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Reviewer: ImYours1901 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 21
It's amazing how real this could be. I loved the ending xxxxxx
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awwww, thank you for the light at the end of the tunnel. The end for Almos is not the end for Kristen, and you know how much we love the real Rob, this is the perfect way to put a bright bow on a dark (excellent) love story. This is one of the most unique stories I have read. (and I read a lot! Usually one a day?!)
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 20
Well, hopefully Almos is at peace, and at the very least he won't hurt anyone else again.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
O wow, I did not see that coming?! Great plot twist! :D
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 18
How can this work out well for either of them? Perhaps? Maybe, but then, no. This cannot work out well in the end.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 17
Okay,so now she is totally crazy. Well, sometimes madness is the only thing that will make the pain and fear tolerable?
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 16
Aha! Will this act of kindness and empathy be enough to change him? To save her? Or will the tragic tale continue to its sad end?
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 15
This is a wonderful turn of events. We never se these two characters as advisories, but how can 'Peter' possibly hurt Almos?
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
I don't see how this can possibly come to a good end for Kristen. Perhaps this is a tragic tale?
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
I didn't see that one coming! Why isn't Peter cold to the touch? What's his interest in
kristen? Does he just won't to mess with Almos, or does he have his own reason for getting involved in this drama? Can't wait to read the next chp! :D
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
Hummm? What do they hope to find? What good can come of this journey? Another great chp. Thanks.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
So who did she go of with, Peter, or is there more to Michael than we know? (or someone else entirely?) *intrigued*. BTW: There are a few British/American English vocabulary snags: trainers =sneakers, jumpers=sweaters, fancy him = like or want, pushchair= baby carriage or stroller. These are small things, but a bit jarring to the flow when reading. Great chp. Thanks again.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
I can't imagine where this tale is going to next. :D
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 9
Another great chp. What an interning turn of events. Can't wait to see what happens now!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow, now this is gonna be mighty interesting. Great chp.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chp. Really 'dying'to see where this story is going.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
Holy shit! (well, this not the Edward we all know and love!) You have certainly written one 'scary-ass-m*ther-f*cker', I love it!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful story, eerily delightful and filled with suspense.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay, this is very different, and very GOOD. Great writing.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
"0, Bay-beeee, I-like-it-like-that! I like it like that!" Well, this is certainly a different approach and definitely interesting. :D
Reviewer: mirian masen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
fine
Reviewer: twilover123 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
I couldn't leave the reply number where it was, it was just to creepy.
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 18
I know I'll have my answer in 3 chapters - since - I'm very late to this party-but, is she dreaming all of this? Seems the only option.......
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 12
Tombstone = Robert Pattinson
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Humm, this has been in my queue forever. So now i'm giving it a go.
My interest definitely picqued.
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