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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Goodbyes
Very good, good thinking on Carlisle's part to leave the Memory Card. Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: I thought it was quite smart, too. :)
Thanks for reading!
~Fatima
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Goodbyes
Can't wait to read about their time away at the Cedar Suite, but the departure of Esme & Carlisle made me tear up. I wish they were my parents! :) I just adore the way they've welcomed Bella into their family with open arms and just treated her like a daughter....
Author's Response: You aren't the only one their departure did that to! Sorry about that! The next chapter will hopefully make up for your tears!!
I am happy to write something positive for Bella, and her relationship with Esme and Carlisle is certainly merited. She definitely deserves having that sort of unconditional love in her life!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Goodbyes
Ah too cute. I can't wait for more. Update sooooooon?? Please????????
Author's Response: I am already half-way done writing the next chapter...and it'll be worth the wait for sure! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing again! :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Goodbyes
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Goodbyes
love the interaction between Carlisle, Esme & Bella
the anticipation of the B&B is great
Author's Response: hehe I'm writing it, and the anticipation is great for me, too! hehe!
I loved writing this chapter because the conversation flowed quite easily between these three. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing yet again!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:24 PM · On: A Loss
in general it has a "Sleeping w/ the enemy" feeling to it...
mmh... me likey!
Author's Response: that's the idea! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Stay tuned! :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Goodbyes
Carlisle and Esme leaving made me cry! What it would be like to have inlaws (I know they're not Bella's inlaws yet, but you know what I mean) like that.
Author's Response: I completely agree! Inlaws like that are very hard to come by!
And sorry I made you cry! Hope they were short lived tears, though!
Stay tuned! The next chapter will hopefully make up for all those tears!! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing again!
~Fatima
Reviewer: njdevil30718 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Goodbyes
very smart of them to leave the memory card with Edward.....i hope they come back for a visit soon. can't wait fot the next chapter!
Author's Response: indeed, I didn't want it falling into the wrong hands in Boston!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! The next chapter shouldn't take as long to get out as this one did...
~Fatima
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Goodbyes
Great chapter!
Carlisle and Esme leaving was so sweet! You really had the family feel in this chapter. Excellent job!
I can't wait to see Bella and Edward's trip! =D
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: I agree. I tried to show just how attached they are, even though Esme and Carlisle live across the country.
The trip will definitely be worth the wait! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Family Ties
Very good, Very hot Ending!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm getting the feeling that this story is 'very good' :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Similarities
Very good. Poor Esme.
Author's Response: I know!
Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Complete Disclosure
Very good, Finally they admit their love. Very good.
Author's Response: I agree. About time, right?
Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:19 PM · On: The Big Reveal
Very good, I like that she finally feels comfortable enough with Edward to let him in her home, that's a really big step. Very well Written.
Author's Response: It was indeed a big step.
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Birthday Surprises
Wonderful. Now Enter Esme and Carlisle??
Author's Response: I think you know the answer to this now... hehe ;-)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Talking About The Past
Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Dinner at Edward's
Very Good. Edward is Sooo nice.
Author's Response: He is, thanks. I love writing him!
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: bella32 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Family Ties
I absolutely LOVE this story! It's so creative, interesting, and well-written. Excellent job and PLEASE update soon; I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm so very glad that you're enjoying, and I hope to continue keeping you intrigued in the future! The next chapter is a doozy, so it's taking me a bit longer than usual, but it should be well worth the wait!! ;)
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Promise of Things to Come
Very good. Esme and Carlisle's Visit should be interesting to say the least.
Author's Response: hehe you tell me! ;)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:38 PM · On: The 4th of July BBQ
Very good. What's with Rose??
Author's Response: She has her reasons, but I'm sure you already know this ;) hehe
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Anxiety
Very good, Poor Edward He only wants to be friends. But Bella needs times. Hmmmmmmmmmm.
Author's Response: Well, for NOW he only wants to be friends... ;)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Welcome to Forks
Very good. Wonder who's there??
Author's Response: hmmm...indeed... ;)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:40 PM · On: A Cross Country Trip
Very good. Esme and Carlisle are Awesome.
Author's Response: I know, I love them!! They are such sweet characters to write. :)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:13 PM · On: A New Friend
Very Good. Leave it to a Cullen to be so smooth getting documents.
Author's Response: hehe yeah, you need to suspend your disbelief for a while when you read this one, because I'm pretty sure you wouldn't be able to get forged documents created that easily these days...although, who knows?! :)
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:17 AM · On: A Way Out
Very good, I can't believe what a Heartless Jerk James is. Very good. Nice Plan!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the plan...I was worried people would see flaws in it, like I always do with my own work...
Thanks for all your reviews!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:30 AM · On: A Loss
Very good. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
~Fatima
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