprised to see him come back. I would love to see Emmett go a few rounds with James too, but we all know he'd kill him and get taken away for a long time. Poor Emmett in jail wouldn't be a good thing. :(
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Lele.. its getting damn good.. keep up the good work girlie.. Im proud of you one survivor to another
Author's Response: Thanks, Haven. :)
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 11
I was wondering when he would show up again...
Author's Response: Well, he couldn't just fade off into the sunset, now, could he? Then we'd always be wondering when he was coming back. :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 11
WOW! Keep up the great work!
I love that Bella is taking a stand and that the family is pulling together instead of falling apart.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, LilCullen454. Family is important at times like these, and I didn't want poor Bella to drown by herself. :)
Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 11
please tell me victoria has nothing to do with james, i dont think i could cope if she is a baddy =[
i love your bella and how strong she is in this story, it really makes you want to be stronger. x
Author's Response: Nope, Victoria isn't bad, she's all good (and topped with a cherry) in this story.
I'm glad you love "my" Bella. I'm quite fond of her myself, and find myself feeling protective of her.
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 11
We care, don't doubt that...I love this chapter...James seems a ghost, coming back and slowly becoming always more material...
Author's Response: Thanks, annaciambellina. :)
James is a bit of a ghost, isn't he? He's an annoying ghost, if I can be honest.
Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
Can't someone just kill James? Let him die in an accident or something :/ Anyway I love your Edward. He's so sweet I want to kidnap him for myself. Hehe
Author's Response: Chewycui2, I have been tempted to kidnap "my" Edward quite a bit. Sigh. If only he were real. At this point, I'd take an android version of him. He's a pretty special guy. :)
Reviewer: Mishcabe (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG JAMES IS BACK. i hope edward and emmett deal with him! Awesome story! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mishcabe!! I couldn't leave James just hanging out there...he kept sneaking back into the story.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
you are simply fantastic i cant believe he found her and her cell number i mean come on what a freak he is and if i were emmett i would go and kick his dads ass i cant wait til they find him and he is put in jail for good the sick little jerk i love this story and i have loved every update you have written :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much Jessy-Anne! I think you're pretty fantastic too! If I were Emmett I'd kick his sorry ass too.
Reviewer: ugagirl120 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 11
James is a bastard as always only worse!!! please dont tell me Victoria is evil in this one... this story is amazing! looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: I can assure you that Victoria will never be evil in this story. James reigns supreme in the kingdom of douchebaggery.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
can you at least make sure James is soundly beaten and doused with lemon juice then rolled in salt..........? evil piece of dirt.
Author's Response: Sounds like you want to turn him into a body shot. Tequila anyone? He IS an evil piece of dirt, isn't he. He deserves worse than that.
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