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Reviewer: abcd1234 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:11 AM · On: A New Friend

Very interesting story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you think so!

Stay tuned for more

~Fatima

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:50 PM · On: A New Friend

Awesome chapter! Carlisle and Esme are the sweetest people, helping her out like that. Getting her the documents she needs and she can still teach. They're giving her a new life with some of the old. The good parts, anyway.

Please update soon? I can not wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

They are incredibly sweet, and a joy to create. An update will come sometime next week. Stay tuned, and thanks for sticking with this story! It means A LOT to me!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:34 PM · On: A New Friend

What a fantastic story! I love the the intelligent plot! There really should be more stories like this in the fandom.. one can only read the woes of highschool love for so long until they're bored haha!

Your writing technique is also superb, and I can't wait to see how Bella comes into her own more & of course, the introduction of Edward.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you sooo much for your feedback! I'm smiling from ear to ear now! And I agree with you about the highschool dramas...they are great, but that's why I began this one...

Edward is coming soon! :)

Thanks again for your review! ^_^

~Fatima

Reviewer: Ucjackle (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:04 PM · On: A New Friend

Puh-lease update soon! This is better than tv lol



Author's Response:

Tv isn't that great these days...LOL...kidding. Thanks for your praise! And yes, just for you, I'll be updating soon!

Thanks again for your review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:04 PM · On: A New Friend

stupid, stupid question time, but is every one in this human? another great chapter by the way!



Author's Response:

No stupid questions! :) Yes, everyone is human :)

Thanks for the question! It shows that you're interested! ^_^

~Fatima

Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:41 PM · On: A New Friend

GREAT JOB!!!!!! Can't wait for more....



Author's Response:

Thanks!! More is coming soon! Not to worry!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:06 PM · On: A New Friend

And Bella Swan is offically born....I looooved how you introduced her to Esme and how Esme and Carlisle are doing all they can to save her from James...and sending her to Forks...hmm...who could she meet there??? LOL...can't wait!



Author's Response:

Hmmmm...I honestly have no idea (*grins slyly*)...
Thank you so much for your review! It really means a lot to know that you're enjoying the story!

~Fatima

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:57 PM · On: A New Friend

I figured it was Edward, Esme, or Emmett (for protection). Great chapter. Keep them coming. I can't wait for the next chapter. When does Edward make an appearance?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm glad it wasn't completely transparent with the identity of the driver! Edward will be making his appearance within the next two chapters...

Thanks again! It means a lot to know you're enjoying the story!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:32 PM · On: A New Friend

adding to me favs....... im glad there are people  who can write about true stuff that really does happen to people. good job, good writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for your review, and for adding this story to your favourites (<--excuse the spelling...I'm Canadian!)

Stay tuned for more!
~Fatima

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:20 PM · On: A New Friend

Amazing update! I'm really getting into your story!



Author's Response:

It's great to hear! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!! Thank you so much for your review!! It means A LOT!
~Fatima

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 05:09 PM · On: A Way Out

Very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Glad you think so!

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:20 AM · On: A Way Out

ooh please tell me the driver is edward =], well you dont have to tell me lol, but its what im hoping for =] x



Author's Response:

hehe I'm not telling...but you'll know in a few days when chapter 3 is validated! :)

Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying the story!

~Fatima

Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:43 PM · On: A Way Out

Can't wait to read more.  Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying!

 

Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:06 AM · On: A Way Out

Very interesting start!  Go Dr. Cullen!  I'm so glad he's helping her.  Stupid James.  Grrrr lol.



Author's Response:

I love Dr. Cullen, too! He was a pleasure to write! :) Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: EmmettsGirl (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:43 PM · On: A Way Out

Wonderful once again, can't wait for an update! :) Congratulations on the wedding! =D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Planning can be a real hassle sometimes, but I know it'll be worth it! An update will come soon! Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 05:59 PM · On: A Way Out

i like this plotline. i wonder is it esme who is going to driver her?



Author's Response:

hmmmm....that just might be it....hmmmm.... ^_^

Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:35 PM · On: A Way Out

What a jerk. What great plans does Carlisle have in store? Ready for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is a sneaky but wonderful guy! He's got some great plans up his sleeve! Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:25 PM · On: A Loss

Absolutely love it. I'm glad you didn't get carried away with details of abuse, that would have kept me from reading!! Reaaly, you have a great plot, good characters, great writing! I'm ready for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Sorry it took a while to reply to this review! It kinda got lost between the others...

I didn't want to give too much detail about the abuse simply for that reason...while detail is great sometimes, there are just some things that don't need to be elaborated upon...

More to come very soon!  thanks for the review!
~Fatima

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:16 PM · On: A Way Out

OMG!!! is it edward...



Author's Response:

hmmmm....maybe it is...hmmm.... ^_^

Thanks for the review! Sounds like you're intrigued! That was the direction I was going for! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: sparkle66 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 01:49 PM · On: A Way Out

I can't wait for the next chapter! This is becoming one of my favorite stories to read. Keep up the good work. I feel it's going to be very worth while.



Author's Response:

Awww thanks for the compliment! It's fun to write, to be honest! So that makes me feel even better! :) 

Thanks for the review! Stay tuned for more!

~Fatima

Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:45 AM · On: A Way Out

I'm glad James didn't do anything. I guess I expectd it. I hope bells meets Edward next.

Author's Response:

hehe I know, a bit predictable...at least in her escape. Thanks for sticking around! And don't worry, Edward is coming up soon...

~Fatima

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:24 AM · On: A Way Out

hmm, nice little cliffy. james' attitude is spot on, and carlisle is busy being amazing, i like it! ;)

can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence. I'm glad you didn't think James' reaction was overdone...Carlisle has always been (and will always be) amazing :)

thanks for sticking around!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:00 AM · On: A Way Out

Huh. Does that mean that Dr. Carlisle Cullen wasnt always known as that? Interesting....

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 08:21 AM · On: A Way Out

can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! More to come soon!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:44 AM · On: A Way Out

Ooooh, You soooo have my interest! I can't wait to see how this all plays out...especially once James realizes that she is still alive.

Can't wait for more!!! :)



Author's Response:

hehe that won't be for a while, but it should be intense by that point! thanks for sticking around and reviewing! It means a lot!

~Fatima

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