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Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Pressure

I am totally confused as to how you can do animal fries without the onions...I thought onions with sauce were the animal in animal fries??  Oh, and the story is awesome. Can't wait to read about Kris and Rob!!!

Micki



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.And you can have animal style fries with out the grilled onions on top. It's really the cheese, special sauce and onions that make the fries "Animal style" lol.

 

 

Reviewer: MARTINS (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:08 PM · On: We Are Family

I REALLY love this story... all the details are delicious. Can´t wait for the part wher they start to fall in love. PLEASE post the next chapter soon!



Author's Response:

hehe. Next chapter is on it's way!

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:36 AM · On: We Are Family


Aww… Thanks. I am honored to have my name mentioned. This so nice of you… I have something in my eye… I’m not crying… Who I am kidding? I love you Paulette! 
 Leaving the tears, my crazy strange reviews are here again. Before I start, am I just going to apologize right away. you’ll see.

Hey bitch!

No wait, I am the bitch. we are… Me and Kristen, I mean. Now that I am thinking, that is something wich I can bound with kristen.. We bitches have to stay together. Also, I have a crush on Jackson(really, I would eat him alive!) so I can bound with Ashely. I am a goofy like Kellan (like you certainly  noticed)so we could be friends. I am starting to think I shouls meet the cast myself.

What else can I say? to write spectacularly well. I like this chapter because I wanted too meet the cast but  this not just that. I love the humor and the jokes, wich I am inspired by to review, but the  softness of the chapter. How am I gonna explain?... You see, when I read something that I like, I usually read very quickly to know “how does it end”. With you, it’s not like that. With you I can relax and really appreciate. For that I am thankful. You probablly don’t see how must that means to me. I read S.Meyer’s “The Host” in 2 freacking days! I didn’t sleep a whole night, but it was worth it!

It’s really heart warming, quoting Ashley, to see my name like that. Thank you once again.

p.s You are right, I am your bitch. But don’t get carry away…

p.s.s You see, today my family went to the beach and I didn’t. Someone has to stay with my grandmother. I don’t mind, she is lovely lady, but it’s gets a bit boring around here. So,your update made my day, better any life guards in the beach.

p.s.s.s It’s highly that improbable they see this but, Captivated fans, review!! I want those extras!!

p.s.s.s.s Maybe if those life guards were like Rob or Jackson, I should have went… To bad I am from Europe. Why the hottest guys aren´t portuguese? There always a freacking ocean between me and the man of my dreams…

p.s.s.s.s.s  I finish with this: a bear hug and a sweet kiss to my little favorite auther, for the hours of a good reading, laughs and so much more. Thank you and congratulations!



Author's Response:

Oh my god, You are seriously gonna make me cry! I can't even explain what your kind words mean to me. I am so fortunate to have such a lovely, amazing, and loyal reader like you. I'm truly grateful.

And, of course I mentioned you in the last chapter! You have shown me and my story so much love and support I just had to give you a shout out. It's the least I could do.

Haha. I wish I could meet the cast too. That would be so amazing! Jackson is so sexy with his southern charm and mad guitar playing skills. And Kellan is freaking hot with his blue eyes! *drools*

Thank you so much for all the love. I can't even begin to describe how humbled and appreciative I am. I FREAKING LOVE YOU!!!  
I feel so blessed to have you around and I look forward to many,many, more chapters together.  You inspire me to continue writing. Thank you for everything!

p.s-haha.  ^_^

p.s.s-Aww, thank  you for saying I made your day. That made my day.

p.s.s.s-You heard her ladies and gentlemen! Review!

p.s.s.s.s-Aww. Atleast you guys have variety in Europe. All the guys are the same in California: blonde,tanned, and dumb.

p.s.s.s.s.s-Aww. I love bear hugs! I feel loved ^_^    *muah* 

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:44 AM · On: We Are Family

Love It! Love You!



Author's Response:

Thank You! Thank You!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:45 AM · On: We Are Family

aww Rob is already falling LOL



Author's Response:

haha, yup. He's developing  a little crush. ^_^

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:08 AM · On: We Are Family

I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:32 AM · On: We Are Family

AWWWW
so cute!!
love their little private conversations and inside jokes and the fact that they just GET each other
LOVE IT
cant wait for more
Oxo



Author's Response:

Hehe. Thank you soo much! ^_^

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:31 PM · On: We Are Family

really enjoyed the interaction



Author's Response:

Thank you ^_^

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Hero/Herione

That was great! I had to get to this point. Now I can save the next chapter for tomorrow. My reward for getting through the first day of school (7th grade biology).



Author's Response:

Thank you for all youir reviews! It's so amazing and I'm really appreciative. And congrats on getting through your first day of work!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Promise

Well, I can't go to bed until I have read the next Rob chapter.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Classifieds

This is too good! I was going to stop for the night, but I have to read just one more chapter.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:35 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face 11

Yes, I definately started this before. It is wonderful! I like how you gave us Robert's point of view. I wish I had another week of summer so I could keep reading, but school starts back tomorrow (teacher). Maybe just one more chapter...

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:12 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

This is great! I think I started reading this before. Now there is more to read!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Pressure

This is good. I am interested in what happens next, now that you have set things up. The banter between Kristen and her mother sounds natural and has an easy flow.

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Pressure

How am I gonna put this... Well... it just...

*angry face* Is the next chapter gonna take long? I mean, I get that you need your time, but freacking out over here! Really!

Look out people, theres a crazy FF fan waiting for a chapter and she is nuts!

*sign* Ok, ok I'm calm... Is just that I love your work too must to wait without screaming and pulling my hair.

p.s I didn't know if I should review again. Reviewing two times, one right one top of other, it's kind of lame.

p.s.s I don't actualy scream and pull my hair. I am not that desperate.

p.s.s.s oh my God... I just give myself a visual of me screaming to the computer. That is wrong in so many ways...

p.s.s.s.s I just wanned to add this: Don't feel press. Do take your time. Don't mind me, I just a impatient b****.

p.s.s.s.s.s I am crazy in so many ways, that it should be illegal to let me use a computer.

p.s.s.s.s.s.s That B**** thing wasn't a bit rude? I sorry



Author's Response:

Sorry for taking so long!  I just got back from a vacation recently and had no time. However, there is good new! The next chapter is already submitted to my beta. I gave it to her yesterday and she just needs to review it and make sure my grammar and spelling are somewhat ledgable. hehe.  No need to pull you hair out. It should be up by tomorrow. I hope. lol.

Remember to take deep breaths.  lol.

p.s-It's not lame. It's commitment. And I thank you for it. ^_^ 

p.s.s-haha. Good. I was worried. lol

p.s.s.s-haha.

p.s.s.s.s-Aww. It's all good. I don't feel pressed. Sometimes I need a good kick in the ass to get me to finish writing.lol. And your not impatient.

p.s.s.s.s.s- Same here. You have no idea. lol.

p.s.s.s.s.s.s.- No need to be sorry. You may be a bitch, but your my bitch. lol (j/k)

 

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Pressure

    This is stalking. I mean, I just can't leave you alone! Do you think I have a problem?

    Just kiding ;) I am looking forward to "meet" the whole cast. I sure you will come up think something amanzing.

    By the way, are thinking to write about "The Cullen Family Band" with Rob, Jackson, Kriten and Nikki? Because that I am sure would be funny...

    p.s I know it's creepy to see me review soo must, but please, don't put me a restraining order!

    p.p.s I would put some more p.s but today I am not so inspired

    p.p.p.s I Just remember something! I have to ask how Robert will react when he finds out about the whole micheal and the ring situation.

    p.p.p.p.s I guess I inpired after all.

    p.p.p.p.p.s I am going to shut up, don´t worry!

    p.p.p.p.p.p.s
Who I am kidding? I never shup up. Even my mom says that....



Author's Response:

Haha. It's all good. Rest assure I will not be taking any restraining orders out.....yet. lol j/k
And yes, I have a couple ideas of them just hanging out in thier rooms and Jackson and Rob playing guitar while K & N sing along. It will be so much fun! I have a ton of songs in my head already that I'm like "Ooh, i wanna hear Jackson's voice on this" Or "Nikki would sound awsome on this song!"etc. etc.

p.s- No restraining order. ^_^

p.p.s-Say it isn't so!!

p.p.p.s- Rob will take it like a man. He will be disappointed, but not make anything out of it because he will find out early in the friendship.  And I'm not too sure if he'll find out about the ring. Kristen has to take it off when she plays Bella, so he doesn't see it enough. I've already written the chapter where he finds out about Mike... which will be comig in a few days.

p.p.p.p.s- Hehe

p.p.p.p.p.s-Haha, awww.

p.p.p.p.p.p.s- lol, same here! My mother is always saying "Shut up,already" and I always say "Never!"

Reviewer: EdwardandBellaFan01 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Getting To Know You

Very good story update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you. Update will be shortly.

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Pressure

You must be sick of me by know... You know why I am where, right? I sure you do...

p.s I heard something about a lemon... Real quick? God, I hope soo! has long it isn´t forced and to earlie in ther relacionship,I am for it!!



Author's Response:

hehe. Yes, i fully plan on having a lemon or two...or three in the story, along with the out-takes; which will be filled with lemony goodness (any ideas? hehe)

None of that bull-shit "Fade to black" stuff Meyer pulled in Breaking Dawn,lol. But all will come in due time. (pun intended) And it will not be too early or forced. ^_^

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Getting To Know You

Another great chpt



Author's Response:

Thank you ^_^

Reviewer: RightKindOfWrong (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Getting To Know You

I love it! Your doing an amazing job with the story so far and I cant wait to read more :) Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Update is coming soon. ^_^

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Getting To Know You

AMAZINGG!!!
love it
cant wait for more
Oxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. : )

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Getting To Know You

Really good chapter!  Update soon please.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. More is on the way soon!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Getting To Know You

hehehe. & thus begins the accidently ignoring michael and haning with Rob stage. MWAHAHAHAHAHA!

~ B



Author's Response:

hehe, of course.
^_^

Reviewer: effleurage (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Getting To Know You

Throw me a lemon!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Lemons will happen in the near furure. And they will be juicy.

^_^

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Getting To Know You

That was very insightful!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

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