Great story. Can't wait for updates!!

Very suspenseful story line! Yes, Im in love!! I dont think that it could be James, I dont think he would say "There you are" if he found her.. but I do love how you used alot of foreshadowing with Esme! Im so excited to read whats next!! I only wish this story were a book and I could take it with me wherever I went and not have to be attached to a computer monitor lol! Thanks for the awesome story!

Author's Response:

Omg, I just found this review...I'm SO sorry!!

Thanks for your kind words! I wish it were a book that you could carry with you! That way, I'd be making some $$ off it...lol...but I digress...

I'm so very happy that you're enjoying the story! I really hope you're still with me, because it's just getting more intense now!

Thanks again!

~Fatima

I bet it's Alice. :) She's creepy like that.

what?!? a cliffhanger?!? was it james?? or maybe edward?! i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon!!

i am so excited for BElla and i cant wait to see who the person she is going to meet for the teaching job

i love Dr Cullen ! i wonder who the driver will be ??

Ahh you can't leave it like that. You must update soon!!!

NOOO NOT A CLIFFY!
who is it! gasssp. love it. :)

Great story so far. As if I needed any more of a reason to love Esme and Carlisle. I love that they've done so much for Bella. It's kind of exciting that she gets to start over again.

Hmm...it seems too early for James to pop up so I'm going to say that it's Edward. Esme giggling when Bella told her the street name definitely makes me wonder as did Esme's reaction to Isabella being her middle name.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

I feel the same way when I'm writing her life...it's exciting to know that she can start again and do anything that she wants to because no one is in control of her life but her. I'm glad to hear that you are coming up with your own theories. They just may be right, judging by what you commented on.... ;)

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

~Fatima

Awesome chapter....I wonder why Esme giggled when Bella told her where her new house was....Hmm Could it be that Edward lives in the neighborhood?

I love Alice and I loved it when Bella thought her and Alice would be friends.

I think it was a bad idea to call her parents and tell them her new name. That was really bad. But, she needed to talk to them and I understand that. We don't think clearly sometimes when it comes to those we love.

Who was it that said, "There you are"? I hope it's not James. But, her jaw dropping to the floor could be in a good way, such as, "Wow. He's hot." Or in a  bad way like, "I'm dead." Which one is it?? I can't stand the suspense!

Please update soon?

Author's Response:

hmmm...interesting theory...chapters 6 and 7 are already written, so you'll just have to wait a little bit to find out...

Sorry about keeping you in suspense, though...it is necessary! I love your insights. Keep 'em up!

~Fatima

omg is that james or jacob. i dont think its jacob. update soon. ps its really good. update!

Author's Response:

just for you, I'll try to get the chapter out soon! Thanks so much for the review and for reading thus far! Stay tuned for more to come soon!

~Fatima

write loads and i REALLY apreciate that!

your story rocks

can't wait till next update

Author's Response:

thanks so much for the kind words! I enjoy reading chapters that are a bit on the long side, so I tend to write longer chapters. The next update is ready for beta'ing soon. Thanks again for the review! Stick around, please! :)

~Fatima

 

Edward?

Author's Response:

Maybe

Maybe not.

Who knows?

...oh wait, I do. ^_^

More to come soon! Thanks for reading!

~Fatima