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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
can't wait for more....these two are so cute....and its hilarious to me that edward is seriously afraid of charlie....
and the fight with rosalie and alice...OMG
can't wait for more
Author's Response: it's not so much that he's afraid of Charlie, but afraid of being separated from Bella...again.
Reviewer: Quinnlyn Kilara (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
Yum!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
I love this! Charlie is impeccable.
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
that was so sexy and sweet... I love that Bella and Edward are back and stronger than ever.
Rose got what she deserved - but I wonder what she's going to do to retailiate. She's pretty mean and friendship means nothing to her.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
Awesome chapter! I LOVE this story.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
Awww I just loved this chapter. All of the moments were so sweet
Charlie being a dad - let's face it Edward needed someone to put the fear of god in him, Bella should be respected and it's good that Edward is reminded of that.
Rosalie being put in her place - what is wrong with her? She is just miserable and feels like putting that misery with everyone else...
Finally - the intimacy with Edward and Bella - was SO SWEET! The looks we give our bf/gf/spouse is so between us and it's nice to see that Edward is getting that too!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
That was hot!!!*cold shower time*
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
haha, love that Charlie put the fear into Edward. She's so important to him, I can see how he would want to do whatever he can to stay in Charlie's good graces. However, I suspect that his teenage hormones are going to have something to say about that...
And go Alice! I hate that her friendship with Rosalie ended in physical violence, but girl had it coming.
Great update!
Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
Another stellar chapter.
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Physical Manifestations
It's so cute how Edward tries...he's really changed his ways... you really can tell. :D He's more patient, respectful, and the best thing is that is real... REAL change, not just some sleezy way to get into her pants. He wants to be a better man/boy for her. He even talked to Charlie of all things!!! And he didn't even snap...not once!!! :D I'm so proud!! **snif snif**
I love the dynamics between J/A and B/E, they are great together, and finally Alice gets her wish at double dating :) LOL
Poor Rosalie, I really pity her. Seeing everyone around her growing up, falling in love, and I feel she's the only one devolving. She's misguided in her affections, her attitude. The worse thing is that Alice wanted to reach out for her, maybe it was a little too late?? Yet, I don't think that's the last we'll be hearing from her. And I'm actually kind of scared, cos there may be, I think, 3 outcomes, the worst, self-destructives ways (as Emmett said), lashing out on others (worst than the prank she pulled on Bella) and, best case scenario, tries to compromise with them and finally! mature and regain their friendship.
Can't wait for more!! Thanx :D
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
i just can not wait for the next chapter this is on my top 5 stories to read
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Facing Changes
edward is growing up
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn
this was a good chapter
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Disclosures
go bella go bella go balla i hope alice and bella remain friends
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Learning to Inhale
Love your story! It gets more interesting every chapter! I kind of hoped that Bella would make Edward stop smoking though... I don't like the idea of Edward smoking, the smell... beurk!
Anyway, thanks for sharing and keep up the good job! :)
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Milestones
one of the best chapters i read so far
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Internet Instruction
very nice
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Questions & Answers
go edward go bella
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
i like it go jasper and edward is emmet it the story
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
Cant believe this story is almost done I just love what edward did for bella so sweet! He really did mature! YAY edward!!!!! Please update soon can't wait to see how the talk with charlie goes!!!!!!!
One question only did Edward call Carlisle dad on porpuse or did he just well say it i guess with out relising it? LOL
Author's Response: he said it without realizing it.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
Oooh. A cliff!! Update please!! :D
Reviewer: Flipper (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
I just found this fic today and I must say, I LOVE IT! The roller coaster ride you've put your readers through is just soooo good. I love the relationships and the angst and just everything about this fic. I know you said it's winding down....I just hope you still have a few chapters left in you. :) Update soon!!!
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
lol. at least edward and bella are back 2gether :p
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
Great update!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reinstated
Thanks for the new chapter! Loved it!
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