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Reviewer: albita (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Pressure

so cute!! pleaseee!! don´t take so long for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter won't take as, I promise. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Woow

Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment? Lol. Thanks so much. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: AZILIZ (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Pressure

Thanks for the update! I love your story, they are so sweet!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: beensha973 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Aww we missed you ! Thank you, it was great ! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)



Author's Response: Awww, I missed you guys too! Thank you sooo much! Next chapter coming some!! xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Rob is so sweet with Bella.  He takes good care of her.  I'll be waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.Next chapter coming soon!

Reviewer: aratto (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:42 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Awesome chapter! Hope the next one comes soon.



Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

it's so nice to have a new chapter

i'm wondering when Kristen will open her eyes

please don't let us this long before next chapter , it's a great story and i want to read more often from you



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! And unfourtunately it will take Kristen awhile to come to terms with her feelings. Stay tuned and watch the drama unfold! ^_^ xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

yup! it's worth the very long wait. lol! there's still a lot to tackle here tho. how long will you have the break up between Mike & Kristen? will it be a little of a drama?



Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm so glad you think the wait was worth it. I really tried! Now, as for the Kris/Mike breakup goes- oh yeah, there will be drama! It will be messy for all parties involve. Take that as you will. ; ) Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: 112myboys (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 08:15 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

I loved this chapter. I love how you are taking your time and developing the relationship. R/K seem to have such a wonderful  and warm friendship. They feel comfortable enough with each other to sleep and cuddle in the same bed. Kristen seems to always look to him for support and visa versa. Ashley and Nikki are not the ones she turns to and wants to hang out with.  The R/K bubble is very prominant in your FF and I appreciate that. Welcome back!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. So glad you liked the chapter. I have been trying really hard to devlope the relationship between R&K so you saying you like it is very gratifying. I'm so happy you love the little R&K bubble as much as I do : ) Nikki,Ash and the otheres are there in their own ways, but the story is reall about Kris and Rob so of course I'm gonna focus on them the most., thier the ones everyone wants to see! Lol Thanks for the review, xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Lavaughn (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Just found this story today and read all the chapters that are posted.  It seems so real, it's hard to believe it's fiction.  You've really captured the characters, or how I imagined them anyway.  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Always glad to have a new reader! I'm thrilled that you read all the chapters in one day. ^_^ Thank you for the kind words. Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 12:20 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Glady your back! I was shocked and excited seeing this update!  I know how real life can be but I hope you update again soon!  I love this story! Its one of my favorite realistic Robsten stories!  I love the progression and the details. :) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I promise the next one won't take as long. Thank you for saying it's one of your favorite stories, that means alot. ^_^ Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Victorinox (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 10:49 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Please continue this story. I have been waiting forever for the moment where they will actually get together and your version of how Kristen handles her swift from Mike to Rob.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I fully plan on continuing the story , and my version of how Kris dumps Mike has alot of drama! I already planned it out in my head.....but that is a story for another time hehehe. Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 10:34 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

I love the story and all of the building towards the inevitable, them together.   It is so sweet, and to see how Kristen is slowly starting to realize that she doesn't want to be without Rob, is truly touching.   Keep up the good work.  Please, please, please write soon.  



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Your kind words really meant alot to me. So glad you liked the chapter ^_^ Next update will be quicker than this one,promise. Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:03 AM · On: Bad Romance

We need to hear more!!  What happens next?!   Write soon!!

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Bad Romance

hi I was wondering if you will post a new chapter soon , i love this story and realy hope you don't forget us



Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I have the new chapter all written out! However, since I like to do most of my writing on paper and later edit as I type it up on the computer, it takes longer. And luck has not been on my side lately, as my labtop completely crapped out on me. I will definately get the new chapter out as soon as I can. Your patience is much appreciated and will be awarded. Much love,Paulette

Reviewer: AZILIZ (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Pressure

Great story, excellent writing.... Can we hope for a new chapter soon?I'm dying to know what's happen next...

Thanks for this story!!



Author's Response: Aww.Thanks so much for the review! New chapter is done, just some editing to do. I hope to have it up soon,but I can't make any promises on when exactly ( I always end up looking bad.lol) Again,thanks for the review and kind words. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Eddica (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Bad Romance

I'm so excited to find out how this story continues.

A few chapters back you wrote that you wouldn't stop this story without letting us know so I trust you to keep writing. I hope to be reading a new chapter as soon as you're able to post it. Thank you x



Author's Response: Have no fear! This story will continue!! New chapter is already written out, just need to edit and make it perfect until I am totally happy that it will satisfy you reads. Hope to have it finished and up soon. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: j0125 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Bad Romance

Hey!I didn't expect this to stop here!Just when it's starting to get really good!Keep it coming!Now I'm hooked...this is very good writing!More power!

Author's Response:

 

Aww,thank you soo much! Yeah,I had to stop it there ,but for a very good reason (it makes the next chapter so much better) in my opionion anyway. Thanks for the review xoxo-Paulette

 

Reviewer: RobstenluvParis (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Bad Romance

I love your writting !!  Seriously it's well detailed, well written and I think you transcribed Rob and Kristen as the fans see them. Too bad that you stop :/ !

Thank you for these 14 wonderful chapters. Bisous bisous from France



Author's Response:

Merci Beacoup!  You are too kind!!  

Thank you for such praise, it's really flattering.  I'm so happy you like the story!  And I'm glad that you liked the way I'm writing Rob and Kristen;I try really hard to make them seem 'real' in the story.

Oh,I stopped at that part for a reason: which you will see in the next chapter  : )

 

xoxo,Paulette.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Maatje51 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Bad Romance

OMG....... please please please update soon... I found your story this morning and I got addicted....

I think you have great nerves to write about Rob and Kris like, I wouldn't dare to do it...I'm always like what if they read this??? I'm thinking you are doing brilliant....



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!! It is a little weird writing about some events that happened to real people. But I try to justify it be saying that it's fiction, and all in fun.

 I would die if anybody from Rob and Kris' people found this story. Absolutley die of humiliation.

Thank you for the review, and for saying I'm doing  'brilliant'. It's much appreciated. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Victorinox (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Pressure

Hi Paulette, When will you update? Maria



Author's Response:

I hope to have the next chapter up soon. I know I've been saying that for a while, but the editing process is taking a little longer than I planned. I have the chapter written( and I think you guys will like it) but now I just need to iron out all the kinks and make it read smoother. I'm a perfectionst...and my readers deserve the best!!  Thank you for your patience, and bear with me a lil while longer. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: suebee1948 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:33 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

Only second chapter and I'm already loving the way you write.  Can't wait to read more later!



Author's Response:

Awww,thank you so much!!  Hope you enjoy the rest.

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: OJH (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Champagne For My Real Friends, Real Pain For My Sham Friends

I really liked the flow of this chapter and how the plot moved forward. Love R & K!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. : )

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: OJH (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Promise

I am enjoying it. Sometimes I think you have to much "real life" though that is not advacing the story or plot really. Just having them living. I have done this too, so I know that I want to be belivevable so it is sometimes hard to find the right balance.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And thank you for the advice! Any tips on what I can do to make the story better is always appreciated. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: softaddict (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Bad Romance

Great story ! I really liked it ! I want to know what's going on next !!! I want Rob & Kris together please!! LOL :) Hope we will get a new chapter soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!! Don't worry, Rob and Kris will definatelt end up together(but I'm not gonna say when!). hehe.New chapter coming soon.

xoxo,Paulette

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