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Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
Sigh. I hate seeing the white review box. It means the chapter's over, and now I have to wait! lol.
Anyways, can't wait for the next update. Hope it comes as quick as this one was. :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
Sweet!
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
girl, im icelandic and i would really like to know what the icelandic version of yiddish sounds like!
still my fav story :D:D
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
OH!!! OH!!! Edward and Bella so need to make up!!! and while Charlie is away would be even better - it means a house alone... :)
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
I'm so glad that Edward is maturing and trying to make himself better! CAn't wait for more!! xx
Reviewer: bnj637 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
augh! i hate reaching the end of the chapters! i just want to keep reading....
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
Yay, he's trying!! I wonder what step three of Jasper's plan will be?? Also, I'm glad he's got Brian...it's important for him to have someone he'll respect and look up to, who expects good things from him.
Great chapter! I was so excited that it came so soon....it totally made my day!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
Oh! That melted my ice cold heart...So good!! I'm so glad you were moved by reviewers and updated :D Great great great update!!
I loved every bit of this chapter. I'm so thrilled to learn how Edward is improving (those little steps of before are lunges now!! :D), and he's really transforming, for real, for himself and Bella. To understand that he couldn't behave like that anymore, that he was hurting everyone around him (not only Bella, but Carlisle, Esme and his little sister, not to mention himself)...that's the biggest step of all.
I'm so glad Carlisle didn't give up, and that Brian appeared in Edward's life. Maybe destroying the car was the best thing that could happen. Wonder if they're really going to repair Bella's monstruosity, I hope they will, I love that car, as much as I love Charlie. And speaking of Charlie, well done ;) Terrific dialogue, maybe Charlie isn't as clueless as he seems. (not like Renee, she IS clueless!! :P)
That last scene, was totally win!! :D
Thanx so much!! Can't wait for more and learn what's Jasper's next step ;) I always knew he was the smart one!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
YAY!!!! LOVED IT!
Reviewer: Jacky-Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
At least Edward is trying to change! I just love this story, update soon!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins
Great update!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
this story is amazing i read every chapter
we just need u to 1000 view that awesome
love this story
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
i can't remember if i commented on this story or not, but i read the entire thing yesterday and i love it!! such a great story! can't wait for the next chapters!!!
Reviewer: iCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
OOh, someone touched Edward's girl!! He must be pissed!
Reviewer: LDB (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
Though I am long past my high school years, I find myself loving this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Fiddle (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
Aaahh, I love this story, and this chapter was just great. Edward's growth is heartwarming. Yay for Alice-free days at school if it gets theses two back together.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
This was great. :)
The part that I really liked what how Edward still notices Bella. A lot. Even when he tries not to. The parts where he knows what color she wears to school, and who she talks to. It's brilliant.
I'm sad that this was a shorter chapter, because I'm so used to your longer ones! But I loved it. Can't wait for that next update!
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
Yeah! Finally at least we get a little eye contact between Edward & Bella - hopefully their short silent communication will encourage Edward not to give up on the idea of being with her again. Can't wait for what happens next between these two - please update soon! I love this story!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
So, losing Bella has given Edward some perspective on all other aspects of his life! I hope that his new leaf skills will be rewarded!
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
Aw, Prickward starting to soften up a little. It's always best to learn from your mistakes. Hopefully he'll get back on his way...and Bella will stop being so high and mighty.
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
I'm proud of Edward. He seems to be growing up a bit, finally, and realizing the truth of Carlisle's words.
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
This chapter was great! I loved the little push that Brian gave edward! That was awsome please update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
I just found this story today and I LOVE it!
Hope you update frequently.....
Reviewer: SamanthaH (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
Great job with this story. I'm loving anti-hero Edward! Your characters are interesting and flawed but still like-able and the plot line is nice and angsty but not melodramatic. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
Loved it! Brian will be really good for Edward ;)
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