I do not have a tendency to review, but this story is captivating. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

 

Thank you so much for reviewing my humble story!! It means a lot knowing that you took the time to tell me you enjoyed it! :)

Hope you like the next chapter, too!

~Fatima

whyyyyyyyyy

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

 

I swear there's a good reason!!

Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Just finished catching up on your story and just love it.  The cliffie is going to kill me...  What is she thinking....  Glad to hear you are a HEA kinda girl because I am hoping nothing happens to the baby or B & E when James finds them.  Looking forward to the next update...  thank you for sharing.

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

 

And soooo sorry about the cliffie! It had to be done, though...and yes, I am an absolute fan of the HEA ending, so don't worry! ;)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Wow! Great chapter. Poor edward though i really hope that bella has a good reason for saying no. Would love to see them get married. When will james be making his apperance in bella life again? Cant wait for that! All though i really hope he doesnt do anything that puts the baby at risk would be hearkbreaking to see them lose the baby! Lovin the story though you have me hooked. I cant wait for the next update please update sn takecare :-)

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

 

I swear, she does have a good reason, but things will turn around in the end... ;) James will be reappearing sooner than you think...

Sorry again about the delay! RL and all... :-S

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

I always go back a chapter whenever we get a new one to jog my memory, I would never flounce as long as you promise to finish! That was a mean cliffie!

Author's Response:

Awwww thanks sooo much. You have no idea what it means to know that you're committed to this story. And yes, I promise to finish it!! It may take another five or six chapters, but the end is near...HEA, don't worry ;)

Thanks again for your review!

~Fatima

great chapter.....

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

Thanks for your review!

~Fatima

that was so bad of you to end it like that!!! lol

Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the lateness of my reply...I'm about to post the next chapter on twilighted, so stay tuned!

 

And I agree, but it was necessary, trust me! All will be revealed in the next chapter, which will be ready for submission to Twilighted in a few hours!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

ARE FUCKING KIDDING ME!!!! Why the HELL did she say NO???????

Author's Response:

there's a good reason, I promise!

Anyway, the next chapter should be up in a few hours...stay tuned!

Thanks for sticking with this story!

~Fatima

Wheres the rest?? :( i want james to come :) it's good btw. xx

Author's Response:

I know, it was a bit shorter than most other chapters, but it needed to be done...I'd rather that, than filler stuff...

Thanks so much for your review! Much appreciated!

~Fátima

Damn what a way to end a chapter......Poor Edward must be crushed, like a kick to the gut it hurts to be rejected.  I'm thinking that James ruined her version of marriage.  That it was all wonderful in the beginning and then went terribly wrong.   Can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response:

he will be crushed, but something tells me he'll understand why she rejects him...all will be revealed in the next chapter. I promise! :)

And I think you nailed it with your reasoning... don't worry, HEA coming right up...

Thanks so much for your review! Much appreciated!

~Fátima

Poor thing........he wants to be with her, but she is so choosing the maytr's way.  Or she is just afraid, or she understands that it would never be legal.  Wondering why she said no..Hope there is some clarification coming.  Nice chapter.

Author's Response:

There will certainly be clarification as to why she said no...I mean, they adore each other...even though it wouldn't really be legal, Bella Swan technically doesn't exist, right, so legality isn't the issue... ;) All will be revealed in the next chapter! :)

Thanks so much for your review! Much appreciated!

~Fátima

Ofcourse she cannot marry him...

She faked her death but is still married to that monster.

She doesn't want Edward to commit a crime or taint their love with bigamy.

She should suggest, as a compromise, that they could privately pledge themselves to each other with God as their only witness.

Author's Response:

yeah, well, there is that...but that wasn't quite the reason I had in mind...wow, what a horrible Catholic I am, huh?

I'll keep that in mind still...

Thanks so much for your review! Much appreciated!

~Fátima

Mother of...child (!) I think I missed some stuff when I forgot to favorite this. I'll have to go back a ways.

And Grasping Darkness is the shit, indeed.

Author's Response:

hehe it is, isn't it? I beta for that story, and I'm SO glad I do because it means I read the chapter before anyone else !! Her writing is flawless! :)

Oh, and as for my own story...hehe...hope you're still reading, because chapter 23 will be up in a few hours!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima