Looooooved it!

Very good smutline; note that there is very little from the surrounding story included and holds substance only because you can easily picture the scenes in Breaking Dawn - really liked the fight sequence and even cried a little when they thought it was the last time

Stephenie Meyer would be so proud of you ---I am too! Sexy, well-written fiction is an art to be respected and treasured. Be happy and proud that you possess it! In the previous chapter, the desperation to freeze time for love between Bella and Edward was almost excruciating! Yet here in this chapter, there's so much of time and its eternity waiting for Edward and Bella as they watch Renesmee grow and continue to discover each other! They are probably the luckiest literary characters I have ever experienced and Stephenie Meyer and you have all the credit! Thank you!

I got as scared as Bella did ---just thinking that Edward left the cottage to go home to the Cullens' home to ponder and suffer about Bella's impending trip to Italy! I'm glad to see, however, that Edward showed his true abilities as a man and as a husband ---and waited for Bella's return! I had visions of Edward feeling a tincture of the suffering Bella must have felt all those months when Edward left after Jasper's attack on Bella. Bella never gave up hope or faith that Edward would trust Bella and trust their love then and now. Trust has been a hard lesson for Edward to learn.

Well, yes, YES!! I love our Edward so much! I saw the Mountain Lion stalking his Mate and that Mountain Lion's sole, slow purpose was satisfaction! What book did they read together; was it an erotic fantasy!? Well done!

So delicious! Thank you!!

The powers of the incubus!!! Hoooooo-weee! All the other trysts were just Edward's sweet, loving, and always gentlemanly manner to prepare Bella for what Edward could really do in their bedroom! It would seem the incubus Edward) always holds the most control sexually?! If there is complete love coupled to this erotic, hypnotic, incubus power unconditionally, then I can't see how any succubus (Bella) wouldn't mind occasionally, be in second command during lovemaking! However, I feel it's vital that both sexual partners take turns in dominance in lovemaking. Blessedly, our Edward always believes in sharing control with Bella; yet, Edward perceives himself as the ultimate responsibility for the sexual pleasure Bella and he experience! Edward is just so sweet, tender, loving and downright sexy!!! Yes! I guess this may also be a reflection of the male-female social/sexual relationship era in which Edward lived while human! Oh, for a lover like him! 

I was panting along and wept just a tiny bit; Edward and Bella were finally free!!

OOoooooo! I can't wait! Oh those Twilight vampire men are some kind of lovers! Exercises were never so sexy! YES! This was too HOT; it really hit the spot, LOL!

Edward always said that Bella didn't see herself clearly  ---Bella just learned her feminine powers in the bedroom! The passion and release were exquisite!

I want both, LOL!  I can't get enough of my Edward!

It's a great story! i'm seriousely reading it for the second time already!

Fan-fucking-tastic!

Love, -Little-Melody- 

 

(i'm from holland so,..don't pay atention on my bad english! ;) )