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Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Firsts
OMG CLIFF!!!! Man!! I gotta pee...hmmmm...
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
No! GO. AWAY. CHARLIE!!!!!! MANNNNN!!! !It was JUST getting hot. A bit ooc, but the stories AU and, well, I'm not complaining.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Not Going to Happen
Awww. See!!! She CHANGED him!!!!!!!!!!! She makes him think CUTE, and he wants to hold her hand!!!!!!
Genious. *shakes her head* Genious.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Uncharted Territory
Yay!! They KISSED!!!! They kissed. They kissed. They kissed. XD
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Learning to Inhale
DAMN Y OU EDWARD!!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU KISS HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome. And they looooov eachother.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing each chapter. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Questions & Answers
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to get caught up with the story so I can be one of the people screaming 'UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!'
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Kiss & Tell
Wow. You really are a genious. The small things, like worm throwing, Esme knew she was mad, they LIKE eachother and don't know, him apologizing cause she was sad, G-E-N-I-O-U-S!!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Girlfriends & Boyfriends
As soon as he 'said' Should I look for an angry football player I KNEW he was asking if she had a boyfriend. And the small details you put into this, like dinner. Wow. You are a genious. Genious!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Victory
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! EMMET ENTERED THE STORY!!!!!!!!! IM SCREAMING LIKE THE CRAZED FANGIRL I AM!!!!!!!!!! Wow. Carlisle wasn't kidding when he said he couldn't read. Yay! We won. TAKE THAT EDWARD!
Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
So I just read your entire series today and I'm hooked. I agree that this pain is necessary, especially for broody Edward. So obviously Bella and Edward should get back together, but don't make it easy for Edward, especially with all his cruel remarks. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Playing the Field
Wow. That was powerful. I loved the part with Alice crying. Guys can't take a crying girl. And I can't wait for Bella to come back. But I kind of want Bella and Edward to get into a screaming fight cause she is tired of his bullshit and yeah. Oh, and I'm Kiki. I'm new to this site.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
I HATE HER!!!! I HATE HER I HATE HER I HATE HER!!!!!!!! I'm gonna die her bimbo blonde hair green and put orange paint in her spray tan bottle! then she'll be an oompa loompa!!! then I'm gonna put Edward and Bella in a room together and lock the door or doors and windows. Then i will force them to talk. After that, I'm gonna put them both in couples therapy and put Edward in his own therapy sessions. He needs help.
~ B
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
Haha. 'At least he came out of his room.' This story is outstanding. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Confusion
That was awesome!!! I LOVED the end conversation. This story is amazing.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Aloof
Ooooh. Come to the dark side. We have Edward Cullen. Hehe.... AND THERE IS NO EMMETT IN THE STORY!!!!!! WHAT!!!!!!!! DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW OBBSESSED I AM WITH HIM!! LOOK AT THE NAME. LOOK AT IT.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Need for Education
Ooooh. The story is already immensly better just by this one chapter. Your amazing.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
Ooooh. This is such a great first chapter. What a great way to pull the readers in. I'm already in love with it and I've read one chapter.
Author's Response: That's great. I think I lost a lot of people after the first chapter because they didn't understand it. I'm glad you kept reading.
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
wow i cannot believe how things went down that is insane
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Scary chapter but I like where I can feel this going. More please soon.
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Do people really send you hatemail?? OH my god that's terrible. You give up your spare time to write entertaining stories for people to read for free and they send you hatemail!!! I can't believe it. If fanfic was all peaches and cream all the time then it would be boring. We have to have the angst to make the lemons all the more sweet! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
My heart broke for the both of them during this chapter. Edward unleashing his frustrations on his car was intense. I really was angry with him at the beginning of the chapter, when he lost it, but then again, he felt cornered and when people feel cornered, they'll always either back down or bite. The rude comment towards Bella was mean, but I'll sum it up to his thought of 'Bella not hurting the way the way he was' and wanting to make her. Not that that makes it better, but somewhat understandable from his point of view.
Jasper's right; Rosalie got exactly what she wanted and although a punch in her face would be satisfactory, there's gonna be a better way to handle her. Besides, Bella already took care of that ;)
Please update soon; to quote Book-Edward: The suspense is painful.
I've said it before, I'll say it again: This is absolutely my favorite story at the moment!
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
ahh.
i dunno what to say.
awesome chapter.
Reviewer: belwardislove (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
i still love you *grins* even if you broke my heart with this chapter.
hope that the silver lining's gonna come soon though....please *begs*
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Oh, what an awful, wonderful chapter! This was so hard to read, both of them making each other miserable when they belong together making each other happy. Edward acted & reacted so horribly to Bella's confrontation - if only he had learned how to communicate with others before it came down to losing his soulmate because he never let her understand that he loved her. What a messed up pair - Edward doesn't recognize how insecure Bella is & how much she loves him & Bella doesn't recognize how emotionally stunted Edward is nor how much he loves her. Aargh - the angst is seriously bumming me out! And when Edward takes it out on his car -- Very well-written! You've done such a good job with this complicated Edward that even when he's being esp hurtful & obnoxious & clueless, a reader can't hate him & instead feels for him. I feel so sorry for everyone right now, esp. poor Carlisle & Esme who've tried so hard only to be faced with Edward's complete breakdown. Please give us more soon so we can move past the sad badness. Please let things get better next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful review! I promise to keep the story going and update soon!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
Yikes! I'm feeling really badly for Edward. I hope he's able to grow from this.
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