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Reviewer: wingedcolors (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Doors
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Doors
why did you choose there to end?
Author's Response: To be honest, I like that part. Now in real life there is rarely a point where all the loose ends are tied up. This way, the reader can pick the door that they like.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Jake
very very interesting. i have read stories where jacob is the abusive one but this is my first time reading one with edward in that role. very well written.
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Jake
ok its not the real twilight so the commen about it not being edwards character is umm DUMB cuz thats what this site is 4 2write what u want how u want. anyways great story i wish u just would of picked a door...jakes door 2 be honest...see edward got his happy endin already when i don think he should have but whatever..jakes some luv 2 which he dont get nearly enough of!!!
Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Doors
Love the 3 door option or rather what it represents. Keep writing.
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Doors
Pick door 3. Pick door 3. Find YOURSELF :-)
Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Doors
Oh I need to know what happens! Please make one more update. I'm sorry, but let her choose Jake.
Author's Response: I did leave this one very open-ended. Therefore, whatever you want to happen can happen. She could choose Jake, if that's what you like. To be honest, I like the idea of her learning to be happy with herself before picking a guy, but to each thier own. This story is a part of a series that I started. Okay, it's the only story in the series right now, but I have written more I just need to submit and get validated and that takes time. This series has a three chapter rule for me, sorry. Each story is three chapters long, no more no less. I like the challenge of it. So pick an ending you like and that is how it will end for you.
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Doors
I am team Edward all the way but I hope she chooses Jake HERE.....
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Bella
This is very well written, but the story upsets me. I guess it's because I tend to be pro-Edward. Sorry.
Author's Response: No need to say you are sorry. I submitted a third chapter before checking the complete box, so you might want to read that before you decide about the well-written part. Anyway, this series is twisting one character trat per story and Edward got picked first. Others that are coming include something about Jacob, Rosalie, and Esme so far. Keep a look out, you might prefer them better.
Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Bella
Great!
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Bella
It was good writing but DEFINETLY did not fit Edwards character (though I don't think you attended it to)
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