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Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Time for Edward to hit rock bottom, I guess, and I like it. Great update!
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I loved this chapter, I loved the emotion in it!
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
No hate mail, just a statement: didn't like reading Edward morphing into a jerk. I don't even know if jerk is accurate as it seems as if Edward needs to grow to even become a jerk.
I'll give you some advice: be careful not to paint yourself into a corner with Edward. I would hope that you wouldn't want Bella to come off as weak or a fool for trusting Edward ever again.
Just my two cents.
Author's Response: For Edward to react any way other than how he's ever reacted would be unrealistic at this juncture. At this point, how he feels does not factor into things as much as how he thinks she feels about him. That is what he is reacting to. So for her to have an affect on his personality right now would be contrived and meaningless.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
please please update soon ... you cant leave it like that for too long .... thats just heartbreaking !! poor bella and poor edward!
Reviewer: wallawallamama (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
This chapter made me cry! They've come so far together, it's breaking my heart to see them apart and miserable. I love/hate the destruction of the car. To take his rage out on the one material possession he love most - genius! Edward NEEDS Bella - I can't wait to see how you fix this. I'm counting on you to fix this...
Author's Response: I think I might be up for the challenge ;)
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
poor eddie boy he a b sometimes thow rose ruined everything u know how to make some 1 hate a b.itch love this story i log on this every day
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
omh.. this chapter is heartbraking.. it almost had me in tears. well actually i was trying to stop myself from crying because my bro is here in the room with me right now and would give me hell if he saw me crying in front of the computer.
but really... it really tore my heart.. i totally understand edward's attitude here. we can't expect him to change overnight. but i'm glad that he acknowledge the fact that he's hurting. it means he misses bella and could possibly realize how deep his feelings are for her.
please please please update soon!!
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Love it. the characters are developing so well. all this angst has to happen, I'm so sick of reading fluffy happy endings and perfect relationships. I want more..now please.
Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
loved it!
Reviewer: paris877 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Poor Bella and the bush joke :(, I kind of hope that she does get a little vengence with Newton he he. Dickward kind of deservs it at this point.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
No hatemail from me. :)
I loved the chapter. It was intense. But Rosalie ... ugh. Hate her. Alice is becoming pretty awesome, though.
Anyways, I can't wait for more. Update soon?
Reviewer: Michs95 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Poor Edward...he just doesn't know how to deal with his emotions. If he actually seemed upset, then Bella would probably take him back. I'm anxious to see what his next move is going to be since Bella isn't likely to make the first move towards talking, unless someone tells her about Edward's episode with the car. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one! Please hurry back with more!
Michelle
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Oh Edward... waaaahhhhh....
Reviewer: lenny7 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
oh no poor edward and bella. And the car!!!!!!! please update soon so we can get a bit of happiness
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
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No, I love it. He's been an immature douche--self centered, egotistical a**hole. I am glad actually he's hitting rock bottom. He needs to get some sense knocked into his head. I really love the metamorphosis that Bella went through. Kicking Rosalie's ass was awesome!
Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
growing pains are kind of like cramps that way. they come more often than you'd like, and they hurt like hell, but you know they'll be over in a few days. lets just hope edward's over his pms and crampage issues, hmmm?
Author's Response: haha. LOVE your analogy!
Reviewer: Edcob (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
can i just beg you to please update like now!
I love this, it would be very hard to drag it out. It's just that good.
Thank you for writing and updating faster than most authors!
-emily-
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I hope you don't drag this out, because Edward will destroy everything he has worked for so far. Bella needs to grow as well.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
wow! poor Edward those 2 just need to talk to each other
Reviewer: hugsandkisses1320 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Does Edward have some sort of mental disorder? Great story, please update agsin soon. ♥.♥.♥
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I really think this was the best chapter yet! Not happiness-wise, but you know :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
OH MY GOD!! Edward is being so cruel to Bella. It was foul what he said about her hair down below! In front of Jasper and Alice! What a complete fucker!! HOLY HELL!! It is breaking my heart watching him fall apart. Poor Bella. I loved how he was towards Rose though. CANNOT wait for more! Awesome job!
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I actually really liked this chapter. It showed Edwards anger issues and vulnerability. While I don't want E/B broken up I do want their relationship to last. I also would love to see someone (especially Edward) confront Rosalie and completely call her out on her bs behavior.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really struggled with this chapter!
Reviewer: MsM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I'm recent to your story, but I look forward to each post.
I have to say this was an amazing chapter. I wasn't sure how you were going to handle the "after" situation but I could not look away.
I wonder if Rosalie realizes that she may have done some major damage, and not just to Edward. To Bella, herself, and her "friendships".
I kinda wish that Edward understood that he is very much loved, but I know in your story he was adopted when he had been through the system for some time. I guess it's tough to shake the feeling of fight or flight.
So, any chance you could post the next chapter soon? Like in a next day or two? Kinda on the edge of my seat here.
Author's Response: thank you for taking the time to review and I will update ASAP!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Soooooo sad! UGHHHHH I hate rosalie! please update soon! this chapter was great! Update soon!
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