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Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
WOW HE MUST REALLY MISS BELLA WHY DID HE SAY UR BUSH IS GROWING BACK I WAS SHOCKED DID ROSE GET A BLACK EYE HAHAHHA EDWARD AND BELLA SITIUATION IS SO SAD TO ME ....
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Wow! E had a breackdown!! I feel so bad for him and B. Please update soon =)
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I liked the ending of this chapter. Thank you for letting us in Edward's head for a few minutes. Not enough writers do that. Keep writing fast! I can't wait to see how our rebel without a clue gets back his girl!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I'm digging the angst but I definitely want a resolution in the near future. I can definitely see how he needs all of this to happen to mature, though. can't wait for more!
Reviewer: WouldYouLookAtThat (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
YES! ANGST! Love it. Love this story.
Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
This breaks my heart, but I do love the angst... this stuff is amazing!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Poor Edward and Bella!
Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I can't even be like "OMG I hate you" because I still love this story.
I got chocolate to celebrate the su[er-fast update. Seriously, you think I'm kidding, but I'm not.
Hehe, lord knows I needed a good dose of angst this morning. XD
Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Excellent chapter
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
In this case Jasper was right... "And furthermore, all that stuff you call me a pussy for, well, I'd rather be all of those things with Alice, than none of those things without her"
We didn't get much of Rosalie in this chapter (other than from a third POV) I would have loved to see what she thought about Bella and Edward's breakup.
Edward has a terrible case of immaturity...going to the extreme...he resolves everything with sex and anger. And I think for now that would only hurt Bella and eventually break them farther apart, so, if Edward wants to keep Bella for good he has to grow, big time!!! And jealous times are the funniest, so please please, pimp that Newton boy to the max!! :D Obvs not get them together, just the right amount for Edward to get out of his bubble.
It's still not clear to me if Edward really slept with Rosalie or not...will we get the answer later or I'm just thick??
Anyhow loved this chapter!! I think it was a necessary evil!! Thanx so much!
Author's Response: haha! Thanks for the review. Um, yes. Edward slept with Rosalie. And yes, you'll hear it again, but not at length. And I'm guessing you liked the quote from Jasper?
Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Phenomenal! Great story. I really can't wait to see where this is going. Bella and Edward need to get back together!!
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
more please,one update is just not enough. I love his anger he needs to figure things out !!!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I LOVED the chapter - very emotional! Please update as soon as you can. The story's one of my Favorites.
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
geez, angst much?
luv the story! and i hope rosalie goes and dies in a hole :P
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
aww
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
its tortuuuuuuuuuuuure waiting for an update on this story!!!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Ah, christ. As fucked up as your Edward is, I really like him. Okay, so he's acting like a total prick right now, but he's interesting.
Great writing, can't wait to see how much worse this gets before it gets better.
Author's Response: omigosh thank you so much for your review. I was really hoping that I didn't make Edward unlikeable here!
Reviewer: angela90210 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
this was an AMAZING chapter.. so emotional. i loved it.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
How heartbreaqking. Not just for Edward and Bella but for Carlisle and Esme. It's pretty obvious that Edward has some major anger issues.
Edward is going to need to do some pretty major groveling to get Bella back. Wonder how long he is going to hold out....
Reviewer: edward0313 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
omg noooo jake please.....get edward back with bella
Author's Response: Jake? There's no jake in my story...none at all!
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
AHHH! So angsty, I hated this chapter but loved it at the same time. Hurst so good.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Uh, ugh! That was painful! For both of them. And Carlisle. And Esme. Well, let's see how he works it out.
Reviewer: meadow11 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
wow- edward has some serious issues- hopefully he works them out soon and gets bella back!!! please update soon!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Wow, what a douche! I love this story.
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