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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Safe Distance

Great chapter!

Poor Bella...Due to her feelings, I think she knows on some level that she's being watched.

I can't wait to see creepy James get what he deserves...

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: metalhead (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Safe Distance

its gonna be a boy!!!..i love this story!

Author's Response:

tee hee...I have to tell you that I'm leaning towards the male child in this one...my beta pointed out to me the other day that all these fics are giving Edward daughters. While they are great, I think he deserves a son first...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and Merry Christmas!

~Fatima

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:19 PM · On: A Loss

Im hooked already!  On to the next.....

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Safe Distance

I hate him!! Gerr. I cannot wait until Edward or Em kill his ass. Or Rose and Bella kick  his ass if he tries to come and take her... God he is a crazy motherfucker. I hate hate hate James...

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Safe Distance

you update to slow it makes me look for other things to read im giving you an 8 only because of the slow updates.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way, but as I said before, real life takes precedence over everything fanfiction-related. I apologize for making you stray to other stories, but I honestly write as fast as I can.

If you're still reading my story, great. If not, I'm sorry again. I really do try.

Merry Christmas

~Fatima

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Safe Distance

I love this story please update ASAP

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Safe Distance

I really hope that James is stopped before he can harm Bella's baby!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Safe Distance

Great Chapter....

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Safe Distance

Loved the chapter and am glad that Bella seems to sense James. I just hope she can start putting things together before things get dangerous.

Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:49 PM · On: On the Move

wow cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

you won't have to wait for long! I'm about to post it!! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  And Merry Christmas!

~Fatima

Reviewer: CambriaRass (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 08:46 AM · On: On the Move

i saw it!! classic. all that was missing was the unexcusable sweating and sad life story.



Author's Response:

HAHAHA awesome!! hehe yeah, it was a bit random, but I think it worked well where I placed it...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 09:43 PM · On: On the Move

I hope we ge a new chapter soon because this story is starting to get hot

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:19 AM · On: On the Move

Im glad that her parents are ok, but name James is in Washington, I hope that she doesnt lose the baby because of him. I am happy that she is not marrying him just yet, but am happy that she is finally moving in. Great chapter and i cant wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and liking the turn of events (well, except for James being in Washington...).

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 10:45 PM · On: On the Move

very very good keep upthe great work and post soon bye bye



Author's Response:

Thank you soo soo much for your review and for continuing to read my story. The next chapter should be up before Christmas! :)

Thanks again!

~Fatima

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 06:15 PM · On: On the Move

WOW! great chapter, & nice & long!!!! YAY!

SO Glad Bella is wearing Edwards ring! I mean, eesh. They don't have ta get married tomorrow or even this year so,be engaged & enjoy it! Gah she almost broke the poor guy, & after all the lead-up to that moment!! *swoon* Romanceward...lol



Author's Response:

thanks! I love it when chapters are long, too, so I know what you mean!

That's exactly what I was getting at when she decided to wear the ring. You're absolutely right; they won't get married today or next year, just someday, the promise is there because the love is there. :)

I love the 'Romanceward' nickname. One of my reviewers lent it to me (more like I stole it and told her about it tee hee).

Thanks for reading and for all your reviews. Always appreciated!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 02:31 PM · On: On the Move

excellent .... and OH NO



Author's Response:

haha that's a great reaction! I love it!

The next chapter should be out just in time for Christmas. :)

Thanks for reading and for all your reviews. Much appreciated!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lobster512 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 01:15 PM · On: A Loss

Yay!!  Finally an update!  I really love your story and as soon as I got that email in my inbox, I came right over to read.  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:17 AM · On: On the Move

Of course I did! Although I might be around the same date as you... :)

Another great chapter, thanks for getting to it, can't wait for the next! Also, I'm glad that James wasn't there yet in Feb. Makes it more special :)



Author's Response:

hehe glad you caught the SNL reference! Makes me feel less old ;)

Thanks for your kind words. I'm so happy you're enjoying. And hopefully you won't have to wait very long for the next chapter; I'm aiming for the next chapter to be done just in time for Christmas. I wrote up a storm last night, and already have 3000 words of the next chapter done! woot woot!

Thanks again for your review!! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:02 AM · On: On the Move

Extremely thankful for the update ;)   Well James has finally arrived....next chapter seems like it's going to be interesting. Damn kinda scared for Bella and Baby and Edward too.   Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm extremely thankful that you're reading! ^_^

The next chapter will be very interesting (about 3000 words are already written, and let me tell you, they FLEW out of my head so fast! The story is practically writing itself these days!). I'm aiming to have the next one out just in time for Christmas! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ParkerJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 10:16 AM · On: On the Move

Great chapter! Yup - you're dating yourself. ;) I picked it up immediately and I'm a whole lot older than you! My husband and I have a running joke about that particular skit because it was so funny. Congrats on the official status - you deserve it!



Author's Response:

awww Parker! You're really reading my story!! Thanks SO much!! I really appreciate it, hun!

And I love that you got that reference. I miss Chris Farley and his characters :(

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 

Reviewer: shaqbarcalis (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 09:02 AM · On: On the Move

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

thanks!! The next chapter should be up hopefully just in time for Christmas! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 08:35 AM · On: On the Move

SHIT!!!!! AHHHH!!!!!



Author's Response:

Love that reaction! ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! The next chapter should hopefully be up just in time for Christmas! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 07:20 AM · On: On the Move

please update ASAP



Author's Response:

The next chapter should hopefully be ready just in time for Christmas! Thanks for reading!

~Fatima

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 03:57 AM · On: On the Move

Oh no James is to close for comfort!

Author's Response:

I agree, but unfortunately he's a smart cookie...thanks for the constant support and your reviews!

I will try to get the next chapter out before Christmas.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 02:58 AM · On: On the Move

Oh my god I hope Edward kills the motherfucker. I abhor him. So very much.. I am inpatiently awaiting more of you brilliant story! How many more chapters?? Jw! Love it! I am going slightly crazy in my wait, and happy holidays :)



Author's Response:

You are definitely not alone in that feeling of abhorance towards James... I'm estimating about 5 or 6 more chapters, though I can't be sure...James might wish to terrorize Bella a bit more than he thought...The next chapter should be ready just in time for Christmas.

Thanks for reading!

~Fatima

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