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Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Fear
Ack!!!!
Author's Response: I know, right?
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Traceyh (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 12:06 AM · On: Fear
Ooh, no you didnt! What a cliffy! Ill go crazy waitin for the next chapter! James is one crazy bastard! Im still prayin that all three of them make it out this situation alive! Bella should definetly go for his nuts again if she gets the chance, thats a sure way tae bring him tae his knees long enough to kill him! Ooh i cant wait for the next chapter, please, please, please update again soon! :-D
Author's Response: I know...I'm sorry for the cliffy, but it was necessary... not to worry about the next chapter...it's done!
It'll be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Fear
Oh I hope Emmett shoots him!
Author's Response: hehe ask and ye shall receive...oops...I've said too much!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:22 PM · On: The 4th of July BBQ
awww! So that's why Carlisle was so eager to help her?! Loving this fic... although it's half past midnight and i have a 9am lecture so really should be getting to bed. Oh well, a few more chapters won't hurt... and then maybe a few more! :)
Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Fear
Wow! That was a very intense chapter! My heart's pounding! Excellent writing, as always! Too bad Bella didn't stab him when she had the chance! But I can understand how terrified she was. I love how Emmett's a police officer, and Edward did a good job figuring out Bella was in trouble. As much as I'm dying to read the next chapter, take your time. I can understand wanting to be 100% happy with it before posting. I just have one request...PLEASE DON'T LET ANYTHING BAD HAPPEN!!! LOL.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding my perfectionist-like tendancies lol
Don't worry, though...the next chapter is DONE!
It'll be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Fear
NOOOOOOO! I need more!
Author's Response: I know, I know! I'm sorry for ending it there, but the next chapter will be up momentarily, so stay tuned!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Fear
WHAT! Ahh! I'm beginning to think you got it out for us. lol. I put off reading this chapter 'cause I was freaking nervous about what would happen, and then another cliffhanger! Gah!
Awesome chapter though. If I knew how to give a "text" thumbs up I'd give you one... or eight.
Author's Response: aww thanks so much for the text thumbs up ;) And I know the cliffy sucked, but the next chapter will be up momentarily, so hopefully I make up for it! ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: C_M_Edens (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Fear
Darn you! Write faster!!!!
Author's Response: I'll try!! The next chapter is ready and waiting to be posted! :)
~Fatima
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Fear
GAAAA!!!! you're going to leave it there???? So cruel!!! The inhumanity!!!!
But... thanks for writing and updating... so I guess it's okay :)
Author's Response: aww thanks for forgiving me! I know the cliffy sucked, but the next chapter is ready so maybe i'll be forgiven again...?
Thanks!
~Fatima
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Fear
What an absolutly wonderful chapter! I loved it! It was done most wonderfully!! I am looking forward to more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 07:10 AM · On: Fear
Great chapter. I'm so glad Emmett was with Edward when he returned to Bella's house. I hope they can get rid of James and part of me hopes that Bella has something to do w/ it. It would be like gaining some of the power back from that crazed bastard after all this time.
I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so! I agree that her having something to do with James' death would be great. We'll just have to wait and see what happens, though...
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Fear
Wow. James isn't just evil, he's a sociopath. Lovely.
And you are the evil one now since writing this cliffy. GRRR!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, I know...cliffy was pretty evil, but the next chapter is done so maybe I'll be forgiven for the cliffy...?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: roseblossome (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Fear
OMG Let Emmett shot him right between the eyes!!!
Author's Response: Emmett shooting him would be wonderful...let's see what happens...the next chapter is ready!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: StupidLamb626 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Fear
That. Was. EPIC!!!! That was cool, making Emmett a cop. :) I was scared there. You can feel the emotion. Good chapter, good job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Fear
Holy Shit!
The next chapter cannot come fast enough!
Author's Response: hehe it was pretty crazy stuff happening...
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: ECsfan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Fear
What a chapter!!!!!!! I am hyperventilating!!!! So, so good!!!!! I am going to be in agony until you update again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just can't enough great things about this story!
Renee`
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:58 PM · On: Fear
omg your leaving it their!!! lol cant wait for next chapter .. i cant believe that James kill his parents!! wow - cant wait omg i so want to see how this is going to end
Author's Response: I know, I suck for the cliffy, but the next chapter is ready, so maybe you won't kill me after all... ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Fear
well im glad that they know who he is and i hope that nothing happens to the baby and they can kill him ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response: Update coming your way! :) The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Ibblet (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Fear
UGH really! Clifhangers omg so exciting i need more!! MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: I know. Everyone hated the cliffy, but it was necessary, I swear!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Fear
This was a great chapter!
You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I read it!
I can not wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: 4everLoVe53090 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Fear
omg! I need more!! I need to know what happens! love the way this is set up but kinda a cliffy!!! keep up the amazing writtng!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Fear
loved it.
*bites nails while waiting for next chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Fear
HOLY SHIT! put the next chapter out! this chapter is crazy. i hope the good guys win!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you thought so. The good guys always win with me, fyi ;)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Fear
i want to rip him to shreds, all that pain that Bella is in right now, theres no doubt she's overly stressed, i hope the labor doesn't kick in. Please tell me Jazz is coming around back with his own gun!
Author's Response: hehe that would be pretty sweet, but sadly, no, Jasper won't be coming in...the Cullen boys can handle business on their own. ;)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Fear
Wow! Totally more than I expected! Glad Bella thought to call Edward "Eddie" but was hoping she woulda stabbed James!! She better do something quick or Em better take a headshot!
Can't wait to head Edwards POV!! Why did he really come home?? And good boy, Bolt!
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda wish she had at least a little, but it wouldn't have worked with the rest of the storyline...
Bolt rocks! :)
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
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