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Reviewer: 112myboys (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 08:14 AM · On: Realize

I am so excited that you updated. this has always been one of my favorite Rob and Kristen stories. i love how are developing their friendship. I always believed they were bff's who found true love. I had to reread all the previous chapters to reacquaint my self with the story again, but I still enjoyed it as much as I did the first time around. Welcome back :)

Reviewer: melbelle330 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Realize

I am really loving this one!  Please tell me you will continue this story!

Reviewer: myppe (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Realize

pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease please PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!! update I need more

Reviewer: majikdeja (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 07:15 AM · On: Realize

I really really enjoyed this story and your writing is excellent. Please keep up the good work...I can't wait to read the next chapter and hope it will be out soon. Maybe the release of Breaking Dawn on DVD this weekend will further inspire you! Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! So glad you like it. And yes, my plan this weekend is to watch all four Twilight d.v.d's and start cranking out some new chapters! We shall see ; )

Thanks again.

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: AZILIZ (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 01:42 AM · On: Realize

I'm really glad to read this neww chapter! thank you!!



Author's Response:

So glad you like it! And thanks for the review ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: bleusoleil_ec (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 05:21 PM · On: Realize

I had waiting for too long for this!! Thank you so much for writing!!!  You are the best!

XoXo

Bleu



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!

You're the best!

I'll try to hurry the next chapter along. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 06:04 AM · On: Realize

thanks for this new vchapter

this story is so beautiful , and you are such a great writer , i really wish you could update more , it's so long between each chapter

i already can't wait for the next



Author's Response:

I know, I suck at updating! But I'm trying to get better and speed up the editing process.

Thank you for the kind words though.

And I'm already starting on the next chapter. It should be alot of fun!

xoxo,Paulette 

Reviewer: lolly9 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 12:13 PM · On: Pressure

So good!  Kristen may be in denial of their relationship at this point, but, I think she knows her feelings are leading to much more than friendship. She is already in too deep to let go. I can't wait to see where you take their 'friendship' to next!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

And yes,Kristen is definately starting to realize how blurry the lines have become in  her and rob's relationship. Now it's time for her to face some harsh truths and consequencs...but all of that isin the next chapter. Stay tuned! 

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 03:53 AM · On: Realize

really enjoying the dinner conversation between them.  sorta looking forward to Michael's visit. wondering how the two guys are going to react to eachother.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! 

And Micheal's visit is going to be good! I have that chapter already planned out and I'm excited to get it to you guys. 

 

Thanks again,

xoxo.Paulette

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Realize

Loved it as always great that u updated! R u on twitter?

Author's Response:

Thanks you! And yes,actually. There's no "Captivated" twitter page but I do have a personal twitter. Feel free to follow me @   Pixie_Paulie !

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Realize

It is wonderful to read another chapter of yours. It was so interesting to see how Edward is slowly but surely moving into Kristen's life. Michael who??? Their time together is so precious, especially their nights when they fall asleep together. Mornings are going to get so much more interesting very soon. Love the story and can't wait for Kristen to boot Michael.

Author's Response:

Thamks for the review, and yes Micheal who? lol. Do not worry, Kristen will eventually kick him to the curb but it will be a slow amd painful process and come when the time's right. Bear with me!

Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: lolly9 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Great story!!!!  But, I must say, I need more!!! I am really hoping this story is still important to you and that we will all have an update soon.  I really love your writing style.  You have Rob and Kristen very real.  I like how Kristen is strong and determined but not in a bitchy way like so many authors make her seem.  You portray her as sweet and strong.  And Rob, what a love.  So focused on Kristen yet trying to remain respectful of her relationship with Michael.  He wants her for himself, but wants what will make her happy.  She has such a strong desire for him but hasn't quite figured out what it all means.  She doesn't recognize that she is falling in love because she is so young.  She has probably never felt these feelings before.  Rob is like learning to speak a whole new language for her but instead of dealing with words, it is emotion.

Thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I am so glad you like the way i'm trying to pottray Rob and Kris! This is the type of story i've always wanted to do and I am thrilled you're enjoying  reading it as much as I am writing it! And yes,the story is still importnt to me.lol. New chapter up now as a matter of fact!

Thanks agian

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Pressure

I really miss this tory do you have a new chapter for us ? in july on say soon ....i can't wait to read what hapens next



Author's Response:

lol. sorry it took so long but yes, new chapter is up now!                                                                                                                                                 

thanks for reading!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: TwilightBritt720 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Are you planning on continuing this fic? I just found it a few days ago and now that I've read all of the chapters I'm dying to read more! Please say you'll be updating soon.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: RP-Maddie-EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

I absolutely love this story! I just started reading it today and I couldn't stop reading it. When I went to hit the 'next' button for the hundreth time, I could've cried because I'll have to be patient for another beautiful chapter to come out! This truly is a lovely story! Can't wait for the next chapter (:

Author's Response: Yay! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story so much ^_^ Thank you so much for the review and kind words. It is greatly appreciated. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so stay tuned ; ) xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: beckz111 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

cant wait for next update x

Author's Response: Coming Soon!

Reviewer: gahb (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

loved it, can't wait for the next one ^^

you're an amazing writter =D

xoxo

Gahb



Author's Response: Wow, that is really flattering., thank you so much!! xoxo, Paulette

Reviewer: albita (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Pressure

next chapter pleaseeee!!! Im dying !

Reviewer: nursey (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Pressure

Great story.  Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.

Reviewer: VivaLaBrizette (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

OHMYGOSH i LOVE it!!!! :) where's the nest one????

You're awesome and have me glued to the computer! ahhh :D



Author's Response: Awww, thank you soo much! You're awesome too! Next one is on it's way. promise. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: EmTwilwhore (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Pressure

This is one of my favourite stories.... i just started reading it and i can't wait to see where it goes!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you soo much!! I'm so glad you like it. ^_^ More to come soon! xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: nsudboro (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Pressure

I should rephrase. Your writing style is quite accomplished. Realistic dialogue and inter-relational dynamics. Dramatic arc? Incomplete. 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review,and your honesty. Any advice/critics are helpful and I appreciate it as it let's me know what areas I need to work on as a writer. Thank you for your kind words, and I completely agree with you about dramatic arc; I've been taking things so slowly because I was trying to develop a solid relationship between Rob and Kris, but now I need to work my way to the central drama : ) Thanks again for the review! xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: lovebel (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 01:38 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Sweet as always! xoxo



Author's Response: Awww. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Farley32 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

I'm loving this story!



Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!! That really means alot and I'm so glad you're liking it. Next chapter coming soon. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Pressure

No it's a compliment lol I just can't wait for the drama lol

Author's Response: Lol, I figured. Thanks. And don't worry, there'll be plenty of drama coming soon ; ) xoxo.P

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