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Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

I remember the story renee read to Bella about the twins. The red haired one gets the power and the dark browned hair one must die. So if Ann is Bella's twin as you disclosed in an answer to a rweview, then Bella is the dark haired twin and ...must be destroyed? But I bet somethign different happens to her, huh? This is after all a story about Ana and her twin, Bella. Itt seems so anyway.

And I NEED an update ASAP. I need more of this story if you can write more. It is one of the better stories and I hate to see those stay unfinished. I need resolution. I need more chapters. I need to find out if I am right about the twin thing and the story that Renee told Bella at 10 yrs old. Maybe Renee is not really Bella's mother, she adopted her to save her from destruction. Maybe... Only YOU can tell us! PLEASE!!!!PLEASE! PLEASE!

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

Are you going to update this story sometime? You promised Cullens and we never got to the part where the Cullens came into the story. I like what you have written and want to see you continue the story if you can.

Please try to update the story for us. We would love to read more! I am invested in your characters now.

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: QueenRaven (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

I love it !!! please post some more chapters.

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

So I like the way this seems to be going and cant wait for an Update!!!

Reviewer: bkohl (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

Wow, that's all I can think of. Just wow. This is great. Love it so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I don't believe I have heard from you before now, so I hope I hear from you again!


Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

Love! It! :D Yay for smut! Lol!

Amanda is amazing and so very calm while hearing about a major battle coming up! I think her and Dontae are going to end up together somehow, right? Or at least she might try to go after him? The way she's captivated by him, and he seems to be also (althought that might've been just to keep her attention away from Ann and Javier's silent conversation). Hmmm... interesting! :D Can't wait to see what happens there!

Ooo this battle sounds realy interesting! Newborn army -- hmm... sounds familar! Nice choice! Please update soon, I want to know how it all plays out - I know it'll turn out okay for them if they are all going to go meet the Cullens, but as far as how Ann play a part in the battle and how her shield (many-layered shield) works! Bringing up the Volturi is a valid point too! I really hope they (the Volturi) don't find out they had a hand in the battle and that they don't have to run. Unless of course that's how they meet the Cullen family then bring it on!!!!! Please let Amanda and Emma stay with them also! That would be so awesome to go meet the Cullens with a human girl and child in tow, that'll prove that they are good and wont easily hurt any humans! :D Oh, I'm briliant! Lol! But alas this is your story, I'm just guessing and letting my mind get ahead of myself! (Don't mind me, that happens alot!)

Yay! The Cullen's are coming!!!!! :D YAY!!!!! Hehe!

Author's Response:

Yes! The chapter after next (no promises) will be the Cullens. But remember that I'm not messing around with anything Stephenie Meyer wrote. Everything in Southern Skies will fit right into Twilight seemlessly. Since the Twilight series was written from Bella's POV, it shouldn't be too hard, but that's what I'm working to achieve. You'll see more of what I'm talking about in Chapter 10!

As for the shield, I think I remember Bella talking about how she could feel people's presense under it and that she could push out more than one layer so I went off that. The Volyuri's presence should be interesting and if we are lucky then our guys won't be around when they arrive!

Thank you again!


Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

Graphic, lol. I wasn't sure if there would be any lemony goodness. You don't disappoint. I'll be looking out for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hadn't gotten any responce for my slice-o-lemon :) so I'm glad it's appreciated! I'll update as soon as posible!


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension


Reviewer: cassullivan247 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

this is really good.
I don't understand how the cullens are going to fit into it though... and would bella already be a vampire ar this time haha but good story
update soon!

Author's Response:

No Bella wouldn't be a vampire at this time. This takes place the summer before Bella moves to Forks. Southern Skies is like an alternate story to Twilight. I will give updates on what the Cullens are up to and at what time frame I'm writing in, but this is taking place during the four books only from Ann (Bella's twin's) POV.

You'll get to hear from the Cullens the chapter after next. I have to get this battle out of the way first.


Reviewer: cyn-c (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 8... Brewing Tension

okay i liked this chap., very interesting to see the guys control with manda and baby

sorry no playlist sugg came to mind.

and i really hope this battle is good! i miss the cullens btw!

Author's Response:

Aww, Thank you!

Don't worry! The Cullens will be here the chapter after next.


Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 7... No Handlebars

Yay we finally got to meet Amanda! She's awesome and totally understanding to Ann being a vampire - like Bella was with Edward! I was shocked, however, that Ann just went and told her straight out what had happened. And Ann is so much like Bella also with her control! That's really good to see!

Ooo can't wait to see what the guys think about Ann's new eyes! That's so cool that she can do that! And I want to see what their reaction will be to meeting Amanda and Emma! Hehe! They're probably going to be VERY pissed that Ann just went out and told her, and brought them back with her. Wonder what they're going ot do with Amanda and Emma - how they're going ot act around them.

Please, update soon!!!! :D Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response:

Chellie!!!! I need to start making shout outs to you and your wonderful reviews!!!

Amanda has always been by Ann's side and I don't plan on anything changing that... including Ann's new status as vampire. They tell each other everything and have been through quite a lot together. :) Also, Bella and Ann may have different personalities (Ann's more out-spoken than Bella and is more... I guess I would call t concieted?) but they are very similar in their abilities. They also look a lot alike. If you look at the myspace page, I have pictures up of Ann, Amanda, Emma, and Javier.

My next chapter is waiting to be approved so it should be up very soon!


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 7... No Handlebars


Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 7... No Handlebars

Cool chapter. I just curious to see how this meet and great is going to work out. I really hope they don't kill Amanda and Emma. I'll be looking out for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for looking out for Southern Skies! Javier shows his gratitude!


Reviewer: sigh_for_sigh (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Prologue

This opening remnds me of this story of twin sisters by that same woman who wrote Ella Enchanted. I can't remember the name but I remember it being a good story. Hope this one will be too. Maybe the Twins of Baramier.

Author's Response:

Hmm, I've never read that, but I love stories about twins. They are always so mysterious and have the weirdest twists to them so I'll check it out!

Thank you!


Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 6... Walking Out

I really hate cliffs like that. But at the same time I don't, lol. They always keep readers coming back for more. So, what is going to happen next. I really hope she doesn't kill them. Of course, Bella didn't kill Charlie when she was a few days old. Her twin seems to have the same self-control. Lets just hope it sticks. I'll be looking out for the update.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the cliff, but I had to end the chapter somewhere. I don't like extremely long chapters and like to keep them all about the same length... if I can... I have one chapter coming out soon that's a pretty long one!

I'd love to tell you what heppens next, but I won't. It would ruin the next chapter for you, which is about to be submitted. :) Let's just say that Ann has a lot in common with her sister across the country.

Hope to hear from you again!


Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

I really hate chemistry, but I can understand the concept. Everything is made of a matter or energy, even wavelenghts. Ann has the ability to manitulate matter and energy (even the smallest particals) within her shield. Which I am still trying to figure out how far her shield can expand. It makes sense to me. Good chapter. I have a character in my story who is teleicnetic.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the R&R!

I am so glad you understand! A lot of people are like, "What?!?!" And it really is hard to explain. Since Ann and Bella are twins and have similar abilities, I tried to use the same analogies that SMeyer uses in Breaking Dawn, but it isproving to be dificultseeing as Bella controls mental and Ann controls physical.


Reviewer: larin20 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Prologue

WOOHOOO Sothern Skies!!!  Who is that fucking awesome Beta?  OH wait, it's me!!   Love you girl!!

Author's Response:

WooHoo!!! I heart you big time girl!

Rock hard!!

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 6... Walking Out

Thanks for writing--I'm really enjoying your story!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Knowing that people are out there reading give me the push to continue. :)


Reviewer: bdgogal (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 6... Walking Out

this story is really confusinf for me. do u think you could explain a couple things. i guess the confusion is suposed to be suspens but still

Author's Response:

What are you confused about? Let me know so that I can clarify!



Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

I love anns gift it rocks. I can't wait till the cullens and bella arrive in the story. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Ann is definitely different, but she is more like Bella than we could possibly understand just yet! :) I am getting impatient with myself! I can't wait to get the Cullens in here! And Soon!!! I think I'm gonna be bringing them into the story in Chapter 10 but don't hold me to that! :)


Reviewer: cyn-c (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

lovin the story so far.... but i do truly miss edward and

Author's Response:

I know! I'm being so mean to my readers by keeping the Cullens out of the story thus far, but I PROMISE!!!! They will be here soon... I'm going to say they'll be here in chapter 10. I have up to chapter 8 written. Chapter 9 will be a big one and chapter 10 will be Cullen Beautifulness!!! Other than that, I'm not going to tell you what is coming... :)

Hope to here from you again!


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light


Reviewer: twilightdawns (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

Gets Better and better every time i read keep writing


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll have my next chapter up as soon as possible! Can't wait to hear from you again!


Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

Lol! This is sweet! She can block out the sun rays so that they can freely go out in the sun and not have a problem with the humans! That's awesome! But it seems like she still thinks that the sun can hurt them in some way, like actually hurt them. Is she ever goung to find out the truth or continue blockin it away? Why didn't they just tell her there's nothing to worry about as far as the sun hurting them goes? That all it does is make them sparkle, that's the real reason they can't go out in the sunlight.

I like the way she's all techincal with them in describing what she can do! Lol! It still leaves them confused! :D

Another great chapter! Can't wait for more! :D

(I know, probably a stupid question 'cause I think I know the answer already, but this is still pre-Twilight, right? Yeah, yeah, call me impatient!) :P

Author's Response:

Nice to hear from you again Chellie!

At the moment, Ann is terrified that the sun will kill her, after all she was born in the 90's and grew up watching pop culture vampires! lol! She's really young, we've got to give her a break for her fear! I was planning on the guys letting her go on and believe the sun will hurt her... that way she will always protect them from the sun. See what I'm getting at? If she never knows, she won't question having to block the ray, she'll just do it. I think I'll have our wonderful Cullens show her the true sun and what it really does to them.

Also, Ann is a passionate person and tends to ramble... sometimes her rambling gets technical... after all, she is pretty smart for someone like her! :)

As for you last question. Yes this is still pre-Twilight. Bella hasn't yet met Edward up there in Forks. I'll try as best as I can to make the timeline known. I think I might make references as to when the chapter is taking place compared to the books in the A/N...


Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 5... Refracted Light

Her wavelength blocking ability is fabulous.  I'm looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought so! I got a lot of people saying that I over did the descriptionm, but I personally felt like she needed to explaine herself. I mean come on! She just blocked the rays of the sun!!! That is a serious thing!


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