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Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:31 PM · On: The End
well i hope that she and the baby will be ok and that finally james is gone and no longer goign to cause problems with her !
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:27 PM · On: The End
awww that not right lol - cant wait for next chapter
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:22 PM · On: The End
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: seby (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:19 PM · On: The End
holy crap that was intense, i missed the last update and that was also very intense. wow just the suspense it self was amazing, i felt like i was there watching it screaming "you suck james, let her go you ass" lol, but wow last two chapters were awesome. now about that cliffy...WHAT THE HELL... sorry to be so blunt but please update soon!!! like very soon, i love this story and i hope you give us a great ending
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:00 PM · On: The End
she better be ok!
Reviewer: ECsfan (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:59 PM · On: The End
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! You did not just do that again!!!!!!!!!!! AUUUGGGHHH!!!! You are killing me!!!!!!! Hurry HURRY & update soon!!!!!!!!! I can't stand the wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Still love you!!!!!!!
Renee`
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:50 PM · On: The End
What an amazing chapter. OMG I was gripping my chair from start to finish. I cannot believe I missed the last update but I am kinda glad because that cliffee was kick ass and I would not been able to stand it. I could imagine Edwards thoughts when he knocked at the door, when did he know something was wrng and get Emmett? I have to say Yeah babyz Em a cop, Hot!!!! James got everything he had coming. I am so glad he died the way he did and even more that Bella got the last word. Best ever!!!! I dont want this story to end but she is no victim and her having her happy ending is crucial. I will miss reading this story but cant wait to see how you close this glorious tale. WEll done ma cherie, well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Fear
omg how did I miss this chapter. thank god I dont have to wait. going on to the end. wow you are amazing.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:27 PM · On: The End
it's over! holy tense! my nerves were shot from reading this. I hope Bella and the baby will be ok.
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:22 PM · On: The End
Excellent.
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:14 PM · On: The End
oh god I can't take these cliffies...please woman!
Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:13 PM · On: The End
Oh please update very soon, pease!!!!
Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:58 PM · On: The End
OMG, WOW. I'm at a loss for words. You painted such of vivid picture of everything. I had tears in my eyes! Soooo glad James is dead! And I LOVED Bella's final words to James!
Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:45 PM · On: Fear
Damn that James guy is EVIL!!!!
Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:17 PM · On: A Loss
Yay! A new chapter! Just thought I'd point out that it seems you have posted the same chapter twice. Just thought you might want to know :-)
Ok, now, on to reading...
Author's Response: yup, technical error...fixed now. Proceed! :)
Reviewer: Silent Heart (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Fear
great
simply great........
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: kirstylauren (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Fear
I love this story - especially the last chapter. I couldn't wait for the update so I read this last part again.
You said a week for the update - you're killing us here! I need to know what happened. Update soon pleeeeeease!
Author's Response: I know, I know...to be honest, most of it has been done for months, but I needed to add a few things...but it's ready!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: Stormy0210 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 12:38 PM · On: Fear
Um....i held my breath through the whole thing....
Author's Response: hehe glad I got that reaction from ya!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: MiFleur (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Fear
When will we have the next chapter... a very interesting story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So happy you think so!
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: forall87 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Fear
Wow...Bella had the chance to kill him, but she didnt...Seriously? you couldn't let her have it just that once. In every Twilight book or fanfiction she is always the damsel in distress. You had a chance to create a strong independent woman, and you didn't. Although an interesting story line, the Twilight books set a terrible example for young girls and shame on you for supporting that.
Author's Response: I don't think I supported her typical 'damsel in distress' role as much as other authors have and are constantly doing in their stories. Frankly, my character is pregnant and emotional and some weakness is to be expected considering that she's coming face to face now with a man from whom she's been running for a year. I believe I laid out the emotions she was feeling quite effectively.
You have to remember that I'm basing this story on a movie, so I am taking cues from the way in which that movie went.
With that being said, I know where I'm going with my story. You would just have to trust me...
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Fear
i KNEW i should have waited for another chapter to be posted before i read this one!!! I'm just so happy you didn't end it before Edward and Emmett got there! PLEASE for the love of our sanity update soon! Like now, or tomorrow!
Author's Response: I thought it was better that they got there first, too, before ending the chapter...
Not to worry...the next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 03:45 PM · On: Safe Distance
i'm a woman and i drive a manual car (aka; a 'stick') and trust me its piss easy once you get the hang of it! :)
i really wanna wait for a bit till i can see a happy or positive name for the most recent chapter instead of 'fear' so i don't have to wait with a cliffy being the last thing i read! Oh well, onwards i go!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Inevitabilities
you are sooooo mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is all!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Uh-Oh
oh no!!! Bad move Bella! I just know that somehow it's gonna end up in James' hands!
Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 02:45 PM · On: Fear
Wow! James is a phsyco That was an intense chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: he absolutely is.
The next chapter will be up momentarily!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
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