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Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 11:15 PM · On: Curious
Ok, that was amazing. Even though I will admit that I kind of miss the romantic side of Edward and Bella that were more prevalent in your first 5 chapters. I see why they'd get more frisky with each new tussle. I just hope that the cottage scene will reflect some of that passion and love that you had in WARMTH. And please no pregnant sex scene (as someone suggested before). Bella's dying and Edward knows it, so it would never happen. Your honeymoon run is still the best out there! Just please remember that the cottage scene is another "first time" for them. It should be not only the best sex ever (as you so perfectly put it in WARMTH), but it should it also portray their passionate and now ETERNAL love. And only YOU can bring that to us. Your writing is nothing short of fantastic! And please make it from EPOV! You write him best of all! WOO-HOO!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) And I'm happy to say I'm right on board with how it will be their "first time" again. Although it will not be as careful, I definitely see more of a making love type of time. . . .at first. But because both our favorite characters are now never-tiring vamps, the cottage night will be a total of 4 chaps! And after the first time, who knows what kind of trouble they'll get into?. . . ;) And as for POVs, worry not! Edward will have his say on this night. I promise!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Curious
Goodbye, fare well, Auf Weidersehen, good night, dear human Bella - we anxiously await playing with you as a vamp!!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Curious
Woooohooooooo indeed! Can't wait!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:09 PM · On: Curious
God, that was just hot! I loved how he was telling her to touch herself. Just steamy. The whole sex scene, beyond amazing - loved how he let her take control again. Thought the little comment about her telling him - well if it's too much for you - was cute..shades of Eclipse. While human Bella was fun and the honeymoon was amazing, I am anxious to read the cottage scene and your take of vampire Bella where Edward FINALLY won't have to hold anything back.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Curious
You never disappoint me with your writing! Great chapter...cold shower needed desperately!
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Curious
I know it's not in the book. but maybe we can have them do something whil she's pregnant? we all edward wanted too :)
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:58 PM · On: Curious
Oh shit, vampire sex!! Soooo excited!
Reviewer: sarcasticcheese (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:53 PM · On: Curious
*thud* *iz ded*
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Delicious
I have to say that this is by far the best take on the honeymoon! H.O.T. This is the first thing I read on this site ... and it hasn't been updated since!! PLEASE HURRY!!
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Warmth
I loved it! You are a gifted writer!
Reviewer: leegav (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 08:38 PM · On: Warmth
that was great i can't wait to read the rest
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 06:44 PM · On: Delicious
This. Is. So. HOT!! Looking forward to MORE!! I've been following it since the beginning.
Reviewer: SassyGeminiMom (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Delicious
I'll write a longer review later but - HOLY FUCKING SHIT I NEED NEW PANTIES. Great story. I gotta go find my hubby now.
Reviewer: EdwardLover18 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:14 PM · On: Warmth
Goodness your on going story of warmth has me crazy lol. I as plenty others I suppose was sad to see that I didnt get to see any of this in the book. Thank you for writing it its so good I forget that its not writen by Stephenie herself. You use eo many of the term the characters use and just make it sound like it is really them. The only problem is that knowing that your story is here I have a bit of a hard time getting through my college hw. I find myself rereading on of ur stories or reading one I have missed. I say only 30 mins or only 10 mins and end up on the site for like an hour devouring in Edwardness! Well just wanted to say your story is fabulous and please keep writting more!! I will definatly be back to read them!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 04:23 PM · On: Delicious
OMG Edward...naughty Edward! *fans face* that was...wow!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 12:55 AM · On: Delicious
Dayyyyum girl! This honeymoon is SMOKIN' sexy! But then again, who wouldn't want to be on a honeymoon with Edward, right? Sublimely fanfuckingtastic!
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 06:02 PM · On: Delicious
OMG!!! That was DELICIOUS!!!!! I loved it. Really, really LOVED it! The strawberries nearly killed me!
I need more. I really, really need more. And oral... I need oral. Edward said later and I waited so patiently... So I need some next. please? Please? I'm dying... That was so hot. Seriously!
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 05:15 PM · On: Burning
Mmmmmmmmm! I loved it. There is nothing in the world better than sexy edward. Well, that isn't true, but you know what I mean!
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:34 PM · On: Surrender
Once again... Phenomenal. I loved it just as much as the first time I read it!
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:14 PM · On: Need
I seriously can't get enough of this. It is sooooo good. I just need to print it and put it in BD so I can read it all the time. Wow. Wonderful. Hot.
Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:45 PM · On: Dangerous
Wow! I never tire of reading that! So hot, so sexy... Wow.
Reviewer: Mace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:43 PM · On: Warmth
That was expertly written! While I'd never mess with the perfection that are Stephenie Meyer's books in their published form, I too thought that there were some, ahem, details missing from the wedding night. I mean, if she's going to go into as much detail describing Bella's old Truck as she did, you'd think we could get a little of the mushy sexy stuff too, right? Anyway, all that just to say this: you've captured the characters very well. You didn't go over the top with any of the "during sex talk" (which is a huge downfall of many of the writers I've read) and Edwards vocalizations seemed to be thing's he'd say in keeping with his persona. Well done! The pleasure was mine to read it! If you ever need another beta, come and find me. Thanks, -Mace
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Delicious
another hot chapter from you!
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:44 AM · On: Warmth
This was perfect. So perfect. Exactly how I would've imagined their first time. And undoubtedly hot, of course! Fantastic job! :D
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Delicious
GAH! I think I'm going to have to take advantage of my man tonight after THAT one. Darn you... I needed to get to bed early! FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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