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Reviewer: misscullen86 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Warmth
I have to say, this is arguably the best storyline I've read on this topic. I mean, we all wondered what exactly happened during the honeymoon/cottage scene... and most of us were slightly disappointed by the lack of information surrounding these two events (Understandably so -for the younger readers, but for those of us who are older and can, um, appreciate, such events, this story is just the perfect fix!) Some of the stories I've read on here just don't do my beloved characters justice - yes, I know its fanfiction, but I still find myself saying things like "There's not a chance in hell Edward would say that or allow that!" This kind of ruins the story for me; however you have found the right balance (in my mind at least) between playful and romantic Edward and Bella, and nothing got me thinking "Yeah, right" throughout your story thus far. To me it seems like you could take your version of events and place them right into Breaking Dawn and no one would ever question if it should belong there. Afterall, we waited 4 books for this to finally happen, and dammit I think we're entitled to some action! ;) The passion, the struggle, the euphoric bliss surrounding Edward and Bella fits their characters perfectly. With that, I beg of you --- Act 5!! ;)
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Beautiful
Just love it--I always look forward to your updates!
Reviewer: Lannie_b (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Beautiful
Oh no we need, I NEED act five! great writing - great story - really well down - bravo to you!
Reviewer: CauldronCakeBaker (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Beautiful
Please keep going. I think we all need act 5. Act 4 was beautiful. Debonair Edwars was the best.
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Beautiful
I WANT ACT 5!
Wowww that sounded so wrong...and yet so right...
Haha love it! :]
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Beautiful
That was really sweet and well worth the wait. NOW END THE TORTURE WITH THE FINAL CHAPTER!
Hurry, hurry, hurry!
:)
Reviewer: singingteacher (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Dangerous
Really great job! Very emotionally descriptive....awesome! Keep writing!
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Beautiful
Fabulous! It's so delicious I want to drink it all down!
But I have some unmet desires...how about Edward taking her from behind like an animal since he is so into looking at her ass?
Also...69?
Author's Response: Huh, I've never heard of such things before. Well. . .I guess I could work them in. . .
*evil grin*
Stay put mah bb. I realize it's a slow progression with these two, but I have some serious plans for our favorite vamps. . .muahahaha. . . . ;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Beautiful
DAMN!!!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: More you shall receive, bb! Mwah!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: spacecakes (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Beautiful
ahhhh.....my husband also sends his thank yous!!
Author's Response: lol! Tell him it was my (your) pleasure. ;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: sweetbella (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Beautiful
love it, thank you.
Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome bb!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Surrender
My husband thanks you for your divinely well written fantasies! lol ;)
Author's Response: BAHAHA.
I must say, I seem to be developing quite a hubby fanclub. ;) Hope you had fun! *giggle*
<3 Katie
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Beautiful
More, please!
Author's Response: I've got more coming to do, bb.
Wait. I mean. . . More is coming. . .;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Beautiful
I loved it...and I am GLAD that debonair Eddie has left the building...face it, they needed this, hell WE needed it!
You wrote it beautifully - perfectly!
Thanks for sharing this with us - I am looking forward to the last chapter I guess! I know it is still one chapter early, but thank you for sharing your vision with us!
Loved loved loved it!
Author's Response: *giggle*
There's a common misconception out there that I'm doing my best to put to rest. This next chap is in NO WAY my final chapter!! It's just the last act of their first night together as vamps. I'm not stopping Warmth until I've filled in every single blank of BD. . .and a few that I'ma throw in there, just cuz. ;) So look forward to the next one all you want. . .but I'm far from done! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, bb! Mwah!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Beautiful
Me definitely likey!!! Who wouldn't want to read chapter after chapter of Edward and Bella sexin' each other up?! This is why I totally appreciate this story. This is how it SHOULD have been all along and I commend you. *bows*
Thanks for posting...more very soon?! :X
Author's Response: Bahaha. Well, we can all thank god that SM filled in the rest, because if Edward had been my creation, Warmth really WOULD have been the entire saga. lol.
Thanks for reviewin, loverly! :D
<3 Katie
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Beautiful
Oh, this chapter is so perfect! I love how beautifully Edward tells Bella what she means to him and how she's still his Bella even though she's changed now. And what a fabulously juicy lemon! Let's get to the next act, pronto!!!
Author's Response: Thank you bb! And I'm on act 5 like Edward on Bella. . .
Which is all over it, of course. ;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Light
Th skill of this chapter has inspired me to rename my vibrator Edward.
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Warmth
Very steamy!
Reviewer: hakeber (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Beautiful
NO!!! You must continue! Don't even joke about that!!!
Author's Response: *grin*
Okay maybe that wasn't nice. ;) Thanks for reviewing, I promise to continue!!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: Vayls Girl (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Beautiful
Mmmmmmmmm! Will someone please tell me where i can get an Edward!
I need a cold, cold shower.
Author's Response: *glances at her documents*
Ummm. . .Edward is busy at the moment. Would you like to leave a message? He'll respond as soon as Bella lets him. ;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: Alverdine (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Light
Gah! I nearly had to bite a pillow myself for this was just...GAH. I'm not sure whether I love you for writing these awesome awesome chapters, or hate you for distracting me from things that I should be doing instead of drooling all over my keyboard lol.
Once again your delicate descriptions mixing with carnal feelings is just right. Superbly done.
And the twist of Bella biting Edward is just... *thud*
Reviewer: lynne3 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Beautiful
hey now........you know, there are other scenes in the book in which sex just had to happen........like when they go back to the cottage after they find out the Voluturi are coming.......you know, his back is to Bella as she comes in the room, and he's across the room in an instant.....
and what about the very last few pages when she lets him in her mind.......hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that could be a VERY good scene, especially if she lets down her shield during.......OMG!!!
Please keep writing...........
Author's Response: Haha you ladies crack me up. Trust me, bb, I've had the same chapters brought up more times than I can count. I WILL be continuing throughout the book - and I'm just as excited for those scenes as you!! Don't let my big-bow chapter endings fool you - we're nowhere near the end of Warmth!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Beautiful
This chapter was awesome! So sweet and tender. I am glad that he has accepted her transformation!
Author's Response: Thank you bb! I was glad too - Edward's complete acceptance was something that REALLY needed to happen. I was glad it was finally time to get it out of the way. :)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Beautiful
OMG keep going! But i do like kind of dom Edward. keep going, you are one of the best "missing moments" writers there is !!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you bb! More on the way!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Beautiful
PLease please please continue. I am really loving this, it is good to get some detail of this side of them. Rough vampire sex is so exciting
Author's Response: Thank you bb! Glad you like the vamp sexin too - cuz I sure as hell do. haha!
<3 Katie
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