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Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

oh my gosh i love big bang theory!!! sheldon is so... creepy and weird in a hilarious way!!!



Author's Response:

hehe he really is...I had a friend ask me if Sheldon was gay when he watched a commercial for last week's episode, and I couldn't help but laugh...I explained that Sheldon lacks social skills that most people have because he was always so brilliant (read: such a loner) and couldn't relate with other people... it's a great show. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

A fluffy chapter... that was nice! I'm sure the angst won't be far away! I will mentally prepare myself!



Author's Response:

It's not far away at all...it'll be a strange chapter, but it needs to be done...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

I loved this chapter!

It was so sweet for everyone to help out and take care of Bella: mommy to be.

(By the way, I loved the name!)

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I really enjoyed writing it too. And I'm happy the name is being so well received! I was a bit anxious about that. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 06:29 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

Awww sweet!!! And it's a boy!!! Ohhh how about Bella's hair & Edwards eyes? *swoon* I Loove me some green eyes!

Ok ok so how bout the Sexhair & mama's eyes? lol wow when that boy grows up, look-out ladies! he'll knock 'em dead!

...And on with the horror, but do u promise not to kill baby Nate???? *__*



Author's Response:

hehe

I will absolutely swear that Nate will not be hurt. I love that kid too much already!!

;)

Thanks for reading~

Fatima

Reviewer: Inwen (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

It's been a while since I stopped by...you know to actually review and pimp the story that I edit on a regular basis. Just a quick "you're awesome" and update soon from you loving Beta. I'm so proud of you for writing such an awesome story, and I hope everyone reading appreciates all your hard work. You rock lady, and *hugs* for quoting BBT.



Author's Response:

I knew you'd like that train quote ;) I wanted to actually make mention of it in the chapter, but that episode came out at the end of 2010, and we're in mid 2010. Boo

You know I loves ya! :)

 

F.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

that was such a nice surprise! wow she's seven months already......:)

Author's Response:

Yes, I thought it was about time to speed things up a bit...things get boring when the story doesn't really move along...

Stay tuned. Things are gonna get bumpy now...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

I love sweet, romantic Edward!!! :)



Author's Response:

I love writing sweet, romantic Edward ;) hehehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

well i hope that in the end everything works out! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I can't tell you one way or another, but don't fret; I'm HEA all the way. ;)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

~Fatima

Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

WOOOO!!! I died a happy death because you made the baby a boy. Haha. 



Author's Response:

I'm sure you weren't the only one ;)

I think he deserved to have a boy. Renesmee was great and all, but let's be honest; a boy would have made a lot more sense...

Trying to rectify errors SM left behind. lol

Thanks for reading hun!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

I am not looking forward to the next chapter....  hope all goes well.

 



Author's Response:

But the anticipation of what's to come is the best part of this crazy ride! :)

Don't worry, I promise it won't be too scary tee hee

Thanks for reading!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

Great chapter. I'm anxious to find out what James does to Bella and Edward, and whether or not they will be okay.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Things are going to get hairy for a bit, but never fear! I'm an HEA girl all the way ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: magic_101 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

Haha, I totally thought of Sheldon with the trains! I have to say, I love this story, and you're almost freaking me out with the fluff, cuz all I can think of is that James is gonna be popping up soon!



Author's Response:

Yea, be afraid! It's the calm before the storm, that's for sure !

And I'm glad you thought of that! Sheldon would be proud (well, as proud as he would be of someone remembering his genius hehe)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~fatima

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:45 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

I really love the name that you chose for the baby.

 

I seriously hope that neither Bella, Edward or their baby will be harmed in the remaining chapters....



Author's Response:

I'm happy the name is getting good reviews ;)

Don't fret too much; I'm an HEA type of girl hehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Fatima

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! I AM GLAD TO FINALLY HEAR FROM BELLA AND EDWARD AGAIN!



Author's Response:

I'm happy this chapter was so well received!! I'm not sure the next one will be as well received, but oh well...c'est la vie... ;)

Thanks for reading!

Fatima

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Congratulations & Preparations

Next chapter is going to be intense!  I just hope none of the regulars get killed.  If anything happens to Edward or another Cullen Bella will not make it!



Author's Response:

I would have to agree with you on that. Therefore, I promise no harm will befall another Cullen! ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 12:11 PM · On: All-Time Low

If ever a question if James was crazy that answered it lol. Can't wait for the next update :D

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:28 PM · On: All-Time Low

Man, you are doing WAY too good of a job writing from creepy James' POV. He was snooping around her house?!! Eeeek! Remind me not to read this story at midnight before I go to bed, especially since I live alone right now, lol.

Nice of you to ask about my story, he he. I do have a lot of the next chapter written so it should probably be ready within a week (or two at most) :-)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 12:12 PM · On: All-Time Low

omg, he's totally gone bonkers now.....i'm so afraid of what he'll do to Bella......:(

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Safe Distance

this reminds me of a Lifetime movie (in all the good ways. i'm a sucker for them lol). keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response:

I've never watched one, but I'll take that as a compliment! hehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Traceyh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 02:18 AM · On: All-Time Low

Great chapter, thanks for updating! I cant wait for the next chapter! Wow! James is really crazy! I am looking forward to the big climax, but am dreading the thought of bella losing the baby. Cant wait to see whats going to happen though, please update again soon. :-D

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 09:46 PM · On: All-Time Low

CRAZY!!! That is about all I can say about James.
Can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: pindrop (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 10:28 AM · On: All-Time Low

eeep. I am getting super nervous for Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:56 AM · On: All-Time Low

eager for more

Reviewer: nollaig (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

I've never left a review before, but this chapter really it close to home for me, and I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. It was well written (as is the rest of the story :)  ) and handled an issue (struggling to conceive and witnessing others easily conceiving) that can be sensitive for a lot of people tactfully and with love and respect.

I can't wait to keep reading the story!!!



Author's Response:

aww I'm so glad that I did this issue justice. And I'm glad you chose my story to leave a review first! I'm honoured. XD

Also, I'm happy you found my story and that you're enjoying it. I really appreciate it!!

Thanks and take care!

~Fatima

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