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Reviews For Warmth
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Dangerous

Woo hoo, just when I thought it couldn't get hotter than the last chapter I go and read this chapter of Edward POV.  There's something so satisifying about seeing someone who's a perfect gentleman on the outside totally lose their cool and become a sex starved maniac.  Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Dangerous

Oh God! Oh God! Oh God! I'm in total agreement with Bella.

Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Light

I don't know if I can handle it in EPOV. Oh, who am I kidding? We all need it.

Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Warmth

I think my brain just shut down. Thanks so much for filling in the blanks. I think I need a cold shower. Or a vampire. Or something.

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Light

LOL I love how you worked the pillow biteing into this chapter.  For Bella to not have noticed it he HAS to be an amazing lover, which isn't surprising really.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: jazzy89 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Battle

i love the cheesiness!! and i cant wait to see more of edward getting wild :):) update soon!!

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Battle

Wow! This is fantastic! I particularly like the lines:

As much as I wanted to own her, to fuck her until her legs trembled and she couldn't see straight, my Bella had other plans. She was a newborn vampire, and as such, she was subject to the same primal and unruly instincts that had always seethed inside of me. And she was ready for battle.

And you have a really awesome vocabulary, btw! Looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, bb-love! I like those lines too! And that has nothing whatsoever to do with the fact that Edward said 'fuck'. . .nope, not a thing. . .:whistles innocently: ;)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I love them so!

<3 Katie

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Battle

Also, forgot to mention that I loved the cheesiness of it all!

Reviewer: Hespera (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Surrender

How much love do you want and need? I need to get myself an Edward. The cold shower didn't last very long. I am already hyperventilating, and if this goes on, I will probably die of sexual frustration.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Battle

that was efffffin H-O-T-T HOT!!!!!!!!!

 

Dude.....he could take me anywhere he wanted! 

 

Nice show of raw, intense passionate love!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: jen280289 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Battle

amazing, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Warmth

Pefect!!!!  That's all I can say...can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Battle

Guh.  I don't know if I have words besides, guh.

That was just pretty damn hot!  NICE update!!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Warmth

I dont usually send reviews but this was always how I thought the first time they were together as man and wife should be   brava



Author's Response:

Thank you bb, I really appreciate it! :)

<3 Katie

Reviewer: Hespera (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Delicious

Wow! What can I say?!? Where's a man when you need one. Hot damn. I think it's time for some manual labour and a very cold shower.

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Warmth

Excellent start to this lovely piece of smut.  I always hated that BD faded to black, this was the sexy fun times I was looking forward to but didn't get delievered.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: sweetstarryeyes (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Battle

This was one of the first fics I read through when I found TWILIGHTED (because it took me almost a year to go, "Someone has to have as dirty a mind as I have and tried to fill in the blanks in BD."  It's great, I love reading it!  I was hoping you'd update it soon, and you did not disappoint.  Can't wait to read what happens after the arm wrestling match!

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Battle

this ending was cheesy but absolutely adorable and "aww" inducing.

loved this. :D

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Battle

I loved this chapter!!!   I liked their wild lovin!!   I hope to read more!!

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Battle

That was the hottest vampire sex ever!

Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Taste

I am speechless.  Believe me, that's rare coming from me.  I just can't find any words to describe this chapter.  As usual, you've left me anxious to read the next chapter.  I haven't been this engrossed in something since I started reading "Twilight"...lol.  Keep up the amazing work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much bb!! I'm so glad you're liking Warmth - seriously, this fic is my baby. :) Hope you enjoy the rest - and an update should be on the way shortly!

<3 Katie

Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Delicious

Holy crap!  That was incredible.  You could make a killing writing those "smutty" little romance novels, I swear.  I can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Surrender

OMG!  That was absolutely amazing.  You are very talented.  It was so much better than I imagined it.  It was insanely erotic.  Wow!  Thank you for endulging us.  I cannot wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: xaerogirl21x (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Warmth

ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!!!! holy crap, I must go find new underwear now..

THANKS!! <3

Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Delicious

god yes!

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