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Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

nice story, i wish we saw Edward!!

Reviewer: missyninz (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

next chapter please. when does edward come into the picture? please put him in...xx

Reviewer: heathercmg (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

Where did you go? You haven't update in ages. This is a really good story line, don't give up on it.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm beginning to think Bella's imprinting on Jake won't matter much if edward were to come back. that's awful.

Story's great, by the way.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

That would be a sight for sore eyes. YUMMY

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Jake is ALWAYS AWESOME!! I'm really enjoying this. good pace and funny

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed thefirst chapter. hope the rest are good too.

Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Very cute story. I am really enjoying it.  I hope you keep going!!

Reviewer: KristyDi (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

Congrats on your pregnancy!  Hang in there it gets better after the 1st Trimester.  It was so bad during my 1st tri.!  I didn't realize it was possible to be that tired and still conscience.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 8

nice

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

so sweet:)

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

I loved the chapter, it was beautifully written. However, I feel like we are still at the same point we where when the story started. When does the plot pick up and get interesting? Maybe interesting isn't the right word, I mean exciting. Yeah that's a good word. Great chapter.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 8

awsome!

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

yeah! I'm so happy that you updated. I kept coming across another story that had ice-skating on the banner and would get all excited. Congratulations on your infanticipation. I completely understand the difficulty in updating at this time. As for this chapter, I'm happy to see Bella's reunion with Esme, although I wonder why Esme seemed nervous. I find it quite ironic that Alice wants to keep others in the dark regarding her plans, all things considered. I can't even imagine what their performance will be like. Imagine them on skates without having to hold back! That would be amazing - maybe we'll get a peak someday. Please take care of yourself, and I look forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: Great Chemistry (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

I liked Jake's reaction; it's as if his instinct to jump to conclusions hasn't changed but his motives have. I can tell that his imprinting has matured his perspective, but he still has that Jake-ness to him :)

I do wish all marital spats were so quickly resolved as theirs! I would have thought they would need a little longer to come to an understanding of each other.

I really like where this is going and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much for such a thoughtful and encouraging review! I was worried that trying to show how Jake has matured would mean losing a lot of the boy from the books, so it's great that you can still see that essential Jake-ness! :-D

I agree that the marital spat was resolved rather quickly, and that was deliberate. Not only was it important for the story that Bella be able to hang out with the Cullens, but it also felt in-character to me. Bella has always been the sort to put others' needs ahead of her own (although hopefully she will grow a little over the course of the story) and deep-down Jacob's instinct is to give her whatever she needs (although it's not always that simple). Anyway, I hope it wasn't too unrealistic...

Thanks so much for reading, and taking the time to review. I really appreciate it! I'm sorry about the tardy response... :-(

Reviewer: heathercmg (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

What about the rest of the cullens? do they work at the skating rink to? 

It is really good though, can't wait for more, update soon please! so far I would give you 10/10!! It is really great.



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks so much for the generous feedback!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Don't worry, we'll find out more about the Cullens in the next chapter (which I submitted for validation yesterday, so it should hopefully be posted soon)...

I can't thank you enough for reading and especially for taking the time to review!! :-D

Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

I think Jake reacted very mildly.  I dont blame him one bit.  Being around Alice will only lead to being in contact with Edward.  She just needs to let them all go.  Makes a good story though!  Good job!



Author's Response:

I agree - he was never going to be happy about Bella spending time with the vamps. But it was essential for the story that he allow it. Hopefully his reaction was believable...

I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Thankyou so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really sorry about taking so long to respond...

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thankyou for taking the time to let me know! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply...

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

SO FAR I LOVE IT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy the rest... :-D

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

well, i just need you to reassure me. this is an E/B story right ? because if bella ends up with jake, and ed as a friend...i cant take it.

 

update soon, please!



Author's Response:

Honestly I would probably characterise this as an J/B/E story - the original intention was to try to explore the love triangle more fully than in the books. I'm not going to give away the ending, but I can reassure you that Edward is going to turn up soon and shake everything up... ;-)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really sorry about the tardy response!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 7

a very jake action. well done



Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought it was in character! It's been so interesting to see how different readers feel about it. Thankyou so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really sorry it's taken me so long to reply!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter. I am glad Jake and Bella came to an understanding. I have a feeling if they wouldn't have, things would not be good for the two of them. But perhaps they are not going to be anyways, that is when Edward arrives. Can't wait.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Sorry about the tardy reply - I've been pretty much offline for the last month. I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to review, though! You're right that things are going to get more complicated when Edward arrives, so we're saving the high drama for then... ;-)

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 6

i luv it. update soon, please



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! The next chapter has been submitted for validation so hopefully it will be posted soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :-)

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter... Can't wait to see Jake's reaction... I am assuming he will smell them on her first thing. Hum? I am curious, you do not have to tell me, will this be a Bella and Jacob story or will she see Edward. Don't ruin anything. It's been so long since I read the earlier chapters. I probably should reread them.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Hopefully you won't have to wait long to see Jake's reaction - I just submitted Chapter 7 for validation. And don't worry, Edward will definitely be turning up. There's a bit more setting-up to do first, but he's coming...

As always, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :-D

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

Can't wait to see what Jake's reaction will be to Bella running into the Cullens. Will Edward make an appearance?

Bella did a great job of helping Alice see that their friendship was worth everything she had to go through,



Author's Response:

Jake's reaction is coming up in Chapter 7, which I've just submitted for validation so it should be up soon. Edward will definitely be making an appearance! Still a couple of setting-up chapters to come first, though...

I"m so glad you liked the interaction between Alice and Bella. Bella is such a caretaker - she'd say pretty much anything to make Alice feel better. However, in this case she definitely believes that the Cullens' friendship is worth all the downsides!!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

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