Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Assigned Seating
OH you poor thing! I always wonder if the stories when bella loses her virginity is the author's real experience.
Mine was uncomfortable but certainly not this painful horrid experiences that i've read and heard about :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Aww, Bella's first time was "memorable". Just not the way she envisioned it! Humiliating the night of AND the morning after! I love Edward's "patience"! He was very loving and understanding-even with the nicotine withdrawal. I can't wait to see what Carlisle has to say. I guess he must have forgotten what it's like to be 17!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Carlisle is such a drama queen. He knew it was gonna happen eventually. I really don't think it's a big deal that Edward and Bella had sex when they did. They saw a time where they could do it, alone and in a familiar setting and they took it. So what if his sister is going into surgery the following day? So freaking what? It's not like she has a deadly disease or anything. Dear Lord, Carlisle! Chill the fuck out man!
And Bella, you're such a whimp. Haha! It doesn't even hurt some people the first time! Also, dancers sometimes tear their hymens while dancing and don't even feel it. Or some girls will put tampons in too far. Imagine that. Losing your virginity to a tampon. That sucks.
~ B
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
hmmmm a very intriguing chapter!!!!
I wonder was this similar to your experience or rather research?
Author's Response: why yes it was...minus the successful third try...
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Loved the update, the first failed attempt was very realistic, great work!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
I'm really curious as to why there was pain upon urination. Is that normal for some? And the fact that it was still there the next morning--did she catch something from him (even though it just happened)? Please explain soon.
Author's Response: It is very normal to have pain on urination after the first time - and remember that this happened late at night and she'd only slept a few hours, so it wasn't a "day" later that it happened again, only a few hours later.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
It wasn't the ideal first time, but whose is? I'm a little worried about her symptoms though, that would kill! Maddie's illness was unexpected too.
Reviewer: bbness (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Functionally Illiterate
Really good so far. Just a note: you keep spelling the word "staring" as "starring"
I love the story so far. I like the dynamic between Jasper and Edward in regards to the Jasper and Alice relationship.
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Whoa that was awesome. I wonder how much trouble they are in.
Reviewer: edward0313 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
always look forward to each chapter.
Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Nice chapter. Update when you can. =]
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
that sounds about like my first time....yep yep...lol
can't wait for more
Reviewer: annettelovez (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
OUCH! -- all I gotta say.
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
OMG!! Poor Bella... traumatic, though wonderful the night was, being caught AND doing the walk of shame... perfect swallow-me-earth-I-beg-of-you moment... And it must be particularly horrifying to see Carlisle, of all people, mad as hell, cos he's usually so calm and collected...
Wonder if Carlisle is going to talk to Edward AND Bella... wonder what Edward's feeling right now. And I think what angers Carlisle the most, is that Maddie was sick and they took advantage of the situation.
I wonder if the abandoned condom is going to play some sort of part in the near future...
Poor poor Bella. I'm sure it won't put a damper on their relationship, but it must be one of those traumatizing, hard to forget, moments.
And I really have to praise you, cos that was one of the best and most realistic first time sex I've ever read!!
This was kinda a mini-cliffie... Can't wait for more!!
Thanx :D
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Yikes! So, thanks for giving Bella a realistic first time. So many other fanfics do not, and I think honesty is the best policy when it comes to this subject. I don't really have a problem with how they 'snuck around' or whatever. They took advantage of a situation that presented itself, which is what most teenagers do whenever they can. I can understand Carlisle's disappointment, but I have a feeling he's not going to go all caveman on them and forbid the relationship. He's already come to terms with it, but I think he'll be more insistent on 'rules'. Great update, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
oh wow they got caught not good, please update soon
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 30 - In the Pain of Pleasure
Another great chapter.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
Well done!!! Carlisle is so cool...
Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me
Came back after a holiday break of four weeks. FOUR WEEKS with no internet what so ever.. So no way to keep up with this fanfic. Now im sorta happy about that, because I'm a catching up kindof girl.. :D
I had enough faith in your taste to youtube the song and listen to it while reading the lyrics, and I was not wrong. The song is so beautiful it's still playing in the background.
So happy you had Brian help Edward out, even if I did love Jasper's advice.. :D
I'll go back to reading now, you go back to typing. ;)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
Awww. I just recently had the same feeling Bella did when she said 'I feel like an idiot' and as soon as the dude called me I started crying. Damn your good. Damn. Update! And please check out my story! Your opinion means a lot to me. :D
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
Ha ha ha that was so funny crack the windows cute. loved it love the story and will be looking for more!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
This chapter was great! Edward has really matured!!! Yay him!!!! Please please update soon!
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
i love this ,. honest . it's great .
Reviewer: belwardislove (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
pure.awesomeness. *sighs*
Reviewer: msrebarose (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Ready or Not
So worth the wait!
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