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Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Fear
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 05:29 PM · On: Fear
I just have to say that Nathaniel and Bella better be ok when all of this is over! XD
Author's Response: I promise you they will be :)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Fear
Really scary, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:57 PM · On: Fear
Somebody definitely dies tonight...
and it's going to be James.
Author's Response: abso-fucking-lutely.
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Jaimie (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Fear
AH. this chapter was amazing! the next chapter doesn't have to be flawless, i just need to make sure Nathaniel is okay! oh, and Bella and Edward and Emmett....but mostly Nathaniel. i can't wait till your next update! (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so! And yes, Nathaniel will be fine. No worries about that. ;)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: cwhittenburg (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Fear
Omg... U can't leave it like that... Come on I need more!!
Author's Response: I know! Everyone hated the cliffy, but the next chapter is ready to go, so I'll post it and make everyone happy again! :)
(I hope!)
Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Fear
That was fantastic. I would love a outtake of this chapter in Edwards pov. and the next one two. two see what he is thinking and how he new Bella needed help. and your right that was mean to leave a cliffhanger like that. So mean. Awesome writing thou. Have a great evening :)Leona
Author's Response: So funny you mention that...It's about half written! ;)
Yep, the cliffy was mean, but necessary. You'll see when the next chapter posts...in a few minutes! :D
~Fatima
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Fear
great!! hope the next update is soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Shirl3yM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Fear
Oh. My. God. So good. Intense! Loved it! I got the email notice that you posted a new chapter and (thankfully) the school day was almost over (I'm a teacher). After I was done dealing with students, I immediately started reading and wasn't disappointed. Well, I am in that I have to wait until the next chapter to get a resolution (hopefully? Don't leave me hanging!). Keep it up!
Author's Response: awwww thanks so much! So happy you had that reaction to the notification. Means a lot! :)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Fear
Oh my god! More please! Holy shit, he is out of his motherfucking mind... He will be the one dieing... Obviously he has goddamn issues... Jesus... haaha I can't wait for more thought!
Author's Response: yep, he absolutely is out of his mind...
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:29 PM · On: Fear
Oh
My
God
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Fear
OMG that is more than what I expected.... Ok my only questions it... where in the hell is Emette's back up! I hope the only one to die is James.... Thanks for an amazing update... can't wait of the next one.
Author's Response: The backup wasn't required until they knew for sure what was happening...and remember that all this happened pretty quickly...
Thanks for thinking it was an amazing update, though. Means a lot! :D
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: bookworm7073 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Fear
OMG!!! You are killing me here. I have to wait a week????????????
Author's Response: sorrrrrrrry. It was more than a week, but the update is ready to go ! Get ready!!
~Fatima
Reviewer: teamedward240 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 02:03 PM · On: Fear
loved it, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:58 PM · On: Fear
I am surprised that James didn't try to destroy the baby. What a pyscho! Looks like Emmett should just put a bullet in his head & be done w/ it
Author's Response: thank god he didn't try to kill the baby...the baby'd be dead. :(
Emmett is working his way to that...not to worry!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:57 PM · On: Fear
you stopped ... you are making us wait ... gasp ... cough ... sputter sputter
hurry up
.... I'm waiting ... NOT patiently mind you
Author's Response: sorrrrry!
The next chapter is ready! Hope you enjoy!!
~Fatima
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Fear
Oh my! James is totally unhinged. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Elbereth49 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Fear
Holy Schneikies! That was intense! Post the next chapter Quick!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Fear
Whoah...this was more action packed than a moovie....please post again soon!
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Fear
i was definitely lying in bed kind of taking a nap when i checked my email, saw this update and practically jumped out of bed. OH MY GOD.
i am DYING to know what is going to happen! i don't know if i can wait a week!
love this chapter. the fear is so real, you are a very talented writer. can't wait to see whats going to happen!!!!! :D
Author's Response: hehe I loved this review, because I know that when I do this myself, it means I absolutely love that story that was updated...so it means a lot to hear that you did that with my story when it updated :)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: dorme99 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 06:30 PM · On: A Way Out
James was truely heartless. Glad Marie is about to start a new life.
Reviewer: dorme99 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 06:16 PM · On: A Loss
This was a good opening Chapter. James is a serious jerk. Glad that there is someone willing to help Marie.
I'm strictly team jacob but I wanted to offer you support since you are such a great validater for my story.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 11:04 PM · On: Justified Paranoia
Ugh!!! Soo good but I need more!!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Justified Paranoia
I just started this story over the weekend & couldn't stop!
I'm anxious to see how Bella gets out of this one & what happens to James
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 06:40 PM · On: Justified Paranoia
oh god. She is so big. How scary. she doesnt even have Bolt to protect her. Oh god, hurry pls. the suspense is going to kill my pretty nails. loved as always.
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